ease up on the fade in / outs in the beggining. it was kind of hard to follow and distracting. You picked an interesting topic to make a serious film on... lol I dont think many people will be able to look past the prostitutes xD
Also the end scene when he jumped didnt look very serious and the rate at which he fell was kind of comical... you could try leaving an open ended ending that leaves the viewer to decide how it should have ended?
Yeah, I couldn't get any longer clips of Niko just standing around in the rain, he didn't want to seem to sit still.
What was it about the ending that you felt wasn't serious? And yeah, I accidentally sped up the falling clip, and by the time I noticed I had already deleted the original in-game clips :(
And good suggestion about open end. I might try to recreate the video, smooth out rough edges.
The ending just kinda looked funny with him leaping off and plumetting back down in like half a second. it looked more of a funny stunt moment to me =/ there are a few options you could do like have him standing up on the roof in the rain and have him look up and then fade to white or something like that? other than that it was good, i liked the angles you got and how you had the camera follow him without being trained on his back.
The end XD , so messed up
florian00777 1 year ago
Well done!
antstonyants 2 years ago
It was nicely done but a few suggestions:
ease up on the fade in / outs in the beggining. it was kind of hard to follow and distracting. You picked an interesting topic to make a serious film on... lol I dont think many people will be able to look past the prostitutes xD
Also the end scene when he jumped didnt look very serious and the rate at which he fell was kind of comical... you could try leaving an open ended ending that leaves the viewer to decide how it should have ended?
4/5
Criken2 2 years ago
Yeah, I couldn't get any longer clips of Niko just standing around in the rain, he didn't want to seem to sit still.
What was it about the ending that you felt wasn't serious? And yeah, I accidentally sped up the falling clip, and by the time I noticed I had already deleted the original in-game clips :(
And good suggestion about open end. I might try to recreate the video, smooth out rough edges.
Thanks for your critique!
MiseEnScenity 2 years ago
Lol i know what you mean
The ending just kinda looked funny with him leaping off and plumetting back down in like half a second. it looked more of a funny stunt moment to me =/ there are a few options you could do like have him standing up on the roof in the rain and have him look up and then fade to white or something like that? other than that it was good, i liked the angles you got and how you had the camera follow him without being trained on his back.
Criken2 2 years ago
thats awesome man keep up the good work!
dilleren123 2 years ago
Thanks a lot! I tried to do something a little different than all the action packed stuff out there.
MiseEnScenity 2 years ago