This is just amazing, the characters, the sets, the camera work, everything! It kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time.
I agree with EpicGirlxD about the swearing. I get that it's part of Dave's character/personality but it felt a little over the top and in his case, it took away from his dialogue more than it added to it. I'm not saying you have to cut out all cursing, but maybe just tone it down a little. Otherwise, I loved this part and can't wait to see what's next.
@fenderchick2010 Thanks. Do realize though that when Dave was swearing, he wasn't necessarily saying anything too deep and important to have the swearing take away from it. Thank you, I just put out part two yesterday
If there was an awesome button I would be clicking it a thousand times (and possibly breaking it too). Wow, your actors, editing, sets and EVERYTHING was soo smooth!! And I really like the storyline of it, it adds a great suspense. Keep it up! I look forward in seeing the next part! ^^"
Just amazing! I love the story and the characters! Very good work! Perfect music in the end '_' I love your work! Can't wait for the next part Kerry :)
Normally I hate voice overs cause the voices sound to forced and fake but I LOVE the voices in this. Haha whoever the guy in the beginning is, is hilarious.
wow this is absolutely stunning omg ! i cant wait to see the next episode omg ! i work at walmart and i just got home from work n saw this and was like aRE u FReeaking kidding me ! i come home n relax n this is what i get reminders of were i got ot be again tomarrow lol XD but this was ahmazing im looking forward to the next episode
Wow, this is amazing! The sets were beautiful, the actors were talented, and the storyline was creative. :) It was like watching a real movie! :) One thing that did bother me though was the excessive cursing. I feel like this series would appeal to more people if you limited the cursing a little bit... I'm most definitely NOT trying to tell you what to do, just thought I'd bring my opinion to the surface. Either way, this is definitely a series I'm gonna keep up with! :)
@EpicGirlxD Thank you...Dave will have a gutter mouth though, that's how I pictured him to be. It wasn't meant to be offensive. He's obviously not being serious when he swears. And if that keeps more people from watching it then I'll live; that's how my characters are. Thank you very much and I'm glad you're going to continue to watch it.
This was amazing! I loved your voice as Larkin, and god, Tori Kamal's voice- AHH! God, it was amazing. Beautiful sims and perfect motion you used. Lovely colors and sets, too :3 I REALLY LOVE THE TITLE! And the voice affects are great too :)It had that great, disturbing feeling that you put so well in your work :) Your parameters are also gorgeous and have amazing storyline. God I just love the look of this. I can't wait for the next part because this was AMAZING! :) Great job.
I Love it
TheLittlemo56 1 month ago
This is amazing work! But what exactly is the storyline? :)
BubbleBathBo 1 month ago
SOOOO BEAUTIFUL<33333 i died XP opps and sorry i rapped the replay button :3
MRSHELLOKITTYLUVER 1 month ago
This is just amazing, the characters, the sets, the camera work, everything! It kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time.
I agree with EpicGirlxD about the swearing. I get that it's part of Dave's character/personality but it felt a little over the top and in his case, it took away from his dialogue more than it added to it. I'm not saying you have to cut out all cursing, but maybe just tone it down a little. Otherwise, I loved this part and can't wait to see what's next.
fenderchick2010 1 month ago 2
@fenderchick2010 Thanks. Do realize though that when Dave was swearing, he wasn't necessarily saying anything too deep and important to have the swearing take away from it. Thank you, I just put out part two yesterday
maine1995 1 month ago
That was amazing. Filming, VA's, Sets, everything.
Morganalefey23 1 month ago
crazy but its still good
TheKekey123 1 month ago
OMG! U made walmart =) so cool
JFairy189 2 months ago
that was incredible, that was the first time I've ever watched a sims 2 video on the edge of my seat
michaelvlog 3 months ago
@StrikeMyElectricLite hahahh i saw that too
maine1995 3 months ago
SSSOOO AWESOME
luckylulu1616 3 months ago
that was amazing.
Dezirai 3 months ago
wow o.o amaaaazing :O i love the sence and evreything bravo ^^
IsRCooki 3 months ago
Just wow!
bellimell 3 months ago
This was amaazinngg, Kerry! Loved the angles you used and your sets are incredible! Cant wait to see the next part!
Verlorenx 3 months ago
Thank you guys so much!
maine1995 3 months ago
I <3 This! And if you press the Closed Captioning button, you can see how smart Google is
monstersims21 3 months ago
@monstersims21 LOL for one line they translated it as "you just endured it can pat except for straightforwardness"
maine1995 3 months ago
Damn this is amazing, I can't wait until I see the next part. So suspenseful
Alisondream12 3 months ago
This inspired me to make films and write more :]. Good job!
JulianTheGreat01 3 months ago
This...Is...Great!
MKW094 3 months ago
If there was an awesome button I would be clicking it a thousand times (and possibly breaking it too). Wow, your actors, editing, sets and EVERYTHING was soo smooth!! And I really like the storyline of it, it adds a great suspense. Keep it up! I look forward in seeing the next part! ^^"
ghostblacklover 3 months ago
f**king great! i add to fav ;3
15ROCKWOLF15 3 months ago
Just amazing! I love the story and the characters! Very good work! Perfect music in the end '_' I love your work! Can't wait for the next part Kerry :)
HerbalWhite120 3 months ago
Amazing, I love your style in the type of stories you create. Keep it up, and good luck with this series and more.
xXxLoveToDrawxXx 3 months ago
Normally I hate voice overs cause the voices sound to forced and fake but I LOVE the voices in this. Haha whoever the guy in the beginning is, is hilarious.
softballlover54 3 months ago
wow this is absolutely stunning omg ! i cant wait to see the next episode omg ! i work at walmart and i just got home from work n saw this and was like aRE u FReeaking kidding me ! i come home n relax n this is what i get reminders of were i got ot be again tomarrow lol XD but this was ahmazing im looking forward to the next episode
Isaaczgirl 3 months ago
Wow, this is amazing! The sets were beautiful, the actors were talented, and the storyline was creative. :) It was like watching a real movie! :) One thing that did bother me though was the excessive cursing. I feel like this series would appeal to more people if you limited the cursing a little bit... I'm most definitely NOT trying to tell you what to do, just thought I'd bring my opinion to the surface. Either way, this is definitely a series I'm gonna keep up with! :)
EpicGirlxD 3 months ago 3
@EpicGirlxD Thank you...Dave will have a gutter mouth though, that's how I pictured him to be. It wasn't meant to be offensive. He's obviously not being serious when he swears. And if that keeps more people from watching it then I'll live; that's how my characters are. Thank you very much and I'm glad you're going to continue to watch it.
maine1995 1 month ago
Wow Kerry. this was amazing. I hope you continue this, because it looks awesome! :)
I've never been one to really comment on sets and style, but just--wow. :)
If you need any help with ANYTHING, just hit me up. XP
<3
LilGusher15 3 months ago
This was amazing! I loved your voice as Larkin, and god, Tori Kamal's voice- AHH! God, it was amazing. Beautiful sims and perfect motion you used. Lovely colors and sets, too :3 I REALLY LOVE THE TITLE! And the voice affects are great too :)It had that great, disturbing feeling that you put so well in your work :) Your parameters are also gorgeous and have amazing storyline. God I just love the look of this. I can't wait for the next part because this was AMAZING! :) Great job.
Shriex 3 months ago