TEITO MONOGATARI (帝都物語) Manga Adaptation Part 1

[Georgiacatcrimson]

Wow, who would've thought Tatsumiya and Narutaki switched appearences?

[aznricekracker]

@Georgiacatcrimson

LOL. I know...this totally threw me off at first.

[aznricekracker]

I added a couple more small translations using OCR and a couple of internet translators. Obviously they aren't very good and I'm skeptical if I got the meaning right or not. If I was really unsure of a phrase, I put down (???) to show it.

Any Chinese readers out there...your input would be greatly appreciated!

[SpongeBobeeshia1991]

I lol'd at Yukari thinking Kato was handsome and then following him around in the next few scenes. Villains are always creepier when they pretend to be nice.

[aznricekracker]

@SpongeBobeeshia1991

My contact in Japan told me that they're actually going on a DATE in that scene!! Kato actually took her out to see a Kabuki play!

[SpongeBobeeshia1991]

@aznricekracker

A date?! Oh man, that is too good! I was not expecting that!

After watching Doomed Megalopolis, it's difficult to imagine Kato spending his time doing anything normal and not utterly sinister. Although, it makes sense for him to pretend to be interested in Yukari so he could use her for his own goals.

[aznricekracker]

@SpongeBobeeshia1991

You're right! Like I said before, Kato is a clever bastard...

This actually makes him even more despicable (I think) because it means he's betraying the trust of a family who consider him a friend.

BTW, can you please give me some feedback on how I put this together? Are the pictures moving too slow for those who can't read the text? Should I speed them up or put in two panels per page? I'm getting ready to do the next part, so I'd like to know what changes to make.

[SpongeBobeeshia1991]

@aznricekracker

I think you did a very good job putting this video together. For me, the pictures move at just the right pace. Even though I can't read the text, I do like to look at the actual pictures themselves (taking an Asian art history course will do that to you). I'd keep it at one panel per page, because otherwise things might look crammed.

[aznricekracker]

@SpongeBobeeshia1991

Thanks! Even though this takes longer, I still like adding these enhancements. Like I said in the description, I hate it when people just play a bland slideshow of scanned pages on Youtube without any accompaniment. I think videos should provide audio as well as visual stimulation

Yeah, if I could read Chinese or if OCR wasn't such a hassle to deal with, I would provide translations throughout the whole video. Alas...maybe in time...

I'll have the next part up ASAP.

[mattiathekaiju]

Where did you find it?

[aznricekracker]

@mattiathekaiju

From a Japanese manga website. Somebody had uploaded the whole thing there. I can't find it now for some reason (I guess it got taken off).