This really sounds like a somewhat gentle blizzard. Did you write this? I love Debussy, and it has tonal characteristics like some of his pieces. Thank you for sharing this.
You quantized it. Qauntizing turns any and all music into a stinking dead mass of _____. The rhythm is so precise the music does not naturally breath. The music sounds like a half-breed of early Debussy and new-age. The configurations are pretty cliche and the repeated vertical chords in the left hand for a measure or two sound like a fill-in for something that eluded you. I found it to dull to listen through, as brief as it is.
Not having a go but...less motifs, more repetition. Loved measures 11 -14... was waiting for them to come back :(. In fact I like a lot of your motifs but I need a stronger sense of structure
This really sounds like a somewhat gentle blizzard. Did you write this? I love Debussy, and it has tonal characteristics like some of his pieces. Thank you for sharing this.
elshaddai87 2 months ago
@elshaddai87
actually, that's exactly what I intended it to sound like- a blizzard.
CBasie2856 2 months ago
You quantized it. Qauntizing turns any and all music into a stinking dead mass of _____. The rhythm is so precise the music does not naturally breath. The music sounds like a half-breed of early Debussy and new-age. The configurations are pretty cliche and the repeated vertical chords in the left hand for a measure or two sound like a fill-in for something that eluded you. I found it to dull to listen through, as brief as it is.
MuseDuCafe 4 months ago
Incredible dear. :)
marieexcore 11 months ago
Not having a go but...less motifs, more repetition. Loved measures 11 -14... was waiting for them to come back :(. In fact I like a lot of your motifs but I need a stronger sense of structure
JohnnySegment86 11 months ago
@JohnnySegment86
There is no structure in this one, there are no repeats. If I did a repeat, it wouldn't sound right and it wouldn't sound the way I wanted it to.
Also check out the digital piano version of this piece, it sounds A LOT better.
If you want more repetition, check out my Invention No.1 Sheet music and the digital piano version of that one.. There is more form in that piece.
CBasie2856 11 months ago