BREAKDOWN (English Version)

[syrusmarks1]

I like how you did different lyrics. As im sure that most people know, when your crossing over languages, you have to incorporate words that aren't apart of the song or you get bad translations. Tho i wouldn't mind hearing a remake ;) Cuz even tho J Rock is cool and all, I don't know Japanese. So I like this, forget those nay Sayers.

[ShanHikari]

The translation is off in many ways, but I know its hard to make the sound flow the same as it would in Japanese. Kept the beat which is good. Nice voice but you need to do a few things extra, such as incorporate the song instead of a background noise singing over it sing with it. I'm sure there are a few programs that could do that.

Also your voice needs some fine tuning for fluctuation. Since it cracks often or goes off key. Damn good attempt though.

[SakuraHaruno2111]

Nice but I prefer the Japanese version

[KurushimixMasquerade]

that was addorable

[chickmcjr]

After reading the comments I thought this'd be terrible. But it's not. It's pretty good. I couldn't give a damn about whether or not the lyrics are a correct translation it's pleasant to listen to.

[jatoshi]

you have potential i think you did a good job

[alozzzy1213]

Your a great singer but this song sounds better in Japanese

[yakijuri]

@alozzzy1213 Thank you! Yeah, I love the original. Riyu ftw!

[EirinAngle]

i dislike... sorry >.<

[yakijuri]

@EirinAngle Hey, it's okay :) (this is my new account btw) I understand. I still think my version sounds better than the official English version (it's even worse, if you can imagine, lol)

[WhosAsianJen]

Love your voice :3

[Juwibean]

Thanks for all the kind comments!

To the not-so-kind: Yeah, this is pretty old and you're entitled to your opinion. Thanks for taking the time to watch it :)

[Sonicwizrd]

.................bleh that was terrible!

[McDecency]

your voice is pretty n.n

[SasukeTeddyBear]

kawaii! 5/5 :3

[20031023]

wow this is really cute, you have a cute voice

[NinjabotCpGirl500]

you sing this Juwibean?

[jackiekay123]

oh i have the japanese version of this song on my dance dance revolution game!!its really fast and awsome:)

[mexicanotaku1]

ever see when Kyon facepalms almost every oter episode of Haruhi? yea I did that after a couple of seconds, the voice is good but the control is needed, good job regardless

[Juwibean]

@mexicanotaku1 Thanks! Yeah, this is pretty old lol

[EternalPettifoggers]

This could have been really good. It wasn't. You have the voice for it, but you lack vocal control, and you don't sound like you really knew the lyrics when you sang it.

Your efforts aren't bad, though.

[Juwibean]

@EternalPettifoggers Thank you for your critique. Let me first say that I appreciate an actual critique as opposed to "you suck" or "these aren't the real words."

Yes, I was very new to writing lyrics and singing dubs back then. I've gotten a little better (I like to think haha) since then.

Thanks for listening :) I might start re-recording my old songs...see if they sound any better now.

Thanks again!

[EternalPettifoggers]

@Juwibean well, i can't tell you that you suck because you don't. & of course those are not the real words. things get lost in translation, and things need to be dropped or changed to make the song work. it happens.

you should try recording this again, i would like to hear your improvement.

[vegetafangirl9000]

THESE ARENT THE REAL LYRICS MY FRIEND IS JAPANESSE SHE KNOWS!!!!!

[Juwibean]

@vegetafangirl9000 Yes, I know. They are similar to the translation, but changed to fit the music. If you used the actual translation, it would not fit. There is another English version (played on DDR) which is also completely different.

[vegetafangirl9000]

my friend is japanesse and she doesnt think these are the lyrics in english!

[TheShadowBoy15]

dis is an awesome fan dub nice job

[Juwibean]

@TheShadowBoy15 Thank you!

[Iaristrings]

<3 i like

[Juwibean]

@Iaristrings Thank you :)

[xXFireyRoseXx]

agreed its well done

[Juwibean]

@xXFireyRoseXx Thanks!  I appreciate it!

[otomechan10]

im usually not a fan of fandubs, but you did a really good job! awesome!

[Juwibean]

@otomechan10  Thank you so much!

[theyalllikeme]

this is good, how are there not more views?

[Juwibean]

@theyalllikeme Thank you! Some people have trouble accepting new versions (because the original was so amazing) I love Riyu and BeForU :)

[JesusChristRulesYOU]

whoever wrote the lyrics to that song is a stupid idiot. the original is better, way to ruin a song.

[Juwibean]

@JesusChristRulesYOU Harsh words JCR. Well, to each their own opinion I suppose.

[nightfallPain]

@JesusChristRulesYOU Like you could do better >_> Your version would be a terrible abomination.

[nightfallPain]

Nice, I thought that sounded awesome.

[Juwibean]

@nightfallPain Thank you!

[Cosploids]

sounds great. <3

[Juwibean]

@Cosploids  Thank you :)

[AmberInuzuka]

Sounds great! :)

[Juwibean]

@AmberInuzuka  Thanks so much

[RaineSeras]

Oh GAWD! You RUINED my wonderful memories of the 1st Gen B4U!!

o0o (@.@) o0o

[Juwibean]

@RaineSeras  Ah well, can't please everyone. Second Gen BeForU rocked harder! :)

[webkinzboy179]

want to be friends

[Juwibean]

@webkinzboy179 Sure!

[webkinzboy179]

cool

[Juwibean]

@webkinzboy179  Thanks :)

[minoshaied]

nice song!

[Juwibean]

@minoshaied Thank you!!

[andhellomyneighbor]

Not the best singing at all. lol

[Juwibean]

@andhellomyneighbor Well, I'm not a professional or anything lol

[TheHasne]

How did you translate it? it is awesome!!!!

[Juwibean]

Thanks! I translated it line by line :) There is an English translation somewhere on the web, but I found it way after haha

[ByakuganTaiChi]

@Juwibean When you said translated it line by line did you sing it by yourself? I mean was that your voice?

[Juwibean]

Yeah, this is me singing :)

[DarkPrincess146026]

I love your voice, and this version's amazing! :3

*faves it*

[Juwibean]

Thank you :)

[ByakuganTaiChi]

I definately love this song! Give it a 5 stars!

[Juwibean]

Thanks!

[ByakuganTaiChi]

@Juwibean You're welcome, is it true that Riyu Kosaka sings the break down english song, cause if so I'm thinking of putting it up on my music player.

[Juwibean]

I can't remember the name of the original English version singer...darn...Erika? no...darn!

[rr97khl]

Awesome... that's all I know how to say to this..

WHO HAS A THESAURAUS?!

[Juwibean]

Thanks...I think :)

[dapimpofu69]

i luv ur voice! XD

[Juwibean]

*blush* Thanks!

[dapimpofu69]

its k u dnt gotta thnk me wen its tha truth XP

[KibaRyan]

This is the first song i always do on ddr b 4 any other song,i love it,an u singing this was cool 2

[Juwibean]

Aww, glad to hear!

[C05MIC]

That's a lovely voice.

[Juwibean]

Thank you ^-^

[Zeroeq]

can you leave the link to donwload please?

[Juwibean]

Yes, of course! If you look at the end of the description, you'll find the links ^-^v

[RebelKnight29]

can i get the .mp3 of this anywhere?

[Juwibean]

I actually uploaded it to esnips just for you (well, because of this comment) I uploaded the original (this one) and the game version. (See the description - at the end)

[PrinceCurtis]

Ooh Nice!

[yosikaSW]

nice!!

[BeForU648]

is this an official english version ??

[Juwibean]

Wow, I'm totally taking that as a compliment :-D But no, it isn't. There is an official one from step mania, I think. It's by Ele Rocks.

[pat213101]

OMG i love the Ele Rocks and all version ( + your version) THIS SONG ROCKS BeForU ROCKS

[nikeguru]

you have a beautiful voice

[Juwibean]

*blush* thank you! ^^

[JadeElric]

it looks like you're singing and i'm playing guitar in this vid!! :-D love it!