Hey Starship! You did a good job on this! It must have been alot of work! Your pics are great, your facts are right on- the only changes you could make to improve it is to: 1) Add a graphic or two to drive home your stats. 2 ) Put the difficult words on the screen to read like a subtitle, and 3) Redo the narratization being very careful to slow down, pause at times (briefly) and ennunciate your words. Also- you meant "inhibit" not "inhabit" when saying how it works!:) But it is very WELL DONE!
Difficult to understand the narration - sounds like an older person with loose dentures.
Otherwise most informative.
bucko386 3 months ago
nice! ...... thanks.
ratarob 7 months ago
it didn't start with Fleming, it was first discovered by Ernest Duchesne
jhscotty 9 months ago
Hey Starship! You did a good job on this! It must have been alot of work! Your pics are great, your facts are right on- the only changes you could make to improve it is to: 1) Add a graphic or two to drive home your stats. 2 ) Put the difficult words on the screen to read like a subtitle, and 3) Redo the narratization being very careful to slow down, pause at times (briefly) and ennunciate your words. Also- you meant "inhibit" not "inhabit" when saying how it works!:) But it is very WELL DONE!
talitakoomi 1 year ago