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  • very beautiful!!!

  • I really miss Ryan's voice... Sometimes I close my eyes and try to hear it .... And I swear I can and it feels like I can see him too at times... But nothing would compare to having him right here holding me right now =D

  • That's probably why people tend to close their eyes when they kiss as well ...

  • They say that closing your eyes heightens the other senses.... And yay :) I feel happy you liked the song :)

  • @MsRinaKate

    ~Yes very true! Closing your eyes is the equivalence of losing one of your senses (sight) so that s very true! It probably makes taste and sound much better too!

    Jess

  • always love to watch your videos

  • @evavanjava

    ~Thanks Eva :) I always love your comments!

    Jess

  • It made me cry again....

  • @MsRinaKate

    ~Awww.

    Jess

  • :) so did you ever check out that Darren Hayes song? ;)

  • Yes it does :) like I said I fucking loving it ;) sometimes I close my eyes n just listen so that doesn't help I'm sure lol ;)

  • @MsRinaKate

    ~Ya sometimes closing your eyes makes it even more emotional! I know the feeling. Ya I did check out that song. I like it! Thanks again.

    Jess

  • I wish you could see my eye right now lol.... The right one lol ... It's twitching lol cause of my contact lol lol ;) cause I love this poem soooooo fucking much!!!!

  • @MsRinaKate

    ~Haha I m glad this poem had such power to do that. Thanks.

    Jess

  • Hey! I loved your face! Are very cool!!! Thumbs upppp

  • @PriscillaFreitasS2

    ~Aww thanks :)

    Jess

  • This one and the base ball one so far are my top two... Followed by the songs and the smile and kissing poems....

  • @MsRinaKate

    ~Thank you. I appreciate that! This one is probably my FAVORITE of EVERYTHING! Full moon lips is probably #2 !

    Jess

  • Jesse, nvm about the book thing I messaged you about. I wanted to get a hard copy anyway, so I went ahead and finally bought one :) How many poems do you have outside the ones in your book? Anything new from your "debut novel" on your homelessness :P

  • @bwc3821

    ~Sorry Brandon! I looked into it and had no idea how. I was gonna wait for a few weeks till my friend got home as he knows how to do stuff like that. I m illiterate when it comes to this haha. Wow that s awesome though! I m excited you got a book. My novel - I have about 80 pages written and haven t written in awhile but soon my life will be a bit more stable and I hope to feel well enough to finish it. Outside the ones in my book I probably over another 100 at least. :)

    Jess

  • Jesse,

    I like your rosy cheeks ;)..That was a great poem..sometimes i wish I had a time machine but .... I'll have to get your book anyway...

  • @5jeanbittersweet

    ~Haha aww thanks Jean. I was soooo cold haha brrrrr! *shiver*. I know what you mean! I always wish I had a time machine. I ve been secretly working trying to build one :) Ya! The link to order my book is on my youtube page! It won t let me post links here. Silly youtube.

    Jess

  • Awwww thanks Jesse :) That means alot coming from you! And it's good to hear from you too :)

  • @MsRinaKate

    ~You re welcome!! I mean it :) and I will get around to responding to the talk we ve been having! So don t worry.

    Jess

  • Dude... I've been watching you vids and I remember when I found out you had a place. I was so happy for you.

    Not sure why I felt I needed to tell you that. I know there are a lot of people hurting now and homeless, it's was so damn good to know there was one less and it couldn't have happened to a nicer guy.

    Your heart really seems to be in your poems and one day I would love to see the happiest poem you can muster...someday.

    Be well man and SMILE when you get the chance. :-)

  • @MoJoSB

    ~Hey I m glad you shared that with me. Always feel free to speak openly. I really appreciate that :) Ya even though I m in a better spot there s still a lot ahead of me to conquer but I m thankful for at least having shelter and great support from everyone on youtube. I know there are still a lot of ppl out there who are worse off and that still pains me. No worries! I do have some uplifting poems I will share soon :) Thanks for believing in me. Keep in touch!

    Jess

  • this poem rocks :D

  • @theJeNyfi

    ~Thanks Jenny :D

    Jess

  • This video totally won my heart.... :)

  • @MsRinaKate

    ~Awww I m glad :) If this touched you..you must have a big heart!! Nice to hear from you again :D

    Jess

  • You are crazy, but pretty cool and unique! I like! :-D

  • @lodproductions90

    ~Thanks a lot haha :)

    Jess

  • This is so sweet! I love you Jess!!

  • @lauradinosour

    ~Aww thanks :)

    Jess

  • Cool man. Impressive wording. Good job overall. cya

  • @AshHaze27

    ~Thank You. I put A LOT of thought into this.

    Jess

  • Very moving.

  • @GNYBerlin

    ~I m glad :) This poem is dear to my heart too.

    Jess

  • You're awesome! Happy New Year!

  • @own2eyes

    ~Thanks a lot! Happy New Year to you as well!

    Jess

  • What a coinky...So, am I !

  • @phfrankh

    ~Haha ya I can relate :P

    Jess

  • Beautiful.

  • @EllyMcG33

    ~Aww thanks :)

    Jess

  • thumbs up!

  • @10414windsorln

    ~Thanks :)

    Jess

  • Excellent man :)

  • @Rockguitarnow

    ~Thank you :D Really glad you enjoyed this poem! I put A LOT of thought into it!

    Jess

  • hey rosy cheeked jesse!....hope you reach your destination soon

    amiko!!....may your arms and poems fill with NO VACANCY signs in 2011...

    may you be loved from the past all the way to the future..and all in between!

  • @permacultureli

    ~Eliiiiiii! My rosy cheeks wanted me to say "hello" to you. Thanks a lot for that! Yes I think 2011 will bring great things. I have some stuff I m currently pondering for it. It s gonna be an interesting year. Things will never get dull ;)

    Jess

  • Nice rosey cheeks ^.^

    Definitely do another poetry reading soon :)

  • @MarmaladeMonster

    ~Thanks Megan :) I have a few in mind coming up soon I hope :)

    Jess

  • @MarmaladeMonster

    ~Dunno If I ll have rosey cheeks again though ;) haha

    Jess

  • @CreepyHermitPoet Well, you'll just have to go out in the cold for a little while before it :P

  • awesome! thumbs up! make more soon because im a BIG fan of your work. thanks for posting!

  • @goldenboy0712support

    ~Aww thanks :) As long as I have ANY viewers I ll continue to release videos when I m feeling up to it :)

    Jess

  • Very nice peom..

  • @36962able

    ~Thank you!

    Jess

  • I hope you can make a poem

    that tells about something

    that is hot in your country.

    For example, a poem about

    politics or satire to the

    officials or corrupt..

    GOOD LUCK, JEZZ!

    - EVAVANJAVA

  • @evavanjava

    ~Hmmm good idea. Eventually I will try and tackle more controversial topics! I think I have 1 or 2 like that already. I ll check.

    Jess

  • @CreepyHermitPoet great !!! I can not wait ...

  • wow i just watched this one with mouth agape,then i was woken and creeped out by the ringtone,brrr shudder

  • @Rosiexxmyrearendxx

    ~Hahaha lol I know what you mean. It even creeped me out, Rosie! ^ ^

    Jess

  • I like your rosy cheeks! Wonderful poem. I'm crying again! Crying and smiling. You're amazing Jesseroooo. ;P :)

  • @spickart4

    ~Aww Sarah...Glad you liked it! Haha Jesseroooo I kinda like that ;) Very creative! You re crying...and all I wanna do is make you smile ;)

    Jess

  • @nidgetucker

    ~Thanks a lot! I really tried to be original here and think outside the box :) Happy New Year to you too!

    Jess

  • i love this video, i like your poem and the most interesting part of this video is your face that looks like a clow :D but also cute and pretty funny

  • @evavanjava

    ~Haha ya I thought I would get into TRUE spirit for this poem :) I kinda look dorky but whatever I wanted to have fun with it :) Thank you!! That s sweet. Glad you enjoyed that! I was hoping you would like it :)

    Jess

  • @dancray ~ dude, it's sad that you label a free spirit like jesse as gay, (as if that's some sort of derogatory thing if he was). is it written somewhere that a sensitive and thoughtful kid must be gay? if you knew more about his poetry and videos you'd know he's ga ga over girls.

    2 things inherently wrong with this world. both caused by a neanderthal machismo to hide a guys real feelings. 1) the idea that any sensitivity is a weakness. 2) the idea that a woman is a possession.

  • @tomitstube ~ First let me say that I have removed the offending post, and that your 2 points are valid, and indeed troubling. I am sorry that you thought the word gay was derogatory. I hope that with time and understanding, people like you will realize that gay is nothing to be afraid of. In fact I was responding to a poem that I perceived as a voice struggling with his own sexuality, the make-up might have bent my perception a bit, and in an effort to reassure him, it's ok to be gay.

  • @dancray ~ well, i am sorry if you think i was picking on you, i am surely mistaken about your intent. i became protective of jesse in thinking you were mocking his sexuality, because he's not hung up on things like that, it's what makes his poetry so good. it's from the heart to paper, unfiltered by this worlds messy inhibitions. of course it's ok to be gay, it's sad people should have to be told that, but it would appear you were trying to be supportive. thanks for clarifying.

  • Nice poem my friend, you have a talent for it, keep on writing

    blessings for the new year.

    Bernie

  • @mujawooja

    ~Thanks Bernie. Blessings on you as well! I have a feeling next year is going to be AMAZING.

    Jess

  • T_T

  • @reyreaper23

    :)

    Jess

  • Vídeo very good. Thanks for share. Good luck...

  • @raulribeirosoul

    ~Thanks Raul! Means a lot. It was my pleasure to share this. I ve been excited for a long time to finally get this up :D

    Jess

  • I love it :)

    You are a love poet. :)

  • @Rockguitarnow

    ~Thanks :) Heh Heh. I can t help myself!

    Jess

  • Jesse, the most important thing what many people have to learn is: To get a part of time. But time is changing every moment, time is like god, you can't see it, you only have to believe in it and looking forward. You can change what happens in "your" time, and if you have a brave heart you can change time for yourself and for other people you love in a positive way.

    Time will never will come back, ony the memories will do.

  • @GETTOBOMBER Well said.

  • @b1p0l4rt Yes,

    What I aslo wanted to say is... You are getting (looking) younger.

    Jesse, thats good.

    Please don't let the the time destroy your body .

    You have the force to rule the time by your own.

    Please help the children who do you meet on your ways and who gets no help from other persons.

    Please help them if you can...

    It's my greatest wish !!!

    *Love*

    Laurin

  • @GETTOBOMBER

    ~No worries Laurin!! . I m doing my best to stay with it. Many good things have come into my life! I m the richest man on earth with all my youtube friends :) I will continue to befriend roaming children...don t worry! lol I enjoy it very much!

  • @GETTOBOMBER

    ~Lol I m confused, Laurin. I m not sure if that last comment was for me or Gail (Linda) haha oh well :P I agree with you! It s not good to stand on empty shores waiting for your ship to come in. Better to make things happen yourself :) Thanks for the lovely comment!

    Jess

  • That was very moving, Jesse:)

  • @AllisonBrustofski

    ~Thanks Allison!

    Jess

  • I hope you had a good Christmas, Jessie! I missed you :)

    I loved the poem, it reminded me of Dr. Who and that film/book "The Time Traveler's Wife." :)

  • @WoodRatGirl

    I mean Jesse. Sorry about that spelling error. I got mixed up, since I had a dog called Jessie you see.

  • @WoodRatGirl

    ~Haha no worries. A lot of people spell my name "Jessie". It happens all the time :) Nice name for a dog by the way ;) I kinda like it :p

    Jess

  • @WoodRatGirl

    ~Aww thanks :) I missed you too! I was not able to get to a computer over Christmas and that really depressed me. I missed youtube but overall my Christmas was amazing! Better than I thought it would be. WAY BETTER! How was yours? heh heh yes I loved that time traveller movie!

    Jess

  • @CreepyHermitPoet

    My Christmas was great Jess :)

    and I'm glad you're doing well. Happy New Year too!

    ~ WRG aka Sarah.

  • @WoodRatGirl

    ~Glad to hear that Sarah!! Happy New Year to you tooooo!

    Jess

  • awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww­wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww­wwww that was so sweet and inlike how you get in to the poem and that you have to try not to cry that true and i can relate love you *big bear hug*

  • @chesbrocrysta

    ~Hey Crysta! Haha ya this poem is pretty emotional. I really felt my words. Thanks for the hug :)

    Jess

  • t h a n k s , Jezz !!! i love it

    ooh im deeply moved ..

    "maybe in another time, maybe in another place, it's a love we could find, i'll see your pretty face..." im so miss him :(

  • @evavanjava

    ~Glad you liked it :D I knew you were waiting for this one so I had to upload it! I hope this helps a bit in your situation as you miss the guy you like!! Are you planning on seeing him ever? What s the deal?

    Jess

  • Happy new year Jesse! How is your new home working out? Good job on all these poems! You are great!

    -Sergey

  • @Rambosee

    ~Hey Sergey! I m staying in a motel these days. This was just shot at my friends place. Soon though I will have my own place and be out of the motel although I really am starting to like it there. Thanks for asking :)

    Jess

  • nice one jesse. a new one, good to see you still got it. your new place in the background? it must cold up there. soon as you mentioned your new poem's title i thought about a song i wrote back when i was about your age. i don't remember the title but it started with the lines "maybe in another time, maybe in another place, it's a love we could find, i'll see your pretty face..." amazing i remember that after all this time. good stuff dude, can't wait for the new book. stay warm, peace.

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  • @tomitstube "maybe in another time, maybe in another place, it's a love we could find, i'll see your pretty face..." (love it)

  • @evavanjava ~ thanks sweetie, it still amazes me that three strangers from canada, west java, and florida can have a conversation over a poetry reading somewhere in cyberspace.

  • @tomitstube lol :D

  • @tomitstube

    ~It amazes me too! Friends from all over. Such a variety of characters and personality. It always fascinates me.

    Jess

  • @evavanjava

    :D

    Jess

  • @tomitstube

    ~Hey thanks a lot! No that isn t my place. It s at my friends. I go over there sometimes to upload videos as I don t have a computer in my motel room and cannot upload videos at the library. Yes it is cold here. Today is real cold but I m bundled up nicely like a snow bunny lol. Yes you must have a good memory! You should really try and finish that song you were working on as a kid! I d love to hear it and I bet it would turn out great...people would love that!

  • @tomitstube

    ~....I m staying warm. No worries :) Yes I think I almost have enough poems for a new book just not sure when I will go through the process of putting it together. I was actually thinking about it last night!!

    Jess

  • @CreepyHermitPoet ~ great to hear jesse, you must have been doing a lot of writing of late. it's good to see you're coming along nicely. i'm a huge fan of your poetry, you know i'll get the new one. just let me know. cheers.

  • Tears are falling down my face. This poem REALLY touched me, brother. Who gave you permission to lay my feelings out for all to see? ;)

  • @b1p0l4rt

    ~Aww that s so sweet Gail! I m glad it touched you. I have feelings like this myself too right now. We re in this together!

    Jess

  • I believe the time traveler was calling you while you was reading your poem.

  • @coolkat902

    ~Hahaha I think so too! I laughed when I read this comment :P It s hard to read poetry and try and shut off your phone at the same time. The Time Traveller has BAD timing LOL....excuse my play on words but it s true!

    Jess

  • I found a water bed heater at a thrift store for $ 0.90 I tested it out in the store got hot so I bought it. I have a sleep number bed they have a zip cover over air chamgers so I unzipped and slid it below the padding above the air matress section turned it on and it fells like a very large heating pad. That thing has my bed warm under a min when I slip into it. On top I have a comforer and an electric blanket I am very warm when I sleep at night. Heating pad makes heat too cheaper too?

  • @cdltpx

    ~Wow you seem to find all the good bargains! You re very creative and crafty!

    Jess

  • @CreepyHermitPoet Eveyone passed on this pad I said(2me) the thing has 2B quality they place a huge water filled matress on top of it so it has to be quality. I looked on line and they cost quite a bit My guess is someone may have punctured their water bed and just donated it to the thrift store it stayed on the floor so long they just marked it down I saw value where others did not. Go to walmart you can't get an electric blanket less than $25 (12 volt 45min max use) A good 1 $75up Keep warmCDL

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