Brimstone Ghetto... spoken word poetry

[TheBVRTV]

he great at what he dous, im still working on it, ah young kid trying to do this lol

[nighthawkX13]

Need more of this. Brilliant.

[pjackson519]

Damn. Beautiful.

[DoorsChick1967]

Mesmerizing....

[JazzyLemmon]

thank you very kindly

[neberu55]

hey submit more please !

[JazzyLemmon]

I believe more are in the works

[Minniver]

This is fantastic!!

[clayLavl]

Goddamn! This is good! THis is GREAT! 5 phat stars!

[JazzyLemmon]

I will let him know you said so thanks for the comment

[iGoGo16]

omg is that guy in canada??

i think that was the guy that came to my school and did his poetry, it was really awesom

[JazzyLemmon]

no sorry he is not in Canada, thanks for you kind words

[LilaSakura]

Powerful and inspiring! I look forward to hearing more!

[JazzyLemmon]

I hope there will be more, thanks

[sistermoonshine13]

That was cool JZ!!!

[JazzyLemmon]

I will let them know you liked it thanks

[MysterEy1]

Will be featured on the BEST of YOUTUBE soon!

[JazzyLemmon]

thanks

[narcoleptus]

Brilliant!

Was playing "In the Ghetto" by Elvis when I clicked on the vid!

The soundtrack compliments the spoken poetry wonderfully!

[JazzyLemmon]

I was hoping you would see this, yes the soundtrack was made after the initial filming process

[BlindBastardSamurai]

You've got talent. Thought-provoking! Excellent!

[JazzyLemmon]

I will let RIP know, I just filmed it

[Minniver]

Fantastic!!!!

[JazzyLemmon]

excellent

[meredithrose]

i'm liking it

[JazzyLemmon]

awesome thanks!

[katylied66]

Very well done!

Dianne

[JazzyLemmon]

thank you dianne

[PappyStu]

I have to watch this sober tomorrow.... vbg

[JazzyLemmon]

well I am looking for the response at that time

[PappyStu]

I am not sure if this is better sober....

It is quite unique either way....

[JazzyLemmon]

LOL thats fair thanks

[PappyStu]

I guess I have trouble understanding it as its not the same language I think in...

I will watch more....

[70gary70]

great, the tone of r.i.p.,nice and deep,worked with the distance given hollow sound, gives it that timeless feeling or lost vibe.

the music soft, almost not music but just sound,working with the voice to give an overall product.

the words clear to some, meaning other things to other people, i feel.

worked vey well,great job.

[JazzyLemmon]

yea r.i.p. voice is pretty strong, I am glad you enjoyed the brimstone ghetto

[CliffBetweenTheLines]

Nicely done, the video effect fits well.

[JazzyLemmon]

thank you, this was kinda of a random project. meeting and talking to new people creates that. I have a few more planned in the future because R.I.P "revolution in progress" is talented.