tag rap

[rttallie]

VERY CREATIVE delivery and the glasses are a great touch i think this is my favorite so far lyrically i like how you used the same words but in different ways

[dashpoet]

I just grab some words and I'm ready to go! Thanks again for leaving a comment, good to hear your reaction.

[SlantyDragon]

I love this video!!

If only there was a beat in the video to go along with the rap :D

[dashpoet]

I think it does fit to a rap beat, I'm afraid imagination will have to do for now though. Thanks anyway!

[nafisaahmedidotcom]

D*TO THA* A* TO THA *SH* POET HA! i luv it!! had to favourite this one, would you mind if i post this to my twitter? :-)

[dashpoet]

If you think people would like it - please do. Thanks for your encouragement, nafisaahmedidotcom!

[BahenaD]

I LOVE IT DASHPOET!!! Ur Great.

[dashpoet]

Fantastic comment to come home to! Thank you.

[MaNiAk559]

that was good.

but you were supposed to use the beat LOL.

with 16 bars.

it was a good poetry though =]

[dashpoet]

Thanks MaNiAk. You'll have to imagine the beat I'm afraid - I tried and failed to download the Bomber track. Not sure if I could have scanned the words, but I would have tried! Cheers!

[MaNiAk559]

hmmm....idk why it would do that... i mean look at how many people were in the cypher and downloaded it.

oh well though huh? lol

[shapeofabox]

that was so much fun! :)

[dashpoet]

Good to hear - thanks very much.

[dashpoet]

hmm

[violetparme]

great! I can give you my ears alright!

[dashpoet]

.. just to borrow for a while perhaps!

[maninwhitedress]

ha ha Oddly ended.

[dashpoet]

It had to stop somehow...

[JillsTruth]

OMG that is brilliance!

Please keep it up!

Many blessings to you xxx

[dashpoet]

As my Aunt used to say - just a bit of fun!

Thanks for your comment.

[MarasVeil]

d to the a to the sh poet

you're in your own league

and everybody know'it

Did I just say that ?

No... it was the newt with the black hat.

(Oh heavens... please stop this!)

[dashpoet]

M a to the r to the a s Veil

have you been at the old wassail?

Newts indeed, dapper dressed in hat -

the Action Manifesto is the place for that!

x

[MarasVeil]

I tell you...it WAS the newt.

You are brilliant! Just thought I'd give you a little upper crusty trouble. Perhaps I shall write a sonnet or ode to the romantic poet's response to the new-fangled anti-poetry.

Anne's Shadow

[MarasVeil]

I decided to remove that tongue-in-cheek half-sonnet (though you were witty and brilliant enough to understand the humor) as I would not want to unwittingly cause confusion of intent.

The Newt

[lochness11]

Definitely 5* ! Thanks.

[dashpoet]

Certainly a pleasure - thank you!

[HalooftheMuse]

A veritable treasure of RAPartee... my favorite: "Dashian fashioned from the old stockpile"! 5*****

[dashpoet]

A line that bears rapeating? You honour me good sir.

[superdooperstupor]

O, man of white and ageing middling his craic buttering with syllabing. Dare his rhyming words offend and risk be dissed to power of ten. Fortune Wood you best had fear for slice with sword your ear he will. This ain't no prank, make no mistake, cos cross Dash once and meet your fate. No more shall I these words rehash lest ye shall poos it balderdash. It's true my josh is best unread. Mark's talent wish I had instead. Or money.

[dashpoet]

The pleasure is mine your words are fine

picking up the batten and dashing for the line

I would never dis a comment like this

and to fail to reply would clearly be amiss

Looking for a rhyme for this patois wrestle

I found one simply - it's thank you Kestal

[TheDisexists]

ahahahahaha. There are so many good lines in this. Confounded. ahahaha. return them power of ten aahahahahaha. prankster rap is the new black. ahahaha. brilliant. my own riposte has been posted. will be posted to yours as a video response.

[dashpoet]

Great to hear from you - thanks for your comments! I look forwards to hearing what you have to say in your piece, and will be delighted if you post it as a video response. Cheers!

[AntaresInScorpius]

LMAO, great stuff.  I think you missed your calling dash. You could have been emenem and made millions, insead of being of the humbe means that you are now.!

[dashpoet]

I remember after one gig, (a tribute to the late great Ian Dury), Robbie Williams performed a couple of songs. For all the adulation directed at him, I was glad to be me, going back to the people I am lucky to love. I imagine similar feelings in regard to emenem. It would be nice not to have to 'work' though! Thanks, AntaresInScorpius, you are very kind.

[liz1060]

Oh, my -- I started my day with a Dr Seuss memorial breakfast at the kids' school -- it seems only right to finish up with a little HipHop on Pop -- heheh! 5*

[dashpoet]

What a great way to start the day! Thanks for stopping by Liz.

[PoetLina]

A dictionary is a dichotomy of a diet, Dash. Lavish on the butter and it still only has one calorie, but then it will only ever afford one vitamin.

Who'd ever refer to you as confounded? Intrepid, yes, then again brave only has one syllable as does brill!

[dashpoet]

Several ways of saying thank you though! Many thanks, much obliged. Cheers!

[Kabuki0009]

WOW your rhymes ain't half bad *****stars;)

[dashpoet]

Good to hear from you Marcell - here's a rhyme for you as well!

[MEOSHABEAN1]

nice

[dashpoet]

... and silly!

[Nyhee7]

You win! D to the a to the s h poet!!!!!!

[dashpoet]

Thank you kind sir, must dash!

[MrDaMan]

LOL Dash ... Having fun is what its all about. :-) 5*

[dashpoet]

Glad you enjoyed it - thanks MrDaMan

[Jadabh2]

haha... nice....Dashian fashioned from the old stockpile

[dashpoet]

Old school poets rool ok!

[santiagodevill]

out of all the rapper's taking up the challenge, and teing taged, this is my favourite one yet.... no regret's.

[dashpoet]

Thanks Santiago, that means a lot to me ...certainly no regrets now!

[EdMuirton]

Most entertaining and funny Dash! Cheers Mark!

[dashpoet]

Maybe there's a future for Prankster Rap after all then?!

[janeczka]

This is priceless! 'buttering a toasted dictionary' is excellent.

Big up!!

[dashpoet]

Yo janeczka! I gotta stop saying things like that, before I lose the little cred I have left! Thanks for your comment, I appreciate it.

[ninapoetry]

Ahahah! Aw, I haven't watched your poems in awhile, I missed them.

[dashpoet]

Good to hear from you now! Check out 'chainsaw uproar' if you get the chance, I think it's quite a strong piece. Cheers Nina.

[tinySpectacle]

Ha, ha. Love this. Half satirical half just brilliant.

[dashpoet]

Fun to do - and thanks to you for originally coining 'Dashian'!

[longhairred]

hahaha - great rap, great ending!

[dashpoet]

hehehe - that's just me! Thanks, longhairred.

[RowanFortuneWood]

Absolutely brilliant: five stars, fav and I would subscribe to you again if I could sub someone twice. 'Dashian' now ranks amongst my favourite words. Excellent performance, excellent lyrics, etc. The way you conclude it is particularly priceless. Thanks so much for responding :)

[dashpoet]

I think I was pleased to be invited! Thanks, Rowan, for your generous reply.