MJ Fantasy: " The Man Next Door" Part 25

[ChrissyLovesYou221]

my favorite line: "I can't believe this fool just put his hands on me." that is so funny!!!! lol i love it!

[WifeofJackson]

Omg, this was realy intense!!

[amaloveable]

sorry i havent commented for a while i was catching up with the story and i was REALLY busy with homework but you are so AWESOME!!! i just know someone is going to discover your stories and make you famous!

[msdogooder]

OOH that fight was epic!!! Awwww that moment between Michael and Ana in the parking lot was great. Yes it is going to take some time and yes Michael did make a lot of mistakes but the genuine love between the two of them is still strong. Its beautiful!!!

[sorandom80]

when is abused heart coming out?

[shellyx4]

I forget to comment on many occasions "slap my hands" but I love your story (s) so keep them coming.

[DaizyfreeAG]

What the hell appened to "THE NEXT PART WILL BE UP MONDAY!"

BULLSHIT!

xD! lmao... (Don't mind me, i'm just extremely frantic.)

HURRY IT UP!

[OldSchoolSweetheart]

@DaizyfreeAG ahahaha I know!! I'm sorry =( I started work yesterday, and it's from 10am to 7pm. By the time I get home, I am so tired cause I still have a child to care for afterwards. I am gonna work on it tonight. I am almost done. Maybe tomorrow but no promises =p

[DaizyfreeAG]

@OldSchoolSweetheart O.O

[snickerz345]

I just already know Ana is going to say "I love you Michael" OMG I cant wait for the next part!!!! *screams for next part*

[xTheTrueKingMJx]

OMG! OMG! OMG!

Gurrrrl, when's the next part cominggg?!?!

I NEEED ITTT! YOU REALLY ARE SO BRILLIANT *___*

*dies* :D

<33333

[makenart]

Oh my goodness girl this is so GOOD!! On to the next part please

[MJJ4everBBY16]

I LOVE YOU MICHAEL!!!!! Haha!

She know she's gonna say it! ;D

[1137Godrocks7]

noooooooo i wasent expecting the clif hanger!!!!! awwwwww hahaha XD

[23LiberianGirl]

FANTASTIC CHAPTER !!!

[xxxangel777]

oh my god!!!!! this one was just perfect! i really wished this chapter would never end! everytime you write about michael and ana and their feeling ... i´m feeling so lost, my heart will skip some beats and i´m feeling thousands of butterflies in my stomach! and oh i love this feeling! :-))) can´t wait for the next part. much love

[1mjjloverforever38]

"I am a good guy" Haha, I can so imagine him saying that when he's in trouble!!!!

[KraziiGcmGirl]

Omgee they need to get back together. Michael beat that ass be wasnt playing no games he went ham! She know she want mikeezy! Come on now ana dont front new part mamas lovng it

[kelbellmjslover]

OOOOOHHHHH girl everything went down in this chapter.I cant even speak.This is too amazing.I need the next part or I'll just lets just say I would be where Michael is right now.

[TheMiissCB]

woww ! I just started reading your fantasies and this one is my favorite ! Loved it !!!!

[cutup4488]

Honey child, you rock my world! (: I love how Michael is ready to do whatever he can to get her back! Ana is hurt, but she seriously needs to realize she can't go on without Michael. Next part pronto, chica! Oh, yeah, did you read my message yet? I really need your help! I want to post my story asap but I'm soooo stuck. HELP PLEASE! I love ya! xx Sara

[candace23800]

wow

[XxPassionForMikeyxX]

:o I thought for sure they were gonna kiss then girl! Oooh she know she loves Mikey still! Cant wait for the next part chicka! <3 Oh and btw i LOVED how violent Michael got in this, i was like :o MMMMMMMMMMMMM daaamn! :L xxxx

[MsChemicalEngineer]

OMG diud you make this almost 16 minutes long so there could be a cliffhangar? Love the story though, it's one of your best! I was sure Michael was gonna get his kiss, since he didn't, I'm glad Michael kicked Camerons ass for him...he deserved it. OK I need Ana to grow up and admit how much she loves Michael...the suspense is killing me!! Also gotta ask about the new job, I hope it;s going well!! Kiss my grandbaby for me, please!! TRake care of yourself!

[MononokeRose91]

this chapter was so intense from beginning to end!, gosh and the ending i wonder whats going to happen between those two, and gosh i knew Cameron was too sweet to be true, he really shouldn't have butted into Mike and Ana's business that wasn't right and Ana's uncle i know he was upset but he was way too hard on Ana, shes young and just starting out with this stuff he should've at least tried to understand were she was coming from"/ anyway another chapter well done can't wait for moreO.O

[TullerJackson]

Johanna, my heart was beating out of my chest throughout the whole video.

It was so intense. I loved it.

[inventinglondon]

please have the next part up soon , pleaaaseeee ♥ ?

[MJMBRallmyboos]

Oh snap! :D

[PAIDIA1]

OMG,OMG,OMG,OMG..I CANT BREATH I CANT SPEAK I CANT DO ANYTHING NOW...girl that was AMAZING,and i want her to say YES and kiss him PUT...is your story girl and do what ever you want..Im sure im going to LOVE IT...

[xuSmileyface]

My heart pounded the whole 15:54 seconds! My hearts never pounded like that unless I was running for a long period of time. If I counted my pulse it probably would've been... 5,382,925,628,292 heart beats. Lol. I just love you stories so freaking much! I love this one so freaking much but I still love you more(: good job girly!!!!

[virgomoonbeam]

This part was amazing,i just wanted them to kiss so much and when she pushed him away i felt so sad for him.She loves him with all her heart, i hope she tell him so. x

[mjswife100]

just AMAZING!

[MichaelJacksonsLove2]

Omfg, I need the next part like asap!!!! I'm dying over here from that cliffhanger, lol! :P

[jkool20]

Oh my gosh!! This is sooo good!! I love this series sooo damn much.

[LilMsShy100]

Whe michael hit cameron i had to smile xD idk why though aww but he did wrong grrrr this is complicated and I LOVE IT :DDD please dont deprive me of my daily dosage of this and gimme the next part...pwease :] <333

[smileycurtis]

My god this is too good I'm over here having a heart attack because you left me with a cliffhanger *sigh* I'm dying for the next part Johanna :) great job!

[mjismyhubby]

I swear if you make this into a book i will buy it even though I read it. You are amazing girl Please upload the next part soon!!

[MONIELUVSMJ]

the ending caused a shock for me....i wasn't expecting that! i can't wait for more GIRL! great job! ((:

[MsCavalia]

Say Yes !!!!!!!!

[MJfanMega]

OMG!!!

Pleasse, let her say itt!PLEASEE!She knows she loves him...

Gawwd, this story's soo incredible!Soo AMAZING!

Oh god, oh god....PLEASE UPLOAD THE NEXT PART TONIGHT! PLEASE!!!!

Who else wants the next one tonight???

PLEASE!

<333333

[DaizyfreeAG]

Oh, SHIT! Why the FUCK WOULD YOU STOP THERE?!?!

AAARGH!

PLEASE, upload tonight!! PLEASE....

[michaeljacksonlov384]

OMG I love this!!! Next Part ASAP!!!!

[NunuxoxoAngel]

Johanna!!!! Simply AMAZING! next part pleasee!

i love this story girl!!!!!! ♥♥♥

[DaizyfreeAG]

I LOVE Super long chapters! Hell, make them longer, PLEASE.

Btw, I started reading this and said, shit bout to go down!