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  • please read mine!

  • wow this was amazing! i read this in 3 days!! it would have been shorter if i didnt have school and i didnt have to sleep :P very very well done!! <3

  • Wow. this was so amazing and awesome!!! I LOVE happy endings! you have a ton of writing talent...:) I am so glad Nick and Sarah are back together and getting married!!!! :)

  • hI! I start a story

    called love is on it's way

    is about nick and you :D

    i hope you can read it or something x)

  • omg very beautiful! i luv it! i luv joe too!

  • Please make another one, I know all your friends would appreciate it! Maybe make a third, but with a different name? About Sheryll and Joes baby, Nick and Sarah's wedding, and Kevin, Sam and Kevin III's life. All of them over all.

  • AWHHHH!!! that was awesomee!!!! hah i lovee itt

  • Now im crying in a good way!!!! Thank you for writing this story it was wonderful, amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you shall make another series! well i g2g get a tissue:)!

  • OMJ!!!!! u should make more! this was too amazing! i luved it! i am like, just about to cry, i luv this! i want to kno if it was a boy or girly!!!! that sheryll has, but i probabily woun't that was awesome. u should make another series! :)

  • soooo i just read both COAJBLS and the sequel in like 3 days. they were super awesome. easily one of the best fanfics i've read, and i've read a lot. i really loved them. and i'm super glad it ended with joe and sheryll and not kevin and sheryll :]

    and yayyy for nick and sarah!!! and sam not being crazy anymore! woooo!

    great job :]

  • THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL SHERYLL ! (: YOU ARE SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER & I'M LIKE CRYING RIGHT NOW. (: i thought jeryll at first was never meant to be. ! but yes, i mean yay ! i mean hsjkhflkjsfhk! (: ohmydeargosh! (: well, i'm restarting the series again, your amazing. (: sjfhlkjsf! oh my gosh, it was hdsjfs. i can't even talk, (::: youuu my friend, are amazing

    <3hannamichelle

  • I just finished reading this series *tear tear* it was sooooo0ooooo cute. I'm almost crying. NICE JOB ON EVERYTHING!

  • oh,

    this..this is amazing.

    You should seriously make this into a book. Your very talented..

    I remember when this first came out. How I discovered fanfics...you inspired me to write too..man, those were the good old days. :]

    this just put a smile on my face..

  • OMG!!! GO GET THESE COPYRIGHTED AND PRINT THEM ALL OUT AND CALL A PUBLISHING COMPANY AND BRING THEM IN RIGHT NOW!!! you are an amazing writer!!!!

    ps: new chapters to your other series?? waiting!!

  • so, I don't usually read these things, but yours caught my eye and I fell in love with it! :) You should start the third one! I'd love to hear about Sheryll's baby and Nick and Sarah's married life! (And of course Kevin and Sam. They're so sweet.)

  • omfj i was crying soooo hard. you write really good. write more!!!!!

  • That was such a cute ending:) great job!

  • when are you going to pst a new chapter to the 'life lived life loved'???? i love that story!!!!!!!!

  • My god finally nick proposed

    Boss

    Love all yhuur series

    i wanna know wot happened at the wedding

  • this was a great series except for wen nick and sarah broke..ahh i luv happy endings!

  • OMG i loved ur serises plz make another on i got soooooooooooooooo hocked their amazing

  • ahh tht was AMAZING!!!! i LOVED your series!! :)

  • i cant belive it is over. I love the stories and now they are over and i have to find a different story. Meanie!

  • keep on writing more stories ur awesome!

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  • omj... this was amazing!! i read CRUISING ON A JONAS BROTHERS LOVE STORY and the sequel inlike a day and a half. i was hooked. please make another sequel!! :) i want to know what happens in the future! you are an awesomee writer! keep it up!

  • apparently every1 luvs this series, so could u plz, plz, PLZ write a second sequal about their future lives! i wanna know wat happens at nick and sarah's wedding!♥♥♥

    ~Hailey

  • Why is it over!?!?!?

    Did we upset you because if we did then we're all really sorry!!!

    Plz do another one!!!

    About all there futures!!!

    Because you know u can't just leave it as

    Nick:Sarah will u marry me???

    Sarah:YES!!!

    Because I wanna know what happens after that!!!

    And everyone else does too!!!

  • OMG YA that would be sooo awesome with like there future lives!! ahhh!!! i love this story...i think it would be LIKE AMAZING!! cuz we need to see sarah and nicks wedding also!!!

  • hey everyone! i have a new JB love story! it is on a diff. website though! plz check it out and tell me if u like it! go to my page and the address it the title thing to my info! plz check it out!

  • OMG im frican crying i just relized this today that this was the last one because i only read the seventh one of ur 7 chapters in a day soo im crying right now and its really upsetting: [

    but im glad for everyone....u should like get that story published

  • this is the end please no!!!!!!!!!!!

  • im not saying i dont like it..cuz i love this story..but is it getting to an end??or is this the ned??i just wnt to no

  • amazing story b ut the ending just kinda idk flew into it i juess idk it was great tho!

  • SHERYLL: He's the cutest baby boy I've ever seen.

    SAM: Thanks.

    JOE: Wait till you see the baby Sheryll's having.

    lol way to ruin the secret, joe. keep writing sheryll ur amazing!!!!

  • OMJ AMAZING please PLEASE PLEASE make like a second seual for when Sheryll has her baby and nik and sarah get married PLEASE! :D xx

  • I LOVED THIS SERIES!!!!!

    plzz write another one in the future about there future.

    ~Kirstie

  • Dude I am like crying right now!!!!!!!!!! I DON'T WANT IT TO END!!!! *SNIIIIIIIIF*

  • congrats on the ending..this was seriously a GREAT story! thank you for writing it! :D

  • OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!! I DIDNT WANT IT TO END! BUT ITS A HAPPY ENDING!! IM CRYING SO HARD RIGHT NOW!

    Ps- LOVE THE SONG!

  • aww you have to make some more so we can see like when Sheryll has her baby!!! when Nick and Sarah get married!!! omg every once in a while would be awesome if u made like a chapter just to tell how everything is going in COAJBLS!!!!! that would be like AWESOME!!!!!!!!

    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!?!?!?!?!!?! IT BE SOOOO AWESOME FOR UR FANS !!!!!!! MORE COAJBLS! PLZ PLZ PLZ???!!!!!!!

  • love it write a new like it!!!!

  • omg i love the ending lol

  • NICK: Maybe one day, Sarah and I will have a baby boy, and he'll be so much cuter than yours.

    KEVIN: Bring it on.

    SHERYLL: Hey Nick, did I just hear a proposal?

    [Everyone turned to look at Nick]

    NICK: Actually...

    NICK: Sarah, I promise to love you above everything else. Will you please marry me?

    SARAH: Yes!

    OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!! YAY!!!!!!

  • AMAZING!! I LOOOOOOOVED IT AND UR WHOLE SERIES RULES!! gr8 job ur such an amazing, inspiring writer. if i had more time, i'd probably keep going on, but i gotta go, so just gr8 job! loved the ending!! now everyones happy!!!!!! *keep writing, ur a natural!!* xoxo

  • haha ok so this was great it would be so funny if they ended up with all boy and they made a band and it was called cousin jonases

  • amazing!! im so sad they are over you are an amazing writer! and i loved the ending!!!

    mollie.

  • aaww loved it!!!!!!!!

    i wish there was another apilogue like a couple more years into the future to see what happens!!!

    but amazing!!!

  • i agree i wanna see what the kids would be like..hahaaha it would be funny if nick joe and kevin all had boys who made there own band called the jonas brothers...well theyd be cousins but oh well

  • then it would be jonas cousins... haha

  • omg i cant wait til the JBs start having kids.

  • keep going!!!

  • Amazing!! I can't believe this story is over :(

    This story was the reason I started writing JB fics

  • oh no

    my cusin

    married

    NICK!

    oh my gosh.

    hahaha. so in the story..i hope me and sarah arent cusins cus i'd probably hate her forever.

    lolol jkayy(:

  • lol. it'll just be you and me and some other person.. haha

    <3

  • so good

    yet so sad it's over

  • Thank God they all ended up with who they were supposed to be with. I was worried about Nick and Sarah there for a while! Great story. Loved it. Im sad its over!

  • ahah!my other comment was on the wrong page!i meant to do it on another story XD i'm so sad it's over!!could like wirte a threequel?is there such a thing?i want more!!

  • i can't belive it... it's over!!!

    *tears*

    But I still loved the ending!!!

  • wow.amazing.ypu should do another one so we can find out about sherylls baby and more about sarah and nick! these are amazing I wish they werent over!

  • i like it. could you do like one more thing. like a ten years in the future? just so we know what's goin on. i hope you make a new series tough. i looove your series soooo much.

  • im gonna miss this story u should make a threequel so then we can know evrything with sarah nd nick oh ya haow long have they been dating for before the proposal

  • nooo keep going lol

    i wanna know what happens with joe and sheryll and the baby

    and than nick and sarah ahh man =[[[ <3 lol

  • BEST.STORY.EVER!!

  • NOOOOOOO

    it's overrrr.

    WHYYYYY?!!!

  • it can't be over!!!

  • best story EVER!

    thanks for such an awesome story!

  • ahhhhhhh! that was amazing!!!!

  • Aww that was so cute!! This was the best fanfic ever!!!

  • AAHHH!

    hurry!!!

  • THAT WAS SO CUTE aww im sad this is over

    this is the first fan fic ive ever read

    and i started reading others and this is

    THE BEST of ALL time

    kudos. lol

  • aww its over =*(((

    but it was awesomee!!

  • Wow. That was definately the BEST story I've ever read on YouTube. I'm gonna miss it, but, hey, it has to end sometime. Thank you for writing it =)

  • i know u guys love jonas brothers love stories/ fan fics so can u check mines out thx if u do its just beginning

  • OMJ!!!!!! sheryll i luv this story always have & always will! it is without a doubt the BEST Youtube story on Youtube!!! u did end with a happily ever after!!! yay!!! soo sad its over but im happy it ended the way it did! THANK U 4 WRITING THIS FANTABULOUS STORY!!!!!!!!

  • you SUCK!

    kidding. (:

    but this was truthfully the best fanfic on the internet i've ever seen (and my friend and i read alike 100)

    now its OVER

    =(

    I cried all 7 chapters today.

    =)

    btdubbs, you are really an amazing writer! I wanna hear of you someday, sheryll!!

  • ok.... you officially suck, Sheryll!

    but i loved the series and... GRRR i'm mad that it's over!

  • OMG I'm seriously in tears this is the BEST story ever I,ve never read anything like it before now its over :(

  • is it really over??

    dont let it b over sheryll

    write more plz

    post more stories

    omj im crying

  • omj!!! aaahh!!

  • thattt..was...AMAZINGEWGJEIOGJ­IORGWJEIRFWEFM. wow. that was probably the best story i've ever read. <3 =]

  • oh crap iam stinkn crying i really loved your ending. i loved it. but i only have 417 words left so that was the best series ever you should really see about getting that published on day or even now.

  • wow my eyes were watering before i started reading i cant beleive its over. i think it would be great to write another one.

  • that was so awesome I like started crying at the end and my family just stared at me like I was crazy!

  • hayy!! we need more!! we need to know what happens with nick and sarahs wedding and sheryll an joes baby and nick and sarahs to see if its better then kevin and sam!! ahh it cant be ovverr

  • this is sooo cute! Please tell me there's a new serie. Whatever it is about, I can't wait for it! I know it's gonna be awesome!

  • omg i'm gunna cry this was like 1 of my fave stories and now its over!!!! darn lolz anywayz ur a great writer plz write more!

  • i cant believe its over ahhh this was wicked awesome!

  • OMJ!!

    I cant believe its relly over over.

    Imma goin to miss it so much.

    I love it thast sarah and nick are getting married.

    Im cryin right now since its over.

    :(

    Write more please relly soon.OK!!!

  • I LOVE IT. but i can't believe it's over ALREADY. :[

  • OHHHH MYYY GODDDDD

    i am going to miss this series so effing much. it was AMAZING. i can't say anything more than that, 'cause i'm at a loss for words. it was SO amazing, i can't fathom how amazing it was :D

    i loved it, right from the start!

    i can't wait till you post a new series.

  • awesome story!!!

  • wonderful <3

  • this was the best most amazing

    series i have ever read

    your stories made me cry lol

    made me happy

    made me laugh

    and made me think sometimes

    your such an azmeing writer

    the day you write a book ill be sure to be the 1st one to bye lol

  • That was amazing i hope you start another series

  • pleeeeeeeeeeeasssssssssssseeee­eeeeeee write more!!!!!!!!

  • aww i love it!

  • haha i lovethis series and can't believe it's over :[

  • you should like make a book of jonas love storys this was an amazing story i loved it

  • OMJ

    I think this might be the best fanfic i have ever read!

    Actually, i'd say it is!

    U r an amazing writer

    Thanks for the joy, the tears, and the laughs! u really have to make a new JB one cause this one was way beyond awesome! Loved it from the start, and definatly wont forget it!

    Sorry to sound mushy but i mean it's really true.

    COAJBLS 4EVA!!!

  • thanks really.. i'm glad everyone liked it

    <3

  • that was MIND-BLOWING AMAZING ENDING! very nice!

  • okay seriously.

    you have'ta make a sequel to the sequel!

  • aww that was the best ending ever!!!!!!!

    and coajbls was awesome

    you are a wonderful author and im gonna miss the story!!!!!!!!

  • aw

    Well

    Thnx for the laughs, tears, everything! I'm really gonna miss this fanfic, it's the only one that hit me the way it did. Thanks again!

  • I'm gonna miss this soooo much!!!!!!!!!! can you please post a new story about the JB? Cuz this one was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • lol i love the competiton.

    love the story ending. your a very talented writer!

  • Great story!!

    I have loved it since the start!! I think I am going to miss reading it!! I LOVED IT!!!

  • Just wanted to say thx i guess for a wonderful series. u've kept us on the edge, made us cry but it was all good. Thx for the happy ending as well. XOXO

  • I am going to miss this stories.

    Great ending. i crying right know.

    i love this stories!

    You are GREAT writer.:)

  • i loved it i will going t miss this series:D:D

  • that was a funny ending

  • OMG it was awesome and very emotional

    i was on the verge of crying

    i'm really gonna miss this *sniff*

    LOL

  • Soooo good and cute and lovely and perfect and adorable and... *Sighs* it's all over... haha please, feel free if someday when you're bored to write a few blurbs that you think of, of what happened in those couple years you skipped! ;) Loved it... Loved it.. Loved it!

  • aw ima miss this sooooooooooooo much

  • OMG! So good your an amazing writer! I hope you get published some day!

    So glad their back together and getting married!! Its a wonderful happy ending! Kevin3 i knew it! looks like Nick had competiton with Kids now! lol

  • AMAZING!!! That was just so awesome! I cryed a lot, and I'm not that emotional.....ok that was a lie, but this was just soooooo good!! I loved it!! Kevin III is going to be one of the cutest babies alive, well. fictional baby anyways, Joe and Sherylls will be even more adorable and Nick and Sarahs will be just plain beautiful!!! I LOVED IT!!

  • I just wanted to say thanks for posting all of these chapters today....I really needed to get away from my little sister's b-day party!!! I'm so sad that it's over because I really enjoyed it. It was actully my way for getting away from everyone else in the world. So once again...thanks!

  • aww im gunna miss this! great ending

  • Luv it!!!!!

  • AHH! im so happy that Nick and Sarah are a couple again and getting married!! thats so great i loved them together!!! great series sheryll, i really loved it a lot!!! you are a great writer and i hope you write more! :D

  • ahhhhhh i'm so sad it's over!!!

    Now I have to find a new jonas series.

    nah. none will be as addicting as this.

    what a depressing thought.

  • this comment made me laugh.. but i don't want you getting depressed..

    <3

  • you should continue with this still everyone loves it!

  • i would.. but i think it's time for a new story

    <3

  • finally..

  • ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh­hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh­hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh­hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!­!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!

  • Aww, I loved it!! You rock at writing!! Seriously!! But can you please, please, please, write another jb series!!

  • OMJ

    YEAH!

    Kevin 3rd lol

    awesome-ness

  • AH it's amazing!

  • omg im like crying...not happy tears, sad tears..its over!!! omg...

  • SOOO GOOD!!

    i LOVED LOVED LOVED your series

    and i read EVERY chapter :)

    im sooo sad that its over,

    but i guess it had to end sometime :(

    can't wait for your new series!

  • LOVED IT!!!! best series i have ever read rlly good job =D

  • LOVE IT!!!!

    but what happens with Nick and sarah??

  • omg! happiest ending ever! omg! i love you !lolxz! im like balling rite now!!!!!!!

  • :O YAYAYAYAYAYYAAYAYYAYA!!!!!!!!!

    BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!

    :'''D

    YES!

    I'm sad that you ended it, but I'm happy you're gonna continue writing :]

    Nice job Sheryll

  • aww soo cutte

    i love it!!!

    cant wait till next

  • awesome ending!!!! and finally nick and sarah are together...lol

    Great job!!! :)

  • YES!!! that was just PERFECT!!

  • omg i loved it dont tell me thats the end there has 2 b mre please please please

  • aww 1st veiw luved it =)

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