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  • So you know, I'm writing a shitty rap to this to show how goddamn easy rap is. I'll let you know if it gets recorded.

  • koo i like it ....listen to what i make with garage band

  • how did you get it to sync into clapping? When I finish my youtube change rap i'll give you partial credit.

  • @werewolfmaster99 Thanks. Please contact me when you upload it so I can hear it.

  • too repeditive.

  • Gotta change the beat line a little but other than that pretty good.

  • LOL this fuckin sucks. Learn how to make a beat.

  • sounds like a jerking but still sick!

  • yo i need a quick response, can you a) send me the file or b) tell me what instrument you used for the base and the click

    boom cha, boom bom cha etc.

    the main base

    it would be helpfull if you jest send me the file :P i have EVERYTHING i just cant find whats good for my song!! thanks i subbed to u too

  • Are you black?

  • ok so i listened to this whole thing...fuck my life

  • YOOOOOO how did you add the bass?

  • i dont understand how this has more views then NDO. search DJ NDO in the search bar and listen guapaholic or hands tied. youll shit your pants trust

  • well then i got bord and fell asleep but yall look me up on twitter AuRoRabRaNdT

  • I wanna rip this off ya k? thx for it. HAHAHHA

  • good beat now you got to throw on some steez lyrics son keep up the good work

  • fuck them the first hook is tight u only used garage band or anything else?

  • this is hella tight man im tryin this shit out for the first time today its not like this good but it's a start.

  • this beat is tight as hell for ur first - i give yu props brohh this shit go hard i would freestyle to this - keep up the work, middle finga up yellin fuck yu haters -

  • this song sounds like eminem or 50 cent

  • this isnt too bad.. nice

  • Better than I can do I STINK at stuff like This I'm not really creative

  • @meganator3223 me either

  • @meganator3223 creative? this ain't even creative lol

  • When I make beats, I also tend to let the audience hear a snippet of each mini loop by itself or with only 1 other instrument. It is good for one or two hard/deep/significant lines because It emphasizes the focus on the lyrics hella for only a short period of time.

  • wow its an ok beat u need double kick or a double snare then hit up some brass instruments....its too flat

  • learn how to make custom synths, use a multiband compressor and for crying out loud to never play those 5 notes again....

  • i like it

  • Not bad. Heck of a lot better than what I can do. :P

  • yo man not bad, sounds pre tight, kudos. being a musician you gotta learn to say "fuck you haters, im a drag my nutsack cross ur face when ur asleep" and then forget about it. word.

  • @shitheadmuthafucka

    yeah I couldnt give a shit about any of these hater comments

  • Cool made;)

  • Why all the negative comments? Sheesh!

    The guy is just having fun with what HE likes to make!

    If you don't like it, no need to be so retarded with your comments!

    Personally I don't like this tune much either, but kudos for the work put into it.

    And there's nothing wrong with making tunes in Garageband - especially if you can blend sounds together well! Just have fun and enjoy!

  • Can u please send me Garage bands website so that i can put my band on their......

  • its a prgram not a band website

  • Hell yeah gettin crunk! Reminds me of the shit I used to make when I messed around on Fruity Loops lol

  • I'm sorry, but this shit suck so hard. And don't think I don't know how difficult it is, I have garageband and have made beats. Just repeating 4 notes you randomly found doesn't make it good.

  • you suck make this your first and last please

  • lousy harmonies

  • sick beat broo

  • tight

  • nice job man! :)

  • this beat iz tight

  • i would turn down the treble alittle bit on that bass

    an maybe put a snare with that clap

  • sick beat! imagine drvin real slow on a hot summer night blastin this thru ur stereo. Boss.

  • Jam out to this shit.

  • hahaha yeah man, that would be awesome!

  • do you use the loops or do you make your own stuff?

    and do ever rap with your beats?

  • I made my own stuff with the onscreen keyboards

    I have never rapped on a beat.

  • what is all the stuff that you used

  • dope bass, what did you use for it?

  • I used it for nothing.I dont even have the file anymore.I just made it to get some feedback and wow I got a lot more then I suspected.Thanks everyone

  • I meant which instrument on Garageband did you use for the base? I guess I should have made that a little clearer.

  • Oh the bass.I really couldnt tell you its been so long but I think it was the hiphop kit then onscreen keyboard moving the keyboard to the right side(one of those keys)

  • sick beat...keep it up.....check out my beats and leave feedback please

  • not bad its okay i guess

  • what instrument did u use

  • can i change garage band tunes into .mp3 so i can play them on my phone or ipod ????

  • on iTunes , highlight the song u wish to convert then pick , advanced on the top and click convert as mp3

  • the synth needs a more interesting hook to it......but its god a good idea. check out mine.

  • how do you get the beats and the all drum loops?

  • ...he made them...

  • this is ill

  • this its pretty good for your first attempt. Not bad

  • awsome makes me want sing rap and im into rock

  • where can i get garage band?

  • buy a mac

  • gOod Joke

    i dont hav cash for so what!

  • yah lol macs to expensive but u gotta get one for that program.

  • dude take out the new synth and the beats pretty good... maybe add a synth thats better tha that one

  • this is awesome. most people think its going 2 slow but u have to think, when the rapping is going like fast as it always does, it will sound normal. yah it could use some more beats and stuff but this is his first try at it

  • amazing how when u make the track u think its the dopest thing ever.....save this track.... practice every day for a year then compare lol

  • I like it, it's a bit slow though. What are the names of the tracks you used?

  • the synth at 1:33 is crap

  • my first beat wasnt really better too

    check out my beats on my channel!

  • yhyh u kl i have got reason 4 if u would like it give a shout back

  • hey rappy taffy how did you make your beat what was your step by step approach..i am tring to do a beat but i dont know where to start

  • yeah

  • its ok but boring

  • crappytaffy1

    whats worse ur beat or ur name?

  • your beats

  • bad

  • tick tock it sucks clock

  • sick beat! fck haters this clean! it made me take a second out my day to say things. hate to intervene, really hate the inbetween honestly the whole idea kinda got me in a lean altho the wavy instruments a bit obscene - i like the drop out, that pound sound mean, to me any way

    constructively opposed to ass hole like the missZ below let me hear what u wrote urs aint hot nor cold luke warm fresh mold? grow up or if you of age grow old, again cool beat. miss z go home (jp peace love b4 war)

  • DAMN.You got some sick rhymes.Thanks for the great comment

  • sherwood is right but its still sick!

  • bells werent the best chioce

  • lol dude "BTW" stands for "by the way"

    in my opinion id replace the bell with a base guitar or somethin.

    long tie i don use GB

  • wat the hell does BTW stand for

  • Let me start off by saying no offense so you wont get tight. from the get....GB isnt really a program to post up like "YO i MADE A BEAT IN THiS SHiT AND iTS HOT" if it isn't really hot. Granted, this is your "first" GB Rap beat...but GB is really easy to use so this could have been way hotter. Sorry homie. Next time switch the beat up a little and it will make the song hotter. Even though this beat aint shit in my eyes, I would still work with you if you were interested on things. Hit me up. =]

  • doesnt matter what age you are. idk how good you are now but the bell is very annoying.

  • bobadank is a fag who sucks cock

  • woow sucks aaassssssssssss

  • allsome but this isent ur first its just too good to be ur first

  • yeah u should've used other type of bells

    but it still tight

  • if the bells would be different and lower it would be good

  • this beat makes me wanna throw my computer..its that annoying

  • this is so hot!

  • where' did u get the drums from

  • Thanks for all the comments everyone.I need the critism.If its bad,dont just say its bad tell me why.All comments accepted

  • Holy shit you suck faggot. No offense.

  • Lol "Holy shit you suck faggot" how is that not supposed to offend him lol

  • huh what the fuck you say bitch you just suck cock and you take it out on others because you have a small penis. oh and no offense pussball

  • horrible....no offense but the beat is EXTREMELY annoying and repetitive....i mean i respect u no how to do it....but it just sucks

  • its ok but could change up the beat or tempo at some time in the song

  • add a baseline and change the speed up after u slow it down i like wat u did around 1:34 when that other keyboard comes in the background. not bad man...just mess around with it some more

  • thats shits fly cuz

  • nice , download this to a CD and add your own lyrics, or anyones lyrics

  • sick beat, it really flows

  • i posted a video response with an example for you of my work

  • you have the volume turned all the way up. You need to make sure that the volume does not go to the red. That's called clipping. You loose sound quality.

  • shit this one's tight..

  • u should change or alter that bell sound. its kinda annoyin.

  • thats mad.

  • This is good 4 a Garage Band Beat, good work.

  • here's a tip - u have to mess with the reverb, equalizer, echo, and just totally change the instrument, then click "save instrument'

    -U NEED to do thus because the stock instruments on garageband suck, especially the drums.

  • I even mad up words about the new world order...I thought it was tight

  • I have garageband but I don't recognize a lot of these sounds, arre these all the stock sounds that come with garageband or did you get some other soundbank?

  • They came with garage band.They are not loops but I forget how to find them I dont use garage band anymore,I use FL Studios

  • do you use FL on your mac?

    and if you do, does the mic sync with FL?

  • Nice. Add a breakdown in the middle or towards the end

  • instruments**

  • this is hot.. what instuments did u use..

  • I Synth called Cheerful Trance

    A Church Bell

    Orchestral Strings

    Grand Piano

    Some other sysnth for second chrous

    And Hip Hop kit

  • Add some cymbals and hats. I like the strings!

  • you need a hi hat other that it's cool

  • good for a first song. check out my beats!

  • Advice... find and download an acapella, and try to line that up with your beat (adjusting the tempo to go with the flow) My first one is worth a listen. Let me know what you think!

  • if you didnt use loops where did u get the beats from?

  • made them...obviously.

  • I got FL Studios now! so stay tuned for a much more better non repetitive beat

  • sounded pretty good

  • how do you get this?

  • i make my beats on garage band a little more origonal then fl studios becouse fl studios needs loops to sound good........this beat is strait yo

  • ay u usin dat m-audio keyboard or shit from the comp btw ya beats hot

  • good first beat.

    way too many loops.

    not original at all

  • YO! Thight beat.... Come check out mah beat....think ull like it..... HOLLA

  • cool. my friend has garage band. and i was makin some nice beats but im a musician, good work but it gets boring after a while. btw im 11

  • heres some advice from an expert garageband beat maker.. use some melody somewhere like have it kick in on chorrus.. and maybe have the snare echos when its not the chorrus..

  • nice keep up the gd work PS it would be gd if u cold add more stuff on it

  • pretty good for first beat...no advice comes to mind, but just explore different sounds-TAKE RISKS!! the best producers do it

  • you should probably add a light hi hat every 2 steps or every step to add a little speed to it. check out my cousins video on my page.

  • Its cool nice dude. I love rap and anyone who doesnt i cant really help them lol

  • You guys got owned by rap and talentless music!

  • uhm...good job sorta...VERY repetative...but i guess that is what rap is...talentless ongoing repeats

  • check out my music made with garage band too! click on my name. it's a hung up cover

  • nice beat

  • I can make a better song with Fruity Loops.

  • FL sucks ass

  • dude... even though i hate rap music... this makes me want to like it! kudos and peace homie!

  • yahh you really need more effects and I don't really like the bell thing but appart from that amazing for your first time

    bye peace. xo

  • awsome

  • Dude...

    I'm a musician.

    I say this is pretty damn good for a first.

    I don't even rap and I'd rap over this.

    Good job.

    If you love music...

    Then don't listen to everyone else.

    It's all about you.

    Hell, don't even listen to me! =P

  • pretty good

  • stick with garageband, you'd be lost in Reason

  • +1...

  • +1? wtf

  • yo fuck these haterz homie, you did your thing n to be honest with you id rap over this joint, its pretty tight for your first. keep doin ya thing n dont let these shit talkin bastards kill hip hop. peace

  • NVM. I just realized I'm not supposed to listen to the whole thing.

  • Wow. This honestly gets pretty annoying after a while.

  • It needs a little bit more effects to it

    but i like it

    9/10

  • Why didn't you just loop it if it just kept repeating? Would've saved alot of time.

  • well man i guess u wudnt have put dis beat up unless u thought it was good enough for ears...or if u wanted truthfull opinion,,,man ur concept of this beat needs total reworking...im not givin u da free card cuz its ur first, cuz my first garageband beat was pretty hot,,yep its been bout 2yrs wit my mac and im loving garageband,,,u jus need to kno how and wen to use certain sounds, but good luck to u in da future,,,check out my channel..1

  • Just ask yourself , what makes this stand out from the rest of the beats out there?

    To me , abosolutely nothing.

  • I know it doesnt stand out.Its my first beat.I am just learning so I did something basic.

  • rap is 4 talantless posers

  • i completly agree with you!!!!!!!

  • agree about what?

  • nah dude

  • Easy to flow on and cool i liek it. 8/10

  • laffytaffy???

  • Nice first try :) You might want to bring the volume down on the synths/bells when the beat drops.

  • Make it less, like, repetitive

  • I know it's your first, so no hate. 6/10, on beat and all, just extremely basic w/o catchiness. Keep at it, try some complex patters. If you're going to do simple beats, add something that sounds catchy, awesome, or a drum pattern that's perfect for spitting.

    I've nothing for you to click, but be sure to check the mixtape The Flame Effect when I drop it.

    -B. Magic

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