your projection could use some work :O like you're voice is really nice buut you aren't singing from your chest annnd maybe if you tried breathing from your diaphragm too it would help you sustain your notes and not be so short on breath to where you end up singing a little choppy almost? yuuup i got the staccato feel a few times in the song so yeah breath support projection and a better mic :D then remake this video for the 3rd time and you will be my hero >:D
not bad, but you have to make sure when you breathe that you do it and go. You are taking too long to breathe and it is making your pick up notes drag. Other than that rear back and belt it you have a really nice voice just need a little more air support. This will also bring your pitch up.
@WorkerofLight18 search for "Fields of Hope" its a song by Rie Tanaka, original Lyrics are in japanese, and it is part of the Gundam SEED Destiny Anime Soundtracks.
I want to hear about your version of it... see you!!
Yeah I'm sorry, but I had a very hard time listening to this. You really need to work on where you place your consonants and vowels. Many of the vowels were extremely bright making this 'ee' sound. And then you'd shut off the sound such as when you said "winter" or a "single" prayer in a melody. Sorry, but this needs a ton of work. You have a nice voice, but the phrasing killed it. :(
As for your mic, I would recommend backing off from it or it's going to pick up every huff & puff. A better mic would help, but learning how to use what you have & mess with your vocal levels in audio is the trick. Also, projection of your voice will compensate for the distance to an extent. Find what works & go the extra mile to help make yourself sound the best you can.
Best to you on your future projects & kudos for singing this. =]
I agree, but all he really needs is a pop filter that goes over the mic. It makes sure that the breathing and stuff doesn't get picked up like that. They're really cheap too. You could even make one. Just wire framing and something like women's pantyhose stretched over it.
Hey there. I don't have your 1.0v to compare to, so I'll be focusing only on this.
I liked your feel & emotion that you maintained throughout. I would have liked to hear a bit more energy, but it was good for this song. Having dropped down an octave to fit your range, it seemed like you were struggling throughout, esp. on lower parts. Very hard to hear you at times, & I would work on your breath control to hold out notes longer & maintain long strings of words. Still good work on this. =]
your projection could use some work :O like you're voice is really nice buut you aren't singing from your chest annnd maybe if you tried breathing from your diaphragm too it would help you sustain your notes and not be so short on breath to where you end up singing a little choppy almost? yuuup i got the staccato feel a few times in the song so yeah breath support projection and a better mic :D then remake this video for the 3rd time and you will be my hero >:D
littlelilisayuri 8 months ago
You have a gorgeous voice~ And a really nice sense of music and tone too. I like it. And I highly recommend the Samson C01U Studio Condenser Mic.
PrincessLelouch 11 months ago
you have a beautiful voice. i would love to hear more.
mechivett 1 year ago
...can I marry your voice *-*
animefangirlxx 1 year ago
not bad, but you have to make sure when you breathe that you do it and go. You are taking too long to breathe and it is making your pick up notes drag. Other than that rear back and belt it you have a really nice voice just need a little more air support. This will also bring your pitch up.
xxxsexypandaxxx 1 year ago
Really fantastic
I could never sing as u can
just the mic picks up ur breathing other than that ur the best male I've heard singing fields of hope
do u think u can do meteor and where did u get all the pics
Blastunaruto 1 year ago
were did you find this song? I want to sing it I am a High Tenor Tho
WorkerofLight18 1 year ago
@WorkerofLight18 search for "Fields of Hope" its a song by Rie Tanaka, original Lyrics are in japanese, and it is part of the Gundam SEED Destiny Anime Soundtracks.
I want to hear about your version of it... see you!!
TomcatVF001 1 year ago
Yeah I'm sorry, but I had a very hard time listening to this. You really need to work on where you place your consonants and vowels. Many of the vowels were extremely bright making this 'ee' sound. And then you'd shut off the sound such as when you said "winter" or a "single" prayer in a melody. Sorry, but this needs a ton of work. You have a nice voice, but the phrasing killed it. :(
finalfantasygirl09 1 year ago
Well done bravo i blame the mic for messing it up your singing was great well done
coriantor 2 years ago
josh groban would make a very nice(if not the best) rendition of this song. 4.98/5
ponkadolz 2 years ago
I definitely think you did the best male version. the mic may have gotten in the way, but i can tell your voice is really nice.
XEvanRainX 2 years ago
As for your mic, I would recommend backing off from it or it's going to pick up every huff & puff. A better mic would help, but learning how to use what you have & mess with your vocal levels in audio is the trick. Also, projection of your voice will compensate for the distance to an extent. Find what works & go the extra mile to help make yourself sound the best you can.
Best to you on your future projects & kudos for singing this. =]
= Ramune
AngelSakka 2 years ago 5
I agree, but all he really needs is a pop filter that goes over the mic. It makes sure that the breathing and stuff doesn't get picked up like that. They're really cheap too. You could even make one. Just wire framing and something like women's pantyhose stretched over it.
animefreek4lyfe 2 years ago
Don't even need to do that, just tilt the microphone out of the breathing area.
DentinDaHero 2 years ago
Hey there. I don't have your 1.0v to compare to, so I'll be focusing only on this.
I liked your feel & emotion that you maintained throughout. I would have liked to hear a bit more energy, but it was good for this song. Having dropped down an octave to fit your range, it seemed like you were struggling throughout, esp. on lower parts. Very hard to hear you at times, & I would work on your breath control to hold out notes longer & maintain long strings of words. Still good work on this. =]
AngelSakka 2 years ago
great job on version 1.5! ^_^ i hope you will continue with this great work! ^_^
sugarsweet33 2 years ago
Wtf! Van can sing?
Jamora 2 years ago