I really like your speech!! It was fun to follow your steps. You prepared a lot of props for audience. You showed your props for audience clearly. I think it was not easy during your speech but you did! However, you need to give a speech loudly and confidently. If you accept my advice, you will be able to give a speech better than before. I’m looking forward to your next speech! Go for it!
When you explained to us, you explained slowly and clearly, but the end, you did not have enough time. Your demonstration was very interesting, so you skipped the 3step was a pity(> <), so I think you had to put some papers and tolls on the table before you start demonstration. Next time, Let’s prepare tools before your speech.
I think in this time I focus a lot in idioms and the time, and I do it. I think I have ok props I spent more than 1 hour doing it so I try to do it well. My voice was much better, I think my hook also. Maybe not everyone understand me how to do it , because when I finish and I saw the cards wasn’t as I expected and also most of my classmates couldn’t finish.
I think my structure was ok but my conclusion was terrible I get confused and I forget what I have to say :(, even that I feel better than the first speech.
I really like your speech!! It was fun to follow your steps. You prepared a lot of props for audience. You showed your props for audience clearly. I think it was not easy during your speech but you did! However, you need to give a speech loudly and confidently. If you accept my advice, you will be able to give a speech better than before. I’m looking forward to your next speech! Go for it!
JayJaeyoungPark 1 month ago
Good job, Ana!
Your demonstration was very good.
When you explained to us, you explained slowly and clearly, but the end, you did not have enough time. Your demonstration was very interesting, so you skipped the 3step was a pity(> <), so I think you had to put some papers and tolls on the table before you start demonstration. Next time, Let’s prepare tools before your speech.
Thank you Ana!
s2pinkpetal 1 month ago
I think in this time I focus a lot in idioms and the time, and I do it. I think I have ok props I spent more than 1 hour doing it so I try to do it well. My voice was much better, I think my hook also. Maybe not everyone understand me how to do it , because when I finish and I saw the cards wasn’t as I expected and also most of my classmates couldn’t finish.
793Ana 1 month ago
I think my structure was ok but my conclusion was terrible I get confused and I forget what I have to say :(, even that I feel better than the first speech.
793Ana 1 month ago