Hey, I checked your video and it looks awesome! I was wondering, I have never done a machinima before and I thought it would be kind of cool to be in one, got any need for back up crew like a pilot or maybe a soilder of some sort?
@odstrooper117 i would love to have you help but it is not at all my machinima i would have to ask my associates if it would be ok but i can still be your friend on XBL
@LBOGaming Well, I wouldn't take a major part but I have real life acting expierence and I have a Skype account. I mean, I don't need to voice but I could fly you guys around in the Falcon : )
made the Commanding officer of that unit sound like a brat. You should've said "71st" (by the way what the fuck do you meant by 71st as in squad, platoon, company, battalion, whatever you should definitely include the unit structure name after 71st) being deployed immediately, standby for new orders" or something like that. But long story short, anyways this is just a teaser so I hope the machinima you guys are making will be much better.
Ok you want my feedback so I'm gonna give you the truth. Note that I'm a very hardcore fucking critic so its near impossible to impress me but I'm pretty sure no one here gives a shit so hear goes my analysis. Beginning you should've made the whole thing your dialogues nothing borrowed except the music, thats exceptional. And the part where you said "Fine, send in the 71st" sounded really weird. I'm in jr military so i know how shits supposed to sound. Saying "fine"
it has potential but my feedback is basically the same as the other comments, however im going to say this with good script writing and innovative story telling you could pull this off in any location in halo.
Thanks for the heads up ill be sure to keep an eye out for part 1 - good job
I'm hoping that what we just saw was NOT the base you have planned for the series...if it is, I have serious concerns regarding quality and effort put into this.
Agree with the comment regarding text. Not exactly a dramatic font choice.
Another thing. This trailer really just used Reach cutscenes, and one shot from forge world. I suggest adding a little more of your own work to the trailer.
You don't mean the the 71st airborne do you?
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PastranaDude199 1 month ago 2
Hey, I checked your video and it looks awesome! I was wondering, I have never done a machinima before and I thought it would be kind of cool to be in one, got any need for back up crew like a pilot or maybe a soilder of some sort?
odstrooper117 1 month ago
@odstrooper117 i would love to have you help but it is not at all my machinima i would have to ask my associates if it would be ok but i can still be your friend on XBL
LBOGaming 1 month ago
@LBOGaming Well, I wouldn't take a major part but I have real life acting expierence and I have a Skype account. I mean, I don't need to voice but I could fly you guys around in the Falcon : )
odstrooper117 1 month ago
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ok the Chief's watching
ljf3 1 month ago
it looks pretty good but by the teaser, it looks like the forge should be better
eleportso1221 1 month ago
very interesting but not enough info even for a teaser
uberninja228 1 month ago
made the Commanding officer of that unit sound like a brat. You should've said "71st" (by the way what the fuck do you meant by 71st as in squad, platoon, company, battalion, whatever you should definitely include the unit structure name after 71st) being deployed immediately, standby for new orders" or something like that. But long story short, anyways this is just a teaser so I hope the machinima you guys are making will be much better.
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ACCFJeremiah 2 months ago
Ok you want my feedback so I'm gonna give you the truth. Note that I'm a very hardcore fucking critic so its near impossible to impress me but I'm pretty sure no one here gives a shit so hear goes my analysis. Beginning you should've made the whole thing your dialogues nothing borrowed except the music, thats exceptional. And the part where you said "Fine, send in the 71st" sounded really weird. I'm in jr military so i know how shits supposed to sound. Saying "fine"
ACCFJeremiah 2 months ago
its just a teaser, so i cant say much
NoMoreNiceGuy1 2 months ago
épic history.
TheFred128 2 months ago
it has potential but my feedback is basically the same as the other comments, however im going to say this with good script writing and innovative story telling you could pull this off in any location in halo.
Thanks for the heads up ill be sure to keep an eye out for part 1 - good job
MrAramantha 2 months ago
pretty good
ArcticInfinity 2 months ago
I'm hoping that what we just saw was NOT the base you have planned for the series...if it is, I have serious concerns regarding quality and effort put into this.
Agree with the comment regarding text. Not exactly a dramatic font choice.
Another thing. This trailer really just used Reach cutscenes, and one shot from forge world. I suggest adding a little more of your own work to the trailer.
RedbirdxStudios 2 months ago
Use better text. Big plain white 2D text isn't really setting the mood.
Nowise10 2 months ago
epic
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