Very good
cronista1980 1 month ago
something about the grammar makes me think this was done more along the lines of google translate rather than just someone who has poor grammatical skills.
youngrebels75 8 months ago
Not bad, but i got a little lost trying to read the captions because of the grammar.
rpm297 9 months ago
So I guess only illiterates make these videos?
DownGrade430 10 months ago
use a little nudity
1tiffanysboy 2 years ago
needs music
shadowluigi48 2 years ago
Good but use music next time!
doommotty 3 years ago
not bad for a first attempt, try & make the writing more readable next time!.
twistypaul567 3 years ago
hmmmm more competiton
TGemily 3 years ago
Very good
cronista1980 1 month ago
something about the grammar makes me think this was done more along the lines of google translate rather than just someone who has poor grammatical skills.
youngrebels75 8 months ago
Not bad, but i got a little lost trying to read the captions because of the grammar.
rpm297 9 months ago
So I guess only illiterates make these videos?
DownGrade430 10 months ago
use a little nudity
1tiffanysboy 2 years ago
needs music
shadowluigi48 2 years ago
Good but use music next time!
doommotty 3 years ago
not bad for a first attempt, try & make the writing more readable next time!.
twistypaul567 3 years ago
hmmmm more competiton
TGemily 3 years ago