Land Of Fate ~ Draft

[SweetxSubmission]

its epic (: <3

and omg i love this song , write more hun <3

[brokencandy2112]

so kool u must make more

[Angel3002]

You should post some more! It's very interesting!

[kagomeroxs2]

omg, i love this story so far

[UntouchedxSakura]

Okay i love the plot of the story if this was an actual book i would def. Go out and read it. It was really good, keep it up! Tell me where u upload the stories cause i would love to read them

[Whenpenguinsfly309]

this is so good!!!

you must post more :DDD

[paigegothugs]

awwwwww this is so cute i wanna read more! this was great, it made me smile. good job! update soon :))

[xXSellChanXx]

:o BUT BUT....... IM SPEECHLESS :O MUST READ MORE!

[ariel331]

...OMG Must read more @_@!

XD Like that ending shot~ I could really hear it lol

[ForeverRoseify]

..... omg this is really good, i cant wait to read more ^_^

[anaisabelnogueira]

Really interesting *oo*

[CorryBabex3]

That song's called "Avalanche" by Marie Digby .. she's an awesome singer o.o

Sorry, out of line xD

So, honestly.. you're an awesomeness writer. I'd love to write a story, but therefore my english skills aren't good enough Dx

Yeah.. out of subject again ^^'

I can't wait to read more :3

Loves,

Corry x3

[lauraasauruss]

moreeeeee. :D

i loved ittt.

[hart6jess]

ahhh so awesome i read your other one and loved it but i love thison just as much you have some serious talent, can't wait for the next part ^_^

[moonbeadlight]

oh wow its really great please keep on doing this i can't wait for the next part :]

[xPassionBlossomx]

Nuuuu don't stop I want to read more !! O3O

This looks like another awesome story ^o^

You're such a good writer *is jealous of your skills :'3*

[Hitomi102]

Girl, do you have somewhere to read your stuff?

It's so good from what I've read!

I'm a writer too; have been for many years.

Any time you need help or wanna share stuff let me know.

I would love to be friends with another writer~

[deathgirlkiller]

Intresting! Maybe sometime I could show you my writing! =) Keep Writing!

[sasuino718]

i like this one BRING ON THE ROMANCE! Cx

i love writing too and this was awesome keep it up <3

[XShatteredWishX]

wow very intense maybe for the future plot-line add some big twists