hmm let me ges... this happened to you or a family member? or you only just made up the story... lol its funny how lite that white shirt that old man is wairing
I found this very entertaining and cleverly done. A simple idea brought off perfectly. The commentators who complain about the shirt not being realistic have surely missed the point. NONE of it is realistc - that's why it's funny. (It is, after all, a cartoon!)
That was hilarious!!! I love how he jumped all the way to the lamp!!! And his expression when he heard the bang the second time? I was on the floor laughing!!!!!!...got a couple weird looks, considering I was at school at the time...lol
lmao that was hilarious i cant quit laughing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! expecially at the part where the dishwasher opens n he like flies omfg!!!!!!!!!!!! the graphics are so weird what is with his shirt! hahaha his laugh too that was hilarious.
Would have been better if the music wasn't so loud over the whole animation. Kinda drew the attention from the video to the 'background' music. That and the shirt went up his back way too high.
It feels like the point wasn't very clear. This man was reading a "silly story" book and he himself was a silly story. Was that water or steam coming out of the dishwasher? I loved the detail put into this and it was cute <3
For a beginning animation, I must say this is pretty good. You had a good attention to detail, but the man's shirt was a little too hyperactive. Aside from that, I can see where you were attempting to emulate the fluid motions of the shirt, and though it moved too much, the wrinkles looked quite good.
I didn't think this was too bad at all and for those that just want to say "It's bad, you need to do better" that's not really helping anything at all. For all we know this could be the persons first attempts, who knows. Constructive criticism is one thing, but just going "LoL it's bad, do better" sucks.
With that said. The whole thing was pretty good; the shirt, as others have pointed out, looked kind of funny and I thought the sound was a bit hollow sounding. Other then that, GREAT!
I have to concur with prior complaints, the shirt animation is terrible, the music is just as bad and... was it supposed to be funny or entertaining? I'm really not seeing it sorry.
old guy, young voice. strange. not everything needs to be animated to move when he laughs. old people are stiff. plus old people don't get their legs up on the sofa like that. size of the sofa / size of the guy...perspective? his whole shirt is moving as he walks down the aisle..why? and whats so funny about this reading?
his shirt is doing some funky dance and doesnt seem like it wants to stay on him but it is a cute animation. it seems like more of a test then anything but it is still nicely done
The cloth and hair simulation were pretty cool, and there were moments where the animation as amazingly life-like.
...but then there were other times where the lip-sync seemed a bit oddly timed, and some of the skeletal movements seemed too exaggerated even for cartoonish comedic effect.
I wish YouTube still had the stars rating system, cuz I can't bring myself to give this a thumbs up OR a thumbs down; I want to give a more nuanced review.
WTF???
sue1988er 1 month ago
Lol when the dish washer opened I jumped lol
moonstar1005 7 months ago 2
his shirt was going up and down when he was tip toeing
hispotty123 11 months ago
the chair looks huge o_o
hispotty123 11 months ago
ahh!! XD that scared me
pumpum2105 1 year ago
2:32 that scared the hell out of me
BeckieTenshiChan 1 year ago
That's TOTALLY going to be me when I'm like 70!!
jonathantrooper716 1 year ago
something like that huppened to me, too XD so i find it very funny XD XD XD XD
FissataKH 1 year ago
hmm let me ges... this happened to you or a family member? or you only just made up the story... lol its funny how lite that white shirt that old man is wairing
Jackxismine 1 year ago
2:18,clock on the wall,I had one
NiteLiter 1 year ago
shame of the dislikers!!!!
NewEquinoxProduction 1 year ago
that is ONE silky shirt.
thebamams 1 year ago
lol shirt fail. something went wrong during animation
vixen042 1 year ago
THIS IS GREAT
MyRealNameIs28 1 year ago
hot coco bok unrealistic shirt from moon smokers laugh check
sirshmooppy 1 year ago
I found this very entertaining and cleverly done. A simple idea brought off perfectly. The commentators who complain about the shirt not being realistic have surely missed the point. NONE of it is realistc - that's why it's funny. (It is, after all, a cartoon!)
Offshoreorganbuilder 1 year ago
2:33 was histerical
AzumangaGirl101 1 year ago
That was hilarious!!! I love how he jumped all the way to the lamp!!! And his expression when he heard the bang the second time? I was on the floor laughing!!!!!!...got a couple weird looks, considering I was at school at the time...lol
AquaticFox93 1 year ago
What's with his shirt...especially when he's tip-toeing down the hallway?
lexa490 1 year ago
he's so cute with all his laughs ^_^
MissComi 1 year ago
this video is creepe werid and boring
peairlandogriffin 1 year ago
lol 0:49
waterpower247 1 year ago
Luagh out loud made me lol
gamernerd3000 1 year ago
he laughes like an electrified fly lol
moomoofan11 1 year ago
also whats with the shirt riding half - way up his back?
lello1114 1 year ago 3
wow, after only reading 3 sentences he's laughing... that must be one GOOD book =D
lello1114 1 year ago 2
the shirt was way too fluid and the story was boring.
Boozercatb 1 year ago
Pretty nice animation but you have to pay more attention to lighting, it is very importand. :)
CosmosStudios 1 year ago
that must be a HUGE chair or a REALLY small man:)
lots of wind going on inside his house lol
but still pretty good.
nice job
kanyunlafountaine 1 year ago 3
aaaaaaaagghhhhrrrrr.....ugly tune and sounds....bleeeeeee
Nieluch 1 year ago
WTF IS UP WITH HIS SHIRT
toot344 1 year ago
lol his shirt seems to be trying to escape.
PinkCharmander 1 year ago 4
The Shirt Makes it even funnier and i think it was on purpose
MrWhiteGorrila 1 year ago 3
wow...that t-shirt was like anti-gravity or something
bangaroodong 1 year ago
This animation was about T-shirt physics or what?
draconpost 1 year ago
how is this cute?
TheAlleyCats5000 1 year ago
lmao that was hilarious i cant quit laughing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! expecially at the part where the dishwasher opens n he like flies omfg!!!!!!!!!!!! the graphics are so weird what is with his shirt! hahaha his laugh too that was hilarious.
childishyoutubber 1 year ago
Why does his shirt move like it is in the wind? Also, the would have been better if it was only 1 min long, it is way too long.
jbear0000 1 year ago
Not bad this. I admit I found it a bit slow moving to begin with but am glad I continued on. The ending was nicely unexpected.
As others have said though, the shirt moves way too much. It seems to be behaving as though there are heavy weights attached to the ends.
Menaceman44 1 year ago
LOL his laughing made me laugh!
I don't get the storyline though.
and maybe his shirt is bouncing like that because it's made out of silk? :P
caturdays 1 year ago
Nice visual representation of glee. The face, hair movements, and t-shirt motion were all well executed. Nice style.
laraesque 1 year ago
What the fuck was up with his shirt?
Nemesis7474 1 year ago
Would have been better if the music wasn't so loud over the whole animation. Kinda drew the attention from the video to the 'background' music. That and the shirt went up his back way too high.
DaniBananible 1 year ago
.... I want a big chair like that! D:
mustrecycle 1 year ago
It feels like the point wasn't very clear. This man was reading a "silly story" book and he himself was a silly story. Was that water or steam coming out of the dishwasher? I loved the detail put into this and it was cute <3
ZStudi 1 year ago
sry but no point to this whole thing 0/5
Death82 1 year ago
he "flew" to the light and his shirt look like it would fly off as he was walking lol
eguzmanryan1 1 year ago
"Cute Animation"
How is this cute?
Old man with 20 year old voice, with a T-Shirt that totally defies gravity.
Sidmarill 1 year ago
For a beginning animation, I must say this is pretty good. You had a good attention to detail, but the man's shirt was a little too hyperactive. Aside from that, I can see where you were attempting to emulate the fluid motions of the shirt, and though it moved too much, the wrinkles looked quite good.
NefariousTropy 1 year ago
That is a really, really, big chair.
TheDarkDyer 1 year ago
I didn't think this was too bad at all and for those that just want to say "It's bad, you need to do better" that's not really helping anything at all. For all we know this could be the persons first attempts, who knows. Constructive criticism is one thing, but just going "LoL it's bad, do better" sucks.
With that said. The whole thing was pretty good; the shirt, as others have pointed out, looked kind of funny and I thought the sound was a bit hollow sounding. Other then that, GREAT!
Alphadragon1979 1 year ago
needs better music other then that i did'nt mind it to much the shirt was kinda funny
hulkthefuror 1 year ago
His shirt bothers me. It's like the wind it blowing from every direction.
LauraandAlaynaShow 1 year ago
Thats one huge chair or he is just really small when he sits down
Patrickjstn 1 year ago
lmao, that was bad, i appreciate the attempt, but you need to put alot more work into this.
kcin228 1 year ago
I have to concur with prior complaints, the shirt animation is terrible, the music is just as bad and... was it supposed to be funny or entertaining? I'm really not seeing it sorry.
Karannia 1 year ago
the shirt mad me laugh, lol.
buzzbunny7 1 year ago
The music was slightly perturbing...as well as his water-like shirt.
dolphinsilver4 1 year ago 2
The guy must be putting his shoulders in it to make his shirt flutter like that
person10001 1 year ago
that must be one crazy first page...
DRealfriknKeenan 1 year ago
The lighting was overexposed on the walls and his shirt looks funny.
berry24 1 year ago 2
hahaha cloth fail
aliekiddo 1 year ago
LOL I love the end! And the T-shirt simply is... silly. Like the whole clip. But really cool.
WhiteAce3 1 year ago
That Shirt Was Drawl'n ..
TopModel618 1 year ago
the music is just horrible!!! the sound needs major changing!!
and is he wearing a silk shirt?! its just a silly shirt :s
blakbutrfli 1 year ago
the shirt moves too much.
whiteberryphantom 1 year ago 2
AHaha at 2:00 it sounds like hes farting instead of the creaks in the floor! and it blows up his shirt! aha!
poor shirt animation, and he recovers to quickly from his laugh to his book,
on another note, this video made lol
ApelAndy 1 year ago
the laugh is scary... O.o xD
145kristy145 1 year ago 2
thats a big chair
DEVILDUDE726 1 year ago 23
@DEVILDUDE726 its funny cause he has to slide in it to get to the back
MiChAeLwIlLiAmSoN97 1 year ago
LoL 2:34 and funny t-shirt xDDD
Foxinko333 1 year ago 2
L.O.L he flyedddd
99gab 1 year ago
this is just too weird:P
musicalkaratekid 1 year ago
i dont understand why it takes literally nothing to make his shirt fly around all over the place, it was distracting
TweenkyTV 1 year ago
good apart from the t-shirt and laughing
pikminkid10 1 year ago
jghj
sergioaquilina 1 year ago
and what was cute there..?
l1mewaxer 1 year ago
music is terrible !
liffaman 1 year ago
bllsht
HerrSchokopudding 1 year ago
I want that T-Shirt !
Are567 1 year ago
that made no sense at all... Good job =)
LifeRunner4000 1 year ago 3
the vid is damn cute i love to watch them.. the only thing at this one is that the shirt is moving too much.. ^.^
andrewbrummer 1 year ago 2
luv it! really cute!
MonCherie85 1 year ago
not bad i guess...
drorjs 1 year ago
if you post another video like this aniboom im gonna cancel my abo!
your new vids suck, the old ones were better
xYaYYaJx 1 year ago
i wish i had a chair that big.
zaperatus 1 year ago
The t-shirt isnt realistic
dmirkin2 1 year ago 56
@dmirkin2 that was the only thing that made me laugh LOL. it was about to fly over his head lol
JermaineATL 1 year ago
This is so good, one of my favorite things do when it's cold outside is exactly this.
Alanteen18 1 year ago
Lols for the shirt xD
czechowa 1 year ago
i think it the fact that everything is exaggerated is what gives this animation its character, but the plot / story needed some serious work.
paxtioni1989 1 year ago
old guy, young voice. strange. not everything needs to be animated to move when he laughs. old people are stiff. plus old people don't get their legs up on the sofa like that. size of the sofa / size of the guy...perspective? his whole shirt is moving as he walks down the aisle..why? and whats so funny about this reading?
BRONCKENSTETTER 1 year ago
@BRONCKENSTETTER the book says "Silly Stories"
GeneralAnimator 1 year ago
@GeneralAnimator so if the book says "Porn" the whole film would be called "Porn"?
BRONCKENSTETTER 1 year ago
@BRONCKENSTETTER is the whole movie about laughing?
GeneralAnimator 1 year ago
@GeneralAnimator I didn't laugh once. Maybe the animation software was broken and didn't have amusement programmed?
BRONCKENSTETTER 1 year ago
@BRONCKENSTETTER The animator has to add amusement and personalities to the animation him self, not the program.
GeneralAnimator 1 year ago
@GeneralAnimator So he didn't get layed in a while. That explains the film.
BRONCKENSTETTER 1 year ago
boring!funny!pointless!
ThiVasss 1 year ago
the tshirt!!! at 2:34 i jumped!
KiranGlitch 1 year ago
im wearing headphones and THAT SCARED THE HELL OUT OF ME
cjs378 1 year ago
Hehehe the t-shirt lol
SeguchiSlave69 1 year ago
Wow the t-shirt!
alincielo 1 year ago
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh............
awarenessis 1 year ago
lol, i jerk'ed
princeNabil1998 1 year ago
Ahhh, for warm cocoa and a book...
awarenessis 1 year ago
Was there a punch line? Did I miss something?
trueleroix 1 year ago 2
Cute.
3slimdog 1 year ago
hee that laugh makes me laugh!
WhiteTiger950 1 year ago
nice and a bit wierd ... but something was wrong with the cloth?! :P
PsyMike3d 1 year ago
his shirt is doing some funky dance and doesnt seem like it wants to stay on him but it is a cute animation. it seems like more of a test then anything but it is still nicely done
Chibiicap 1 year ago
I want his shirt. haha
B8Av3 1 year ago 2
Hmm...I d'know.
The cloth and hair simulation were pretty cool, and there were moments where the animation as amazingly life-like.
...but then there were other times where the lip-sync seemed a bit oddly timed, and some of the skeletal movements seemed too exaggerated even for cartoonish comedic effect.
I wish YouTube still had the stars rating system, cuz I can't bring myself to give this a thumbs up OR a thumbs down; I want to give a more nuanced review.
BionicDance 1 year ago
...what?
annadesu 1 year ago
Okay, that is the scariest, er, 'laugh' I've heard...in a long time.
BreKilljoy 1 year ago
it was good apart from the animation of his shirt...looked like he was in a constant breeze
cuuldude101 1 year ago 26
that dress effects
000skin999 1 year ago
Won't be cozy any more not that he has to hand wash the dishes now.
DarkHollowWithin 1 year ago