We can't..*A Jemi Serise*

[snowyangel97]

Omgosh please make it! U got me hooked on alllll ur series that i've read, ur amazing!! Do u know when this one is gonna be out ??? Xo

[XxlyricxprincessxX]

i love it! 

[samanthalearley]

need moreeeee

[Rockrgirl1517]

really like it [; amazinqq writer,

still cant wait for midniqht secret.

<33 love it [;

[jonash12341]

wow

breath taking

u have to make it

i am always impressed in ur stories and i will always support you

[paramrefreak101]

can't wait post soon

wat song is this i really like it?!

is it nickelback or someone rock punk?

[SlippedAway123]

@paramrefreak101 the group is theory of a deadman..The song is called not meant to be...Its one of my favorite song

[jemiorpikislover]

OMG....this is so amazing. . . :D you must MAKE IT:D

[PoptropicaSecrets888]

OMG! this looks so AMAZING! can't wait!! :D

[sourgirl98765]

It seems to have a lot of potential, but it seems a bit narrow-minded and the plot needs needs improvement.. A good plot has to be at least 2 paragraphs to summarize; but this one can be explained in a few sentences.

A girl called Nikki moves into a new town and falls in love with her teacher at first sight, although she is with Jack. After Derek gets hints that Nikki likes him, he starts to feel the same. Jack kidnaps Nikki and it's up to Derek to rescue her.

Rating: 6.4

[monikitaelsalvador]

@sourgirl98765 are you some kinda evaluator ???

[sourgirl98765]

@monikitaelsalvador You could say that.

[Dluvatoluva1179]

this was rly gud cant wait!