The musical parts were great, but some scenes were not funny. Forgive me for the rather harsh rating :(
I suggest that you include scenes that are straight to the point, scenes that will make someone laugh instantly without ever needing to think about it.
Anyway this is your first comedy vid and I hope to see improvements soon. This is also what i've experienced when i made my first vid. That's ok. Just work harder. Oh, and watch more funny Lara Croft vids! Good Luck!
The musical parts were great, but some scenes were not funny. Forgive me for the rather harsh rating :(
I suggest that you include scenes that are straight to the point, scenes that will make someone laugh instantly without ever needing to think about it.
Anyway this is your first comedy vid and I hope to see improvements soon. This is also what i've experienced when i made my first vid. That's ok. Just work harder. Oh, and watch more funny Lara Croft vids! Good Luck!
vmj51 3 years ago