two thumbs up..from dis cartoon.....the story is so unexplainable if u not focus on the story but the story gives justify to the character the terrible man was collecting soul from the jar that so creepy....i wish HP lovecraft wiil make this as a movie remake...i like this cartoon...
i realy like H.P Lovecrafts storys but sometimes i finde them hard to understand cuz its to much of a high literature for me can some explane a bit more of the story k? thanks :)
Fantastic job on all aspects of this piece! The animation, the voice, and the music/sound effects all flowed together very well and worked to create the eerie feeling that you got from reading the short story.
Reading is okay.. but slow down. Your rushing through it and losing a lot of the horror. It's coming off as monotone because your hurrying through the sentences.
excellent-the voice & reading actually enhance the horror of it to me because it is ordinary telling a horror laden story. I thought the whole thing was very well done.
For all interested- our next Lovecraft film based on "The Statement of Randolph Carter" will be done in 1-2 weeks! It's been a long time coming but it's worth it! We think it really blows our first attempt away!
@EldritchAnimation fuck yeah i love the statement of randolph carter (i just recently got done reading the case of charles dexter ward and was quite surprised to see him mentioned)
Excellent animation. Very entertaining. Poor narration, however.
As Fagan queried, I will answer (not tryin' to slam the video, just being honest):
1.) Poor enunciation.
2.) Improper pronunciation (i.e. REP-uted, instead of re-PUT-ed, etc.)
All in all, totally enjoyed the video (just thought I'd offer some constructive criticism and clear up any misunderstanding about people's opinion of the narrator).
An excellent job, but why do so many HPL narrators speak so fast? HPL's horror was of the creeping kind, and I think readings of his stories should likewise creep slowly into the ear, like spiders crawling over your brain. Slow down.
This is really excellent! I've set many of my Cthulhu Mythos stories in Kingsport, and I have a character who lives on the porch of the Terrible Old Man's haunted house -- and the opening shot shewing the house in this video is delicious in it eerie atmosphere. Thanks for a great video!
This is a VERY good interpretation of one of Lovecraft's works. Lovecraft's craft of conjuring a story, rather than telling it, really brings the reader into HIS reality whether they want to or not. His descriptive writing was so powerful that some believe he, and his readers, may have actually MANIFESTED some of his works into reality through shear BELIEF! Unless they existed to begin with and he was just their tool to announce their presence. This film does his work justice.
try talking slower instead of talking incredibly fast. It makes it seem like you don't really care about the subject at hand, like you can't wait to finish reading.
He is reading a little too fast, but then he does have to condense it all into a four-minute film and, of course, he did have the balls to actually get up and do it, which counts for a great deal in my estimation.
A good, strong, start. Always good to see people loving Lovecraft enough to want to work with his stuff. Suggestions: Try reworking it with more attention to the manner in which everthing is lit. Also, the narrator comes off as being...well, indifferent... to the subject matter. Watching this, I can't help feeling that you might recruit a woman with a nice, rich voice to do the narration, and benefit greatly from it. Neat work, though. Keep at it. I'd like to see more.
I'm sorry having to tell you that I'd appreciate your art work much more if you had not neglected one very important ingredient of your oeuvre: There are reasons why articulation and speech are being trained...sorry...but that was...bad reading... :o/
the voice is horrible, very nasal and he mutters many of the words. which is a shame, because the animation, direction and the atmosphere of this is really good.
Very good. I thought the voiceover was a little stilted at times and certain words didn't come out quite right. The voice was also a bit deadpan at points. But a good effort that put shivers up my spine...
Make more right now! Like Cthulhu rising up from Ryleh and stomping the shit out of a seaport town before being cosmically sealed back up again by some jealous elder gods working together for that sole purpose. Lovecraft never wrote anything like that but you'd have to take some author's license. :) That would give me a huge chubby!
Awesome work! Great animation, nice reading and one of my favorite Lovecraft stories.
piratepersona 1 month ago
chillssss
Lizardvenom1 1 month ago
=))
you are great!"
sorensofos 1 month ago
Terrifying, indeed! I'm a big fan of H. P. Lovecraft's work and I was ecstatic to see this :D
CrunchBandicoot 2 months ago
When that gate opened, i shat a brick
randomguy199545 2 months ago
brilliant!!
XbleedingXmascaraXD 2 months ago
Nice...
robot230373 3 months ago
Isn't the old man the guy from "Dagon"?
Kriskazam 3 months ago
this is really good
infernomoo 3 months ago
good!
starryvertigo 5 months ago
0:58 is that... CTHULHU?!
AwesomeRP 5 months ago
read this story pretty creepy aint gonna be bothering that old man any time soon he really is terrible
trex6321 6 months ago
great narrative from the original story but if u excuse me i have to go cry in a corner
cactusjack67 7 months ago
its ok ...for me gueesnought...but this cartoons makes me creepy...
steffmorris31 7 months ago
two thumbs up..from dis cartoon.....the story is so unexplainable if u not focus on the story but the story gives justify to the character the terrible man was collecting soul from the jar that so creepy....i wish HP lovecraft wiil make this as a movie remake...i like this cartoon...
steffmorris31 8 months ago
@steffmorris31 hate to bust your bubble, but h. p. lovecraft died in 1937. he was a writer, not a director.
Guessnought 7 months ago
This wasawesome!!
TheMercede3s 8 months ago
Second time i stumbled on this video. Narrative, animation and story are all bloody brilliant. Very entertaining to watch.
Mii85 8 months ago
reminds me of my new neghbor
RisingDarknes 8 months ago
i realy like H.P Lovecrafts storys but sometimes i finde them hard to understand cuz its to much of a high literature for me can some explane a bit more of the story k? thanks :)
rockpop1 9 months ago
Fantastic job on all aspects of this piece! The animation, the voice, and the music/sound effects all flowed together very well and worked to create the eerie feeling that you got from reading the short story.
ryokoyuy1 9 months ago
Excellently done, you really captured the eerie, Lovecraftian atmosphere.
handmiadenofgod 9 months ago
You simply must put these up for download
Shadow7787 9 months ago
Horror novel see video book trailer
dltanner99 10 months ago
This was great story i cant wait to see more of your work
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dltanner99 11 months ago
What a beautiful storey. I like the animation to.
qwer58j 11 months ago
Awesome work! Cant wait to see more.
kesinpa 11 months ago
WOW!!Cool!!
DieFrauenHeldin 1 year ago
Wow very nice. I just started reading Lovecraft's complete works today and now I really need to read that story XD
LokiDuck 1 year ago
I love these kind of stories.
CaramelCleo 1 year ago 4
The obvious reading out loud ruined it.
Mauser91 1 year ago
I agree with some of the comments as to the naration.
you need a much more sinister speaker. slower, more foreboding
stupidvampiretwat 1 year ago
I didn't really like the actual story, but your adaption made a lot more sense and was much more intriguing! Very well done.
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MadisonBova 1 year ago
Reading is okay.. but slow down. Your rushing through it and losing a lot of the horror. It's coming off as monotone because your hurrying through the sentences.
viper8red 1 year ago
Great job! If you make The Call of Cthulhu and put them on a disc. I would buy, and so would others. Love it. Thank you!
inlife9 1 year ago
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Really well done.
Mii85 1 year ago
Excellent!!!!!! Please upload more! I have always been a fan of HP LoveCraft short stories.
rebalforaday 1 year ago
This is awesome. The animation is a thrill.
Atikkin 1 year ago
Aw, the man is a soul catcher, a terrible fate befal those who wrong a soul catcher.
Considering its HP lovecraft he very well started this character type with this story.
TheRhuen 1 year ago
awsome
Dj9o7o68o7321 1 year ago
Did you read the entire story, or did you use the animation to tell a part of it?
frididjurhuus 1 year ago
Excellent job! I'd like to see more of Lovecrafts works adapted to animation like this.
iscream22 1 year ago
genius!
DanRossiTV 1 year ago
excellent-the voice & reading actually enhance the horror of it to me because it is ordinary telling a horror laden story. I thought the whole thing was very well done.
tornickin 1 year ago
amazing! Simply amazing.
dbzhax 1 year ago
at 2:05 i thought "gordon freeman!"
Extra365 1 year ago
wow great vid :)
Vedran36 1 year ago
i love this !!!!! you should check out a video called "strange video patchwork mummy23" you should like it ... love the lovecraft
acmacmsnowball 1 year ago
An absolutely perfect adaptation! Not a stone out of place, all done as it was in the story, from what I can remember.
Howie would be proud.
binarynightmare 1 year ago
Perfect, tone-wise and really good-looking. Loved this!
allippincott 1 year ago
Truly terrible - in the good way.
belgion75 1 year ago
A friend sent me this link ><.. Probably not the best idea to watch :(, when still adjusting to side-effects of meds...
Leafdots 1 year ago
10 on 10
carlossaroufim 1 year ago
For all interested- our next Lovecraft film based on "The Statement of Randolph Carter" will be done in 1-2 weeks! It's been a long time coming but it's worth it! We think it really blows our first attempt away!
EldritchAnimation 1 year ago 23
@EldritchAnimation fantastic. Keep them coming. You guys really GET what Lovecraft was all about and I love it.
PhantomLord 1 year ago
@EldritchAnimation fuck yeah i love the statement of randolph carter (i just recently got done reading the case of charles dexter ward and was quite surprised to see him mentioned)
tuseroni 1 year ago
@EldritchAnimation I LOVE this please... please.... PLEASE make more!!!!!
HonorableTheft 11 months ago
@EldritchAnimation Cool!
hooobystick 9 months ago
Great video :D
benejsepul 1 year ago
freaky but yet cool
123borjas 1 year ago
The tone of the reading is fine, but he could enunciate a little more clearly at times, I think. Nevertheless, a thumb up.
varanid9 1 year ago
First time I saw this was around midnight. Got nightmares all night.
View100 1 year ago
@View100 Dammit! know I´m watching it and it´s midnight guess I know the rest of it Dammit!
redking133 1 year ago
AWESOME JOB!!! I just got into reading lovecraft. I wonder if that led and string bottle Works?
MrChristopher1997 1 year ago
@MrChristopher1997 with care and proper precautions use the string & bottle method to communicate with servitors, egregores, and spirits.
SororThothma 1 year ago
Excellent job!
BigFuckingPig 1 year ago
great and raw! perfect 5/5
seko0408888 1 year ago
I can't help but notice that the narrator sounds almost the same as the character NPC Zert from Temple of Elemental Evil.
easyasgoblinpie 2 years ago
Good short.
HaploSchaffer 2 years ago
love how lovecraft gives the crims foreign surnames hahaha his racism is funny now
dontleademsomuch 2 years ago
Excellent animation. Very entertaining. Poor narration, however.
As Fagan queried, I will answer (not tryin' to slam the video, just being honest):
1.) Poor enunciation.
2.) Improper pronunciation (i.e. REP-uted, instead of re-PUT-ed, etc.)
All in all, totally enjoyed the video (just thought I'd offer some constructive criticism and clear up any misunderstanding about people's opinion of the narrator).
WeAreGeo 2 years ago 3
An excellent job, but why do so many HPL narrators speak so fast? HPL's horror was of the creeping kind, and I think readings of his stories should likewise creep slowly into the ear, like spiders crawling over your brain. Slow down.
genericmeatunit 2 years ago 7
Simply wonderful work! This is definitely getting favored.
MrWajax 2 years ago
Where is it written in the story that the T.O.M. got their souls locked in bottles ?
I persume that he'd sooner conserved souls of his shipmates in the bottles and somehow his body like the "lizardmen" (reptoids) from other stories.
Hefarius 2 years ago
Good Job, this is really good!!
MadManMJ01 2 years ago
I made a video about an old man. Check it out. -Greg
gregorybrandt 2 years ago
The animations scare the hell out of me. I wish todays literature would be this good
sanegamer123 2 years ago 3
That narrative was so amazing, my ears have erections.
blitz236 2 years ago 36
great!!!
Necronancyboy 2 years ago
Why do people keep knocking the voice over, I think the guy reads it fine and the animation sums up what the strory well.
FaganThePagan 2 years ago 47
@FaganThePagan
They expect high production even on simple youtube clips. I quite enjoyed the video myself.
CvijaFaQ 1 year ago
The voice is often quite hard to decipher especially for non-native speakers, otherwise it's a great job!
Taurooster 2 years ago 2
This is really excellent! I've set many of my Cthulhu Mythos stories in Kingsport, and I have a character who lives on the porch of the Terrible Old Man's haunted house -- and the opening shot shewing the house in this video is delicious in it eerie atmosphere. Thanks for a great video!
MrWilum 2 years ago
creepy but some what funny
1wiremu 2 years ago
beautiful
Nicky3guns 2 years ago
Bravo!!!
c4m2d3 2 years ago
The brutal V/O ruins some nice animation.
Too bad.
speckofdust73 2 years ago
you'd think he would drive off.
moriya2k2 2 years ago
It was a great story.
601lowkey 2 years ago
good movie great job
matse109 2 years ago
Great !
TheBookWorld 2 years ago
This is a VERY good interpretation of one of Lovecraft's works. Lovecraft's craft of conjuring a story, rather than telling it, really brings the reader into HIS reality whether they want to or not. His descriptive writing was so powerful that some believe he, and his readers, may have actually MANIFESTED some of his works into reality through shear BELIEF! Unless they existed to begin with and he was just their tool to announce their presence. This film does his work justice.
Yapostadodat 2 years ago
I can understand everything he's saying.
DetrimentaLSuffering 2 years ago 2
AMAZING!
JakMacMan 2 years ago 2
try talking slower instead of talking incredibly fast. It makes it seem like you don't really care about the subject at hand, like you can't wait to finish reading.
Talk Slower.
DaRiceking 2 years ago 5
Insn't this the captain mentioned in the "Shadow over inssmouth"???
Kharmazov 2 years ago
I couldnt hear a single thing the narrator said, and my volume was turned up loud.
DroxDD 2 years ago 2
then you, sir, need to fix your speakers
Haydeez64 2 years ago 2
That was Great
Good work
justinian12345 2 years ago
AWSOME! :D but i still wanna know who the old man really where :P
muffeman 2 years ago
word things so they make sense
LastShaggoth308 2 years ago
Love the art work !
irishbear78 2 years ago
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GAY AHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
911Eggplant 2 years ago
that was AWESOME!!
tanksmallcape 2 years ago
Simply amazing! The best Lovecraftian adaptation I've ever seen!
DarkBlazeShredder 2 years ago
cool story!!
jeffhardyhotmail 2 years ago
Freaky story!!!
horrisbigskidderpoop 2 years ago
epic
stringwhore 2 years ago 3
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That's a cool animation.
sadly the voice is really shit
bad intonation and a shitty accent, shame...
anonvscos 2 years ago
Well, its better then you or I could ever do, thats for sure...
Alexe84 2 years ago 6
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Not really.
mcbedford21 2 years ago
you sir are a dumbfuck, I poop on you.
Alexe84 2 years ago 3
how are you going to talk shit about someones natural accent? idiot.
jtgilmore13 2 years ago
He is reading a little too fast, but then he does have to condense it all into a four-minute film and, of course, he did have the balls to actually get up and do it, which counts for a great deal in my estimation.
Overall I thought this was rather good.
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FAG
TheCaptured 2 years ago
vary nice
grds67 2 years ago
This showed also HPL's xenophobia. The three robbers are all 'foreigners', a Dago, a Polak and a Chicano.
bicheral 2 years ago 6
There's more evidence of his fear of strangers in Dunwich horror, horror at red hook.
darkness442003 2 years ago
Anyone notice how the statue at 0:55 looks like Cthulhu?
Skelpoleth 2 years ago 3
Yes Skel and I think that's who it is I mean the old man was a sea captain he probly saw a Cthulhu related event ^^
Shinobi241 2 years ago 3
A good, strong, start. Always good to see people loving Lovecraft enough to want to work with his stuff. Suggestions: Try reworking it with more attention to the manner in which everthing is lit. Also, the narrator comes off as being...well, indifferent... to the subject matter. Watching this, I can't help feeling that you might recruit a woman with a nice, rich voice to do the narration, and benefit greatly from it. Neat work, though. Keep at it. I'd like to see more.
wantonseed 2 years ago 2
I'm sorry having to tell you that I'd appreciate your art work much more if you had not neglected one very important ingredient of your oeuvre: There are reasons why articulation and speech are being trained...sorry...but that was...bad reading... :o/
Sharkwell 2 years ago 2
This story gave me chills. Esspecially the old stones, and him talking to the bottles childishly.
Amazing work. Truly amazing work.
newgoblin36 2 years ago
Geez... Awesome animation, almost exaclty as I imaginated it when I read it in my HPL compilation book...
You guys have to make one for the "El Pescador del Cabo Halcón", don't know tough the title in english...
PsycoCruser 2 years ago
This is wonderful. Very Lovecraft feel. Just great.
MaxWriter 2 years ago
Amazing work.
Opalauge88 2 years ago 2
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huggodepaynns 2 years ago
Great work!!
MiGoFungus 3 years ago 3
Let's see what else you can do, EldritchAnimation.
TheNeocatZone 3 years ago
This showed also HPL's xenophobia. The three robbers are all 'foreigners', a Dago, a Polak and a Chicano.
cthulhurulez1 3 years ago 6
Damn the terrible old man did some old gangsta shit
darkness442003 3 years ago 3
Make more!
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rambo2039 3 years ago
Dark, epic, amazing! HP would be proud to see this!
SurpentineSacrifice 3 years ago 2
excellent work!
boiavacca 3 years ago
your right this would make an excellent movie!
Just watching this video gets me hooked.
It seems like a classic that would never get old.
jakemonrean 3 years ago
I hope to see some kind of similar animation someday in cinema... it´s really amazing!
Admend 3 years ago
amazing
SoulEater2583 3 years ago
This scared me shitsless.
Excellent work and wonderfull animation!
mangamadde 3 years ago 2
I really liked that!
Zasserman 3 years ago
I really enjoyed this. I thought I had read of Lovecraft's work but this story was new to me. Thank you.
MobyDicksWife 3 years ago
It was as dry and sinister, as the H.P. wrote it. Thank you.
pumkinpi2 3 years ago
fucking brilliant!
femoman 3 years ago
the voice is horrible, very nasal and he mutters many of the words. which is a shame, because the animation, direction and the atmosphere of this is really good.
jahoodunrama 3 years ago
Voice fits perfect.
SSandfriendstudios 3 years ago
i shouldve said the voiceover work is horrible, the actual voice of the actor is sufficient. but the speech is horrible.
jahoodunrama 3 years ago
Yeah, he's a good voice for what the story is about ^_^
Skelpoleth 2 years ago 3
Great Video, but... mMmM I don`t like the voice.
MrsKennedy01 3 years ago
love it!! :)
BlackNeon9 3 years ago 2
damn that old d00d fuck them up
YoungDirectorBros 3 years ago 5
awesome work, very creepy
EvilLordZim76 3 years ago
Great work
darkness442003 3 years ago
Awesome! I love how you guys did this classic tale. Could you also do The Statement of Randolph Carter? That Lovecraft story is pretty creepy. :D
physalis17 3 years ago
I was very impressed by this.
MrPSGifford 3 years ago
A very good video. I felt chills in the end. I love that it is never disclosed WHAT kills the men.
CryptidHunter13 3 years ago 3
Great video
JanoSeishu420 3 years ago
good. a different voice would have been nice.
maverik90 3 years ago 3
Stupid old peeps stupid...........but wise
HalliganKid 3 years ago
Such a naughty naughty terrible old man
chrispace2007 3 years ago 2
Great video. Only thing I noticed was the dude pronounced the word taciturn as 'tass-i-turn', instead of 'tack-turn'. Otherwise awesome. :D
Kalebfenoir 3 years ago
what a terrible old man
SolidSnakeBrawl 3 years ago
Very good. It did capture some of the atmosphere. The voice over was ok.
beldapriest 3 years ago
Very good. I thought the voiceover was a little stilted at times and certain words didn't come out quite right. The voice was also a bit deadpan at points. But a good effort that put shivers up my spine...
caterpillarmarch 3 years ago
fuckin awesome!!
have you heard the hplhs 1930s style radio dramas for mountains of madness or dunwich horror check em out if not ,very well done
chtulhugod 3 years ago
great
lleeiiaaa 3 years ago
Awesome!!!
Purdey600 3 years ago
Make more right now! Like Cthulhu rising up from Ryleh and stomping the shit out of a seaport town before being cosmically sealed back up again by some jealous elder gods working together for that sole purpose. Lovecraft never wrote anything like that but you'd have to take some author's license. :) That would give me a huge chubby!
Necroticpus 3 years ago
that's a good job. Well done
KafkaDevasto1 3 years ago
very very nice
T3RM1X 3 years ago
hte first bit reminds me a lot of Thief (computer game series), but with less dextrous articulation.
lygophile 3 years ago
Simply great! Thanks for it :-)
elektramunhoz 3 years ago
really awesome, nicely done, when reading Lovecraft's stories always it feels so real that i feel I'm really there too..
Darkmoon0999 3 years ago
That was really good, great voiceover and excellent storytelling. The animation was good and creepy, too! Liked this a lot !
Pennyspy 3 years ago
Haven't yet read that story, but i can say your style and animation is really good. I liked it a lot.
MortosSoulStealer 3 years ago
GREAT JOB
4shizzal 3 years ago
great job
the nariting at the start was anoying because it was kinda mumbly but then it just adds to the effect
great job
BonPhire 3 years ago
Master of horror, suspense, fantasy and darkness
kaosproductions666 3 years ago