English wasn't so horrible in this one (comparing to your previous videos), but voice acting is damn lame, no offence, but you how you act questions, exlimations, serious lines is unspeakably bad.. Story line is pretty fine, some places it's bit lacking and gets boring (also any kind of background (not music, just ambience) would be nice addition)(and all stuff is pretty slow aswell). I've seen smoother movement in gmod, you shall bit practice on that also.. I think this vid is less that avagre.
Second sentence said that I have problems w/ question mark, and that's damn offensive. Nvm, acting(kinda accent) sounds pretty lame/gay(specialy parts where you try to make diffirent voices, as diffirent people) sound wierd of too high, or too low pitch as for normal voice). Pronouncation is not bigest problem, for example when you say "food" at 2:57, it sounds as "foot".If this vid is supposted to have jokes, then they're for 8 years olds.I'm not big fan of gmod, so I have nothing good to say.
How does a raped monkey stay exactly? :D
TheLOLzilla 4 months ago in playlist More videos from Firmar94
2 years and he still dident create part 2 omg
SadTheWolfThing 1 year ago
U KIDDING ME? U HAVE GMOD NOW?!
Sinbad116 2 years ago
hey Firmar,if you need voices,contact me
Koopaboy 3 years ago
K thx.I will :P
Firmar94 3 years ago
WOW!
This is the best machinima you ever made!
Anyway, I think you should make some ZDoom machinimas with some friends of yours!
SamuraiClinton 3 years ago
Hehe thanks :) ...I am working on something ...Well Now I am working on script.
Firmar94 3 years ago
Nice one :)
x2500000 3 years ago
English wasn't so horrible in this one (comparing to your previous videos), but voice acting is damn lame, no offence, but you how you act questions, exlimations, serious lines is unspeakably bad.. Story line is pretty fine, some places it's bit lacking and gets boring (also any kind of background (not music, just ambience) would be nice addition)(and all stuff is pretty slow aswell). I've seen smoother movement in gmod, you shall bit practice on that also.. I think this vid is less that avagre.
StAnger1xD 3 years ago
I still have no idea what's your problem with "VOICE ACTING".I think your problem is grammar,pronunciation and accent,right ?
Firmar94 3 years ago
Second sentence said that I have problems w/ question mark, and that's damn offensive. Nvm, acting(kinda accent) sounds pretty lame/gay(specialy parts where you try to make diffirent voices, as diffirent people) sound wierd of too high, or too low pitch as for normal voice). Pronouncation is not bigest problem, for example when you say "food" at 2:57, it sounds as "foot".If this vid is supposted to have jokes, then they're for 8 years olds.I'm not big fan of gmod, so I have nothing good to say.
StAnger1xD 3 years ago
Say "HELLO to CZ accent :P"
Firmar94 3 years ago