not bad but it looks like you rely quite a bit on livetype for your typography. most of the scene look like it's just a livetype preset on stock footage. try using some of the text behaviors in motion 4 to help you break out of the mold a bit.
I do like the video, though I don't understand what it's entirely about (may help to clarify). The atmosphere the audio created fit very well to the motion graphics. Very nice designing, though some of them (the speedo one) was very hard to read. The only thing I can criticise about this video is that your vector motion using the brush was bad. (The effect where the text writes itself) I would go over the brush stokes again.
Cool
2608FILMS 1 year ago
good
Sullivan878 1 year ago
not bad but it looks like you rely quite a bit on livetype for your typography. most of the scene look like it's just a livetype preset on stock footage. try using some of the text behaviors in motion 4 to help you break out of the mold a bit.
crcpnoy2k 2 years ago
Hey dude,
I do like the video, though I don't understand what it's entirely about (may help to clarify). The atmosphere the audio created fit very well to the motion graphics. Very nice designing, though some of them (the speedo one) was very hard to read. The only thing I can criticise about this video is that your vector motion using the brush was bad. (The effect where the text writes itself) I would go over the brush stokes again.
Now you watch my videos and comment and rate plz!
ryomali 2 years ago