"Omni - History Begins" - Ch 1.

[ericluc13]

i wish this was a manga if i wasn't making mine i would try to make this into a manga beacuse the story is amazing

[comicoholic]

u should make ur own comics

[omniuniverse]

@comicoholic Ya that would be pretty cool. Maybe in the future we might. We're working on a bunch of different things, one of the major things being the next book in this series.

[azgone34]

Great story line its like I'm reading an actuall novel :D

[omniuniverse]

@azgone34 I'm glad that you like it but it is an actual novel. This was done after it was published and this is the first chapter of it. We've got the whole book on here too.

[azgone34]

@omniuniverse Fantastic!

[ScarRebel]

DUDEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahahahah

[omniuniverse]

@ScarRebel What? Is something wrong?

[ScarRebel]

@omniuniverse No nothing wrong at all, I just love it! It's great!!!

[omniuniverse]

@ScarRebel Oh, ok.  Well I'm glad that you like it.

[rockerszoom3]

not bad

[doudman44]

Thanks a lot  for this.

[Psykiro]

This is really good. It reminds me of WANTED the graphic novel not the crappy movie.

[SlashSeven7]

This is awesome

both super heroes and reading, pure gold!

[quetzalgirl101]

It sounds really cool^^

[DAROLDful]

pretty good

[DarkFriendship911]

This!!! sooo sound's like marvels civil war, dude pretty good man 5/5

[SAXReido]

I like it, sounds interesting already ^_^

[KevinS1999]

O__O wow but heros always win

[mercblue22]

Hello,

Thanks for sending me a link to your comicbook story, it reads very nicely. I am a fan of audio comics, published or fan made, and the narrator does a fantastic job reading this fluently. (Thats not an easy thing to do!)

Great job on the start of your comic, I look forward to more in the future!

[luna666star]

hey this is amazing i love it

[Ultimate2119]

Sweet. Sounds very interesting. Are you planning to make a comic book, or more audiobooks?

Btw, I agree with DragonLordSword, it also reminds me of Marvel's Civil War

[omniuniverse]

@Ultimate2119 Well this is an actual published book and the book came out before this did. It would make a great comic though, and we are working on possibly making a motion comic to post on here of a few chapters. I've already got a ton of the audiobook on here as well. I've put the videos in a playlist that goes in the correct order.

[Ultimate2119]

@omniuniverse Oh cool. I'll be sure to check out more of them then

[wakigo45]

hehe cool storyline and nice video.

[expertghost10]

cool

[battim]

cool

[adamstrange07]

Good stuff bro. Keep it going.

[RebellionPro]

Pretty Nice man keep going at it

[jmdowden75644]

Great... keep it coming

[life4extreme]

dam u guys r good. U know action then trust then the sad part were someones leave somebody in charge but they were leaders awesome dude

[DragonLordSword]

Its great but reminds me of Civil War

[omniuniverse]

@DragonLordSword Maybe just this chapter but this one just explains the how the book's history is different from ours.

[SuperMariotheKing100]

Awesome ^-^

[frostflame4444]

this rocks...can i please make a movie of it for u plz i'll kill to pm me if u say yes

[Jx9O]

great

[turcein]

this is pretty awesome

[TheDemonLives]

This is pretty good, I'll listen to the rest of it soon. This has potential to be a really good comic, too.

[BatmanWTSOG]

Way Past Cool! I liked it!

[juxter99]

is there any action?

[omniuniverse]

@juxter99 Ya, there is a ton of action in this book. This is only the first page and it just shows how the book's world differs from ours.

[AlMtathis]

that was good

[Katazai]

It would be awsome if you could make it comic or a cartoon animation with cool drawing style like in old times, like JLA is drawen maybe, its a great begining :D

[baycrum267]

Cool you got a DA?that might be a good place to post this.

[narutouzumaki134]

THAT WAS REALLY AWESOME 5\5!

[hydrowhatever]

its good really good

[xAerialAvengerx]

That was awesome!You have to publish this book thingy! :D

[omniuniverse]

@xAerialAvengerx This is a published book and it has been out since Jan 1, 2009.

[pinkcatwoman777]

bravo! bravo! perfect : )

[Eckoboy16]

Nicely done dude, I wish Marvel or D.C. would take a look at what story writing is supposed to be like lol again Kudos bro.

[Sunflowercarpet]

cool

[PQ5]

nice! great voice ^^

[Kendrix92]

This is a fantastic story man.

[Alice2931]

go HEROS!!!

[IdieDreamPlayGround]

hehe now im pump up ^-^ and thats just the prelude!

5/5 awsomness vid XD

[slyer0]

nice i like it

[jrsalais]

wat is this

[omniuniverse]

@jrsalais It's the first chapter of (Omni - History Begins), a book of epic proportions. It's a published book and this is the audio version.

[cutesunnygirl]

Very interesting and true (:

[kyler1115]

go heros!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

[drakozero8]

and gosh man We need an anime that can makes America seem cool cause how in hell is japan the only place where things happen with monsters come on lol cause gosh its so stereotypical of how japan seems so cool with there anime even if the country its self is not its so populated and hot

[drakozero8]

wow so Tokyo always gets the cool heros lol but yea cool very nice story man all you need is a good artist and to make this popular and you could have the next great cartoon cause American cartoons blow right now if America had more cartoons like Avatar the last air bender then things would be so much cooler but yea MAKE THIS INTO A CARTOON  man

[omniuniverse]

@drakozero8 Were working on doing a lot of stuff like that. But if you liked it there's a lot more of the book on here.

[drakozero8]

@omniuniverse well that seems real cool to hear but if u guys go for the cartoon stuff go for the anime look its much more popular cause America lot there art in cartoons sadly

[omniuniverse]

@drakozero8 Well actually we're thinking of trying to do an motion comic that has Samurai Jack style art.

[drakozero8]

@omniuniverse ooo ok thats cool Samurai Jack style art is great (but put some anime style into some aspects of the art cause that's whats popular now adays)

[hardyboy990]

awsome

[DaTrutHurtz]

interesting...

[TheShnuz]

Ugh, a Heroes Union!? That would go corrupt the minute it's formed. I'll check the next couple vids of this series but if I find it's too idealistic and filled with 80's cartoon moral of the story's, then I'm out. Well written and good pronunciation.

[omniuniverse]

@TheShnuz Well this isn't a typical union as you would thing it is. Think of it more so as the justice league from the cartoons. Just in the sense where you have a bunch of heroes and some are sent to help on certain missions or protect certain areas.

[PuppetGurl1]

it's pretty good what u should do is read and make like an anamation while your reading so its like we can see them instead of imagining them in our head ;)

[teenkitsune]

This is so well written, good job and tank you for sending me this, seriously it's really good and different than most superhero media.

[deadshot278]

yo this is really interesting. thanks for sending me this

[pokemonrockstar45]

i really like it dude so great job on the background knowledge for the good and evil parts

[hentaiNOODELS]

cool

[Gamnash4]

Very nice.

[justen25]

Really Good.

[kai258369]

nice vid

[dbzkizar]

brill

[wwe682]

wow powerful story man thx 4 tellin me about it.

[awesomepredatorfan]

thx dude i never wonderd about this intil now

[ufc916]

Great story man add me very interesting thanks alot

[Clonetroop1450]

thanks for the message great story line so far its awesome!

[JPH230]

This seems great......Its original nobody else i know does these kinds of videos

[BlazingBullet10000]

really cool really like it

[PoseidonHunter]

Cool!

[isiahhassonjones]

good job keep it up but it would be cool if u had some animation to it

[ionlitio85]

nice,really nice for a ¿ebook?

[omniuniverse]

Well it's a published book that an audiobook was made from.

[GhostReviewer]

Great job.

[restless0me]

it;s awsome dude good job 5/5

[SFXBOXRANGER]

Hey not bad, tommorrow I'll send you my video that I am currently uploading

[victorwonder]

Thank you for sharing this with me. I indeed like superheroes and I thoroughly enjoyed this audio book.

[acidoverride82]

You know your diein to put some images to that! I would be! Get your animation on!!

[omniuniverse]

I know, I'd like to make this a motion comic.

[DurhaMa1]

good video, keep it up

[foofighter1290]

This is Great My Friend. I'm Glad I Saw It!

5/5

[novfiftn]

good base i liked it/

[SalmanWarsi28]

I really like this video. Good job, omniuniverse.

[supersonic164]

nice

[darkreaper234]

nice story

[yyydanyyyy]

pretty good story :D i'll check out the rest

[skcollins1212]

This is a great narrative with an even greater message regarding the spiritual war of municipalities. I would love to hear more regarding the Superhero Omni. Thank you, for sharing your story with me.

[cosmicdivinitydotcom]

My children will be listening to this as they love audio stories. They actually have been waiting for me to find one for them and this one is perfect :) Thanks for sharing!

[omniuniverse]

That is great. I originaly started writing this for my kids.

[McJanbo]

NICE! Thanks for your PM! :D

[transbots]

wow this is awsome i await 4 more

[omniuniverse]

Well I've got a ton posted right now, so there is more to be listened to.

[Darthlongi]

I liked it.

Thanks for sending it to me.

[loveisheway777]

great video ! thank you for posted, looking forward to see more !

Love & light

[radman107]

You've peaked my interest, does any part of this story have dialogue by the characters? I'll be watching...

[omniuniverse]

Oh yes, this is the only chapter that doesn't. But I have a ton more posted at the moment, so I hope you like it.

[proferci]

this is really good and enjoyable

5stars

[Krathor18]

cool story dude, ill be sure to check back often

[tHeReTaRd416]

haha thanks bro!

[HULK91X16]

Hey thanks for shareing the story it was great.

[omniuniverse]

Well there is a lot more of it to, so I hope you like the rest.

[Dariusnify]

@omniuniverse real good man thanks for sharing that

[projectprototype02]

this was good

[labontefan15]

Interesting so far.

[QueenBigmac5]

This is pretty cool and Interesting 5/5

[Katalyzt]

Interesting...

[TiaTitan]

this is a cool idea, I've never seen anyone post videos like this, where each video is a narrated chapter. I look forward to finishing your story!

[joshchamber9]

thanks man loved it

[avatimmy45]

cool

[mellowillow]

this is awesome. nice voice too

[PR222]

great job!!!

[Herobrandon]

Wow this very cool thank you for sending this to me.I greatlly aprciate(spelling?)this man.

[Rubaka]

Awesome stuff!

[eatingfood1]

i subbed

[SSJThomas15]

Its Great 5/5 can't wait till Chapter 2

[omniuniverse]

There is a chapter 2. Right now about 250 pages of 603 are posted

[lst1195]

good watching.

[MrSamWitwer]

Nicely done!

[badluckninja]

pretty cool. have to check it out again later when im fully awake

[thedarkshadow100]

Very cool video.

[VICTORKALEL]

Very very creative !!

[CuddlyCallf]

That was brilliant!

[CreativeHot]

great book

[DaLiLFlipJr]

Pretty nice man,keep it up.

[NubianTribesman]

good stuff i think i'll check out more

[chungzo]

You were right i did like it however i felt as if that some ideas were taken from old man logan and civil war

[omniuniverse]

Nope this is brand new story. Plus the story actualy takes place 40 after this, in 2012.

[Sirlie08]

cool thx ^^

[Edguinard]

Nice!!! Let me know when part two comes around...

[tbonepearson]

Cool!

[AfricanCentreforCom]

Absolutely creative. Omni depicts the literary altruism craved by man. Indeed in man's dream to achieve a better platform for goodness in the earth, dark forces have always waged wars eventhough time seems to asset that they never finally win.

[ColinMeloy91]

Great book! :) U should make a movie and great narrating voice.

[avindarkness]

a movie someday?

[omniuniverse]

We're trying.

[kintakintyea]

A gweed idea tae pet yer beuikies wirds entae soon ma freen' gweed luck tae yea!

[thexultimatexmaster]

cant wait to hear more sunds like a great book

[xXCatCrissAngelFanXx]

i actually like the voice...! ohoh now i have to listen to more

[batmandream1]

nice but i don't really like the audio*the guy telling it* but great start

5stars

[omniuniverse]

Sounds a lot better before it goes through youtube, they do something to it and it sounds not as good.

[thefreshestprince123]

great job

[omniuniverse]

Thanks

[VampireLord66]

Hmm we shall see lol

[VampireLord66]

Interesting, the Villian Vector sounds a lot like Palpatine from Star Wars

[kesz40]

Good job!

I appreciate your commitment. To sum up-

- many thanks

[omniuniverse]

Well I'm glad you like it.

[cotloner]

rofl, evil was never the real reason behind war but ok, i can go with that. Interesting fact,

OMNI means all in Latin

OMNIpotent, OMNIscient etc.

[omniuniverse]

When it says evil it means the supervillians, those who want nothing more than chaos, destruction, and death.

And Omni is called Omni because he is all powerful.

[saleemkalhoro420]

START IZ NICE

[animangamanda]

thx !!!!!!!!!!!!! ^0^ XDDDD

[luisywilli]

wow thanks for let me know about this book.

[rainbowrider2012]

* * * * *

[shia2113]

this sounds like a freakin amazing book! i gotta listen to the whole thing now! and possibly buy the book if i can find it.

[omniuniverse]

good to hear that and you can find it on amazon

[bambinoyi]

u r  awesome

[rblwoaclu]

thank you..

[RonRay]

This sounds like a really GOOD series!

I am a big audiobook fan and look forward to listening to ALL of this, just as soon as I'm through with the one I'm currently listening to.

★★★★★

[MrDCWood]

Nice little audiobook, mate. I like it. Good narrative and intriguing concept. Reminds me of the Incredibles and Marvel Civil War. Is this a fan production? If it is, it's rather good indeed.

Cheers, man. Looking forward to checking out the rest.

[omniuniverse]

No this is not a fan production. My dad (the author of the book), a guy named JoeyBonezz, and myself put this together in a makeshift sound room made of strips of foam hung from the ceiling. JoeyBonezz read it and I have done most of the editing.

[MrDCWood]

It's very interesting indeed. Where can I obtain a copy?

[omniuniverse]

You can get a copy from a number of online sites. We are trying to get it on shelves but it takes time. Usually Amazon has the best prices and they have the paperback and hardcover versions.

[MrDCWood]

I'll keep an eye out, mate. Good luck with the marketing. I'm trying to get my own novel self-published and marketed at the moment.

Good luck and may your dad find success.

[omniuniverse]

Hey, if you're looking for a publisher, check out ours. It's called Rejection Press. You can google it. If you want to contact us email omniuniverse at gmail