Candy with Candi ("place part2)

[ZeppelinFloydRoses]

She sounds as common as any other female hip fuckedy hop artist. fire that ghetto whore.

[trgoblin]

This is cool

[FunBobbyMarley]

It has legs, make her run with it.

[micSixUp]

It can only be more of the same PhaTnEs$!

[micSixUp]

Candy could be a little more intense on the vocals, otherwise This is Phat! Hit!

[illmissmusick]

This was the scratch vocals nothin even sounds anything like this its so bangin now watch beauty,hate,dont be afraid ul hear a better version

[micSixUp]

You are right I did hear the other version and I left a comment...It is what it is...I LOVE IT!

[lovely141414]

ew. she GOTTA GO

[FunBobbyMarley]

ItHasLeggs!

[secretcaptivation]

I'm probably too late to put out any of my ideas but I'd like to say I love where it's going. I'm not musically literate so I'm not sure if I'm just rambling but I'd love to hear more backing vocals during the chorus to bring it out a bit more, other than that I think it rocks :-)

[CasualDaveDotCom]

I think the chorus is the right length, it's that her delivery builds and the tension at the end of the phrase needs a release at some point, a blast or a break down, could be at the bridge which we didn't get too

[CasualDaveDotCom]

I like the singing part but it sounds like a build up and not a chorus, the drop back to the verse is a bit of a let down, I hear something hard and heavy as a chorus after that singing part ala evanescence bring me to life chorus but more groove heavy

[Jzarecta]

That beat is way too mellow. You should check what RZA do with the beats, is razorsharp beats during chorus: look for video "Texas Method Man" or go to video id: 1lzdmWihSHk

[jdavidb]

your jam kicks ass. The singing chorus is great compared to the verses. I'm having to stretch to get used to her rapping. Yep your parts are great!

[sdddlt]

I like the cool and relaxed flow of this tune...

[illmissmusick]

Hey chris tell areacontrol thanx...Candi Gurl

hey my new youtube channel is illmissmusick...

[TalkMusicBiz]

Send me your personal email address to me via my profile and let's talk. I got some ideas........... :)

[areacontrol]

I just showed this to JT. Next cube over. He's a pretty hip guy, kind of a NYC type of guy, listens to a lot of rap. Without my prompting, he said "put a hard hook in there, right after she says 'the victim is you', then bring it back to her smoothness. Then we danced around a while and I made placeholders for the proposed hook by screaming "WHAM WHAM WHAM" during the breaks. Also we both think Candi is pretty hot.

[areacontrol]

maybe some harsh drum breaks during the hook?

[areacontrol]

I think the hook should be more aggressive & hurt more. I think it would make a nice contrast against the rest of the song, and it would give some counterpoint to the quieter sections. :)