The FanFiction Critic, episode 24, "Oops-A-Daisy," part 6

[superfan7100]

isn't parenthood hard even when you'r old enough 

[BethGoth15]

I've never read the books nor am I a fan of the franchise. I've only seen four of the movies and I could write more accurate fanfiction than that.

[Astromaxis]

JUNO was very stereotypical in the romantic angle :\ mainstream stuff turns out too sexist for both sexes :\

[WhiteWings930]

Why do people keep giving birth to twins in fanfiction? And I dislike Juno too.

[HyaenusDominae]

Wow, author. Way to show them telling him about the order, rather than, you know, just saying it. In fact, it would have been a better ending if they had just chopped off the "So we did," and ended with him saying, "Tell me everything." Not it would have salvaged this god awful story.

[HyaenusDominae]

2:38-2:55 Of course, isn't it just as likely that Draco could become a spy for the Death Eaters? Plus, I think the Death Eaters would catch on to his act pretty quickly, considering that, you know, he told them he didn't want to be a Death Eater. Well, I guess it's a good thing the characters are just as ignorant as the author.

[HyaenusDominae]

1:22-1:44 The author's like, "Lawl u c wat i did thar?" God, so stupid...

[caso8]

this was excellent!!

[FanFicCritic]

Great review! This story was awful!!!

[OceanOfTwilight]

i'm hannah b thanks for reviewing. and lol kick me in the shin! great review!!

[triplequeen]

"Dumbledore's funeral was very sad."

No shit. I thought it would be a big party.

[OceanOfTwilight]

@triplequeen lol!

[Kallypso8]

I hate pregnancy fics. They always seem to make everything trivial. Good review. I don't get Ginny/Draco at all.