Poem of the Week "page so and so"

[fardja]

"Only in dreams, in poetry, in play do we sometimes arrive at what we were before we were this thing that, who knows, we are."

I borrowed that quote from my favorite author.. it seems just so appropiated ;)

[fardja]

"Only in dreams, in poetry, in play do we sometimes arrive at what we were before we were this thing that, who knows, we are."

I borrowed that quote from my favorite author.. it seems just so appropiated ;)

[poesho]

This is exactly what I was talking about in my vid response. That idea of whatever was on page so and so, or what will be on page so and so - very poigniant and intelligent.

I was wary at first jumping to the memories, but you make a stella point by the time you're through.

As someone trying to jump to his own next page so and so, thanks for writing this.

[tommy20003]

sorry but let me comment again.. i was looking at the views.. only 1128 while it should be having over 10thousand people watching it.. but things stupid such as that guy who change his voice and other stupid things u find 30 thousand+ watching it. to show how uneducated people are, and how retard they are... those people are really lost in Page so and so...

thnx again Danny...

[newcomposition]

thank you. really. that means alot.

[baugher3]

dud this is awesome! its very moral, very deep, i feel yah.

[newcomposition]

thanks.

[christopherinsc1981]

I liked it a lot very touching and deep poem.

[newcomposition]

thank you

[QuadropheniaBrosef]

this is beyond amazing man. your poems make me want to start writing some of my own. very powerful stuff! bravo

- Bill

[newcomposition]

thanks man... really

[tjkoz22]

Wow, this is so excellent. Visceral, moving. A very fine piece, indeed.

Tom

[newcomposition]

thank you thank you

[leftysergeant]

I majored in Special Education in college. I have a pretty good idea what you are going through here. Leaving the spelling behind, you have something to say worth listening to.

I count myself, in some ways, lucky that the slight learning problem I have always had was in math, rather than language skills. (Still a problem when I apply for some jobs, but there are ways around it.)

Don't get frustrated with the poetry. It helps heal some of the old trauma.

[newcomposition]

it does. using language against the ears that hurt you and make it work for you. it's what i do.

[AutumnRichard85]

Watching your video.... Brought back all thouse feelings i had left behind, yet were just under the suface. My heart bleeds with your. insync with understanding. thank you! I thought i was alone in my past.

[newcomposition]

nobody is alone anytime. thank you. for that you are a good person.

[illburnbush]

i truly relate to that poem on so many levels. no lie. the divorce. and also my whole life growing up in school ppl teachers counselors principals. telling me i needed to be in sped class. telling me im dyslectic. and im not good enough to be normal. well im glad im not (because i am extraordinary) i dont want to fit in what is so called normal. i will be an outsider until ppl see me for what i am (my own perfect)

[newcomposition]

perfection is only obtained by the gods. we can not be perfect, if we did, we would upset the gods. there is alot of my life out there for people to see. we, the collective we, have the ability to charge and overcome so much more then we could ever imagine. suggestion, walk like you walk, talk like you talk, dont expect anything special in this life to come, but that you have to work for it all. and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

[sandieblack]

cool.

Were you trying to submit this to the Tubewrite competition? If not, you should.

[newcomposition]

thank you. i will.

[greenjellybean326]

i like this a lot.

[newcomposition]

thank you very much

[truthnomad]

Thanks for letting us in and letting us experience that. I liked the vehicle and you can create imagery well. Very much how my memory works.

[newcomposition]

thanks.

[ZITZON]

who writes the fucking book? Stop reading it, stop reading it....stop.

I like this poem very much.......

[newcomposition]

this is all my stuff.

[ZITZON]

I know - I mean the poetic manifestation of the "book" as in the metaphor for memories.

[newcomposition]

ya.... that or a newspaper... thanks for gettin it