The music didnt go with the action in the story. I mean the song is exhilerating, but what is so exhilerating about a girl walking up the stairs. It has good camera angles, and good acting, but the rest was terrible. But this was made in '94, Im sure you can do better these days.
Thanks for watching it, and for your comment! We made this film in 1994, which is now 13 years ago, so it was very early stuff for me. Watch my film The Bull! Episode 2, or The Making of Sweet Stained, to see how far I've come! :o)
Thanks for watching it, and for your comment! We made this film in 1994, which is now 13 years ago, so it was very early stuff for me. Watch my film The Bull! Episode 2, or The Making of Sweet Stained, to see how far I've come! :o)
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Wow. MAN was that stupid. What are all you people raving about?!! That was uber crap. Boooooring! and cheezy. The title at the begginning was the last part of this vid that was any good.
Why didn't she just kick him in the nuts! That groaning on the ground period would probably last the duration of the elevator ride, where she could take off running from there! But... maybe she did! I guess I'll never know. Anyway, nice little video, I enjoyed it. The dancing part was a little strange, but different. =) Nice job
I disagree, the dancing thing was good. a little surreal moment. A nice start, I'll watch more of your stuff. Have a look at mine, this one is a third of a thing that took me AGES to edit. Very few people like it.. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PSa7LYQb_vQ
Thanks for your comment! Please keep in mind I shot this twelve years ago, so it is very, VERY early work for me! Some of the camera angles are tilted deliberately, not all shots need to be measured with a spirit level, you know! I've developed a lot since then, as you can see from some of the other videos on my YouTube page. I just thought it would be fun to let people compare my films for themselves. I am still very proud of this film!
The music didnt go with the action in the story. I mean the song is exhilerating, but what is so exhilerating about a girl walking up the stairs. It has good camera angles, and good acting, but the rest was terrible. But this was made in '94, Im sure you can do better these days.
SteveSpieldberg360 3 years ago
*****
dcuk9 4 years ago
BORING............
mdifoggio 4 years ago
So was your character after the wooden spoon?
WOMCProductions 4 years ago
I'm not entirely sure! We kinda ad-libbed the whole thing hehe
Ron :o)
ronstirling 4 years ago
Hey, that was cool... definitely enjoyed it.
mlesrad 4 years ago
i dont quite know what to say about this film, it is quite a typical sort of student film, nevertheless good effort! Keep it up!
scottmu65 4 years ago
Thanks for watching it, and for your comment! We made this film in 1994, which is now 13 years ago, so it was very early stuff for me. Watch my film The Bull! Episode 2, or The Making of Sweet Stained, to see how far I've come! :o)
ronstirling 4 years ago
Thanks for watching it, and for your comment! We made this film in 1994, which is now 13 years ago, so it was very early stuff for me. Watch my film The Bull! Episode 2, or The Making of Sweet Stained, to see how far I've come! :o)
ronstirling 4 years ago
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tibaiko 4 years ago
That was pretty good, it built nicely.
BadAlbert 5 years ago
Omgz! I Love this! it's so awsome :O! lmao ahh 1994. . . X-x Oh yea cant remeber it since i was only waaaaaaaay young X_X
JadenPrinceton 5 years ago
loved it u rolkkkk
untitled101 5 years ago
was this made in teh 80s
tylersall 5 years ago
like the video but love the song from shopping movie...sweet. From your bro stevo!
f2theubu 5 years ago
not sure whats trying to be achieved, but boy can those two dance.
Brittonator 5 years ago
Wow. MAN was that stupid. What are all you people raving about?!! That was uber crap. Boooooring! and cheezy. The title at the begginning was the last part of this vid that was any good.
EnigmaV8 5 years ago
like it allot, and I go to glasgow a bit, if you have a chance check out the vid of old people doing ballet ont the streets of Newcastle
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pe2_ixh1H90
antnhec 5 years ago
I agree with LadyBurn about the dancing. But, I have to say, it still made me laugh considering it was a chase scene! I enjoyed it.
sayrahsayrah 5 years ago
music does not fit
PaWBenG 5 years ago
Yeah I know, but as I said this is a very early work from me, I was quite young when I made it!
ronstirling 5 years ago
ok I understand but the music makes me laugh :D ..
PaWBenG 5 years ago
nice film for an early short,I think you can go far with acting and directing
brandon754 5 years ago
Thanks! That's very kind. Hey maybe I'll do a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles video soon for ya! xxx
ronstirling 5 years ago
Why didn't she just kick him in the nuts! That groaning on the ground period would probably last the duration of the elevator ride, where she could take off running from there! But... maybe she did! I guess I'll never know. Anyway, nice little video, I enjoyed it. The dancing part was a little strange, but different. =) Nice job
Tynave 5 years ago
I think it was good. The only thing that I did not like about it was the dancing thing. It kinda ruined the suspense mood that you set.
LadyBum 5 years ago
I disagree, the dancing thing was good. a little surreal moment. A nice start, I'll watch more of your stuff. Have a look at mine, this one is a third of a thing that took me AGES to edit. Very few people like it.. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PSa7LYQb_vQ
tobyyarwood 5 years ago
Can't think of one good thing about it
perlgoodies 5 years ago
Ah well, that's cool, everyone is entitled to their own opinion! We still had a lot of fun making it!! :o)
ronstirling 5 years ago
Not bad^^ :D
Enemycraft 5 years ago
Good stuff Ron. I've added you to the <a href="http://www.ukfilm.tv">UKFilm.TV</a> group.
uktheatre 5 years ago
Still good, something different, better than some of the other crraap that's on youtube, if you know what I mean.
Dincht2006 5 years ago
:s booring, to many walking :S, and the camera positions are not good, but the idea is good
ZlatniBiHLjiljan 5 years ago
Thanks for your comment! Please keep in mind I shot this twelve years ago, so it is very, VERY early work for me! Some of the camera angles are tilted deliberately, not all shots need to be measured with a spirit level, you know! I've developed a lot since then, as you can see from some of the other videos on my YouTube page. I just thought it would be fun to let people compare my films for themselves. I am still very proud of this film!
ronstirling 5 years ago
wow, this film spent ages in post! ;)
Irnhorn 5 years ago
Ha! You're one to talk! lol When does Sweet Stained come out then... 2015? :op
ronstirling 5 years ago
kwl! :D
Dexterboy124 5 years ago