Motivational Speech

[SuperIcizzle]

He seems very real!  Like it!

[dittoandco]

Great message - you didn't use any 'ums' or other filler words. You truly have a heart for wanting to help others. I know this was just a school project, but you're doing better than 90% of people that get up there to speak and just read their speech. Nice job of speaking from your heart.

[vlcwildfire]

I think you did an Awesome Job! Don't listen to all these haters, it's because they are the ones that are miserable and they don't have a life but is good just to put others down. Haters get a life!

[91ahmed91]

Nice video.

Hey guys its off the topic but if you are in a mood to see some real life hero, then watch:

watch?v=-S74HuDIRa4

[streetbikerbob]

three V's? tha fuck?

[MAcritique]

BORING

[VoiTuboUser]

I hate this type of projects!!, i have one right now too

[theseeker2k5]

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[SilverBurito]

More critisism:

The speech is a little vague. You must learn to make your speeches more enticing. It sounds like you're just talking and not necessarily making a speech.

Saying "Dream big. Have big dreams. You know, if we all didn't have dreams we'd ha- we'd be miserable." in a low, rushed monotone doesn't do much for me. Improve the speech content and the delivery~

Here's a couple of speakers I loved. Good luck ^^

watch?v=MRtZHxVaAt8&feature=re­lated

watch?v=UizlkbS61mQ

[SilverBurito]

I like the effort. Don't listen to those who are unconstructive. We all need practice~

There's a few things that you need to work on, but it's pretty good considering it was a school project.

I say you should continue being a motivational speaker, for you are bound to change lives if you have the inspiration and effort ^^. Some critisism I will give you is that you need to practice not fidgeting and stuttering as much. The speech itself also leaves much room for improvement.

[nickiaaaaa]

wow hes great. smooth voice too. good to listen to

[kryktor]

you took zig ziglars speech about dreams. lol

[oformeat]

are you stoned

[kryktor]

lmfao. i think he iz stoned, thats funny

[underleft]

I don't think your dream example is what you mean. Dreams in your sleep is something you don't have any control over. Dreaming about goals and life is a figure of speech. You took it too literal. The reason the students that weren't allowed to dream were so misserable is because they couldn't get any damn sleep. How would you feel if someone kept waking you up everytime you started to dream. It had nothing to do with dreaming.

[Rasiethemup]

check out Kareem Moody's motivational talks, what do you think of him?

[kpasoman]

Good message. good advise from tiartrop. All you need is a professional attire, keep speaking at every chance you can. and don't let anyone stop you.

[Imamar2]

This must be most horrible motivational speech ever. It only made me feel killing myself, or just shutdown this video.

Dude, learn a little, then teach others how to live.

Nice stripe shirt though, if ya like stripes.

[nickrb23]

just stupid. why did y ahhhh nevermind. that sucked.

[powpowtucker]

Awesome!!!!!!!

[InfiniteMentor]

great video thanks for posting!

[welcome2try]

Great words young man, you are way ahead of the game. Listen to this young man...

[tiartrop]

Also, try and work more with vocal volume to stress points. You have good pace, but you can speed up a bit at examples and slow or pause at main points for added affect. Overall, good job. For a school project, that was a nice effort, and so I've kept in mind that point of professionalism. Again, good work!

[tiartrop]

Wow, I can tell you're nervous. The stutter or the quick changes show a lot, but you do a good job of hiding it. Work on the "and"s in the first part of the speech. Be careful with the repetitive gestures, and especially be mindful of pointing--it has some negative connotation. Stop fidgeting with your clothes, also, be careful with all the stories. The relation to your life is good, but even if you try and deny the pity points, it still sounds like you're prominently placing them, whining.

[djwheels77]

Allowed to dream and Not Allowed to dream?? WHAT THE HELL???!! THAT IS MIND CONTROL YOU FREAK!! YOU CANNOT CONTROL ONE'S THOUGHTS! GET A LIFE!

[koyaainoregon]

Good Good Good! I like him!

[davidhyner]

it is all too easy to critisise others who stand up and speak up. Those who knock anyone who "has a go" maybe needs to see if they could do better before throwing any stones. There are thsoe that can, and those that do, anyone can, but VERY FEW do !

keep going if you believe in it !

[pylejm3]

Thank you for the comments, whether constructive or not. Please bear in mind that this was a school project. In no means was it meant to be a professional endeavor. Therefor, please refrain from profanity. Thanks!

[bigstickhockey9]

totally thought one v woulda been vagina

[Sergio001R]

Are you fucking serious??? you sound like a fucking 3rd grade teacher. Grow up, motivate yourself and if you can't, then you prob weren't made to do anything good at all anyway

[pylejm3]

thank you for your comment. This was a school project, not a professional endeavor. In the future, please refrain from profanity on this wall.

[vlcwildfire]

@Sergio001R you stink Get a Life!!!

[vlcwildfire]

@Sergio001R You Stink Get a Life!!!

[slobozzel]

no no no. he suck`s. u got no talent

[pakojivise]

he doesnt belive in it... this guy can only kill your energy and put you to your bed to dream about motivation.

energy man, energy...

[pylejm3]

Thank you for the constructive criticism. I have no plans of making motivational speaking an occupation, but appreciate the advice.

[FLPman]

i like the message.. but i get the feeling this guy is doing the his final oration for a community college public speaking course

[pylejm3]

It was a public speaking course. Guess I can't fool anyone, haha. thanks for the comment.

[alkrawiec]

Thank you very much for your effort to motivate others. I am full of admiration to what you do despite all the difficulties. I hope to succeed in persuing my dreams and gain some self confidence against all odds and negativity.

[barber747]

Why'd it cut off at 4:07?

[luxmigiri]

i know all these thing and i have vision, dream but i easily feel defeated when i faced difficulties. you are really inspirable.

[NoorAlqoloob87]

Thanks man .

I loved it . it is all in our head if we beleive that we can do it we will .

Take care

[Marc678816]

obviously the students who werent' allowed to dream were miserable they kept gettin woken the fuck up

[xcgeek]

Exactly. People dream when in REM sleep, and without REM sleep our brains can't recover so people will get sleep deprivation from such a study.

[oosh79]

u sound like joel osteene u queer..

[oosh79]

i like dreams..dreams are dreams..and if u dream the dream, your dreams will bigger than your biggest dream..and if u dream, dream the dream of all dreams...live ur dream..

[Kikikin1]

dreaming in the context your referring to should be "day dreaming" not dreaming in the literal sense, we ALL have REM sleep and we ALL dream in the literal sense as long as no one wakes us up during our REM,i know im being critical, but everthing else was great, nice post, i love the positivity, you're right, keep it up

[Kikikin1]

the reason those who didn't function well while they were forced to wake up during there dreams was because they were forced to wake up during their REM sleep which is VERY important to get, so that's why they were miserable, if you dont get REM sleep you'll feel like you didnt get any sleep

[daejinko100]

thank you!

[flippychunk]

thanks for posting this kind of videos!!!