this beat is tight as hell for ur first - i give yu props brohh this shit go hard i would freestyle to this - keep up the work, middle finga up yellin fuck yu haters -
When I make beats, I also tend to let the audience hear a snippet of each mini loop by itself or with only 1 other instrument. It is good for one or two hard/deep/significant lines because It emphasizes the focus on the lyrics hella for only a short period of time.
yo man not bad, sounds pre tight, kudos. being a musician you gotta learn to say "fuck you haters, im a drag my nutsack cross ur face when ur asleep" and then forget about it. word.
I'm sorry, but this shit suck so hard. And don't think I don't know how difficult it is, I have garageband and have made beats. Just repeating 4 notes you randomly found doesn't make it good.
Oh the bass.I really couldnt tell you its been so long but I think it was the hiphop kit then onscreen keyboard moving the keyboard to the right side(one of those keys)
this is awesome. most people think its going 2 slow but u have to think, when the rapping is going like fast as it always does, it will sound normal. yah it could use some more beats and stuff but this is his first try at it
sick beat! fck haters this clean! it made me take a second out my day to say things. hate to intervene, really hate the inbetween honestly the whole idea kinda got me in a lean altho the wavy instruments a bit obscene - i like the drop out, that pound sound mean, to me any way
constructively opposed to ass hole like the missZ below let me hear what u wrote urs aint hot nor cold luke warm fresh mold? grow up or if you of age grow old, again cool beat. miss z go home (jp peace love b4 war)
Let me start off by saying no offense so you wont get tight. from the get....GB isnt really a program to post up like "YO i MADE A BEAT IN THiS SHiT AND iTS HOT" if it isn't really hot. Granted, this is your "first" GB Rap beat...but GB is really easy to use so this could have been way hotter. Sorry homie. Next time switch the beat up a little and it will make the song hotter. Even though this beat aint shit in my eyes, I would still work with you if you were interested on things. Hit me up. =]
add a baseline and change the speed up after u slow it down i like wat u did around 1:34 when that other keyboard comes in the background. not bad man...just mess around with it some more
you have the volume turned all the way up. You need to make sure that the volume does not go to the red. That's called clipping. You loose sound quality.
I have garageband but I don't recognize a lot of these sounds, arre these all the stock sounds that come with garageband or did you get some other soundbank?
Advice... find and download an acapella, and try to line that up with your beat (adjusting the tempo to go with the flow) My first one is worth a listen. Let me know what you think!
heres some advice from an expert garageband beat maker.. use some melody somewhere like have it kick in on chorrus.. and maybe have the snare echos when its not the chorrus..
yo fuck these haterz homie, you did your thing n to be honest with you id rap over this joint, its pretty tight for your first. keep doin ya thing n dont let these shit talkin bastards kill hip hop. peace
well man i guess u wudnt have put dis beat up unless u thought it was good enough for ears...or if u wanted truthfull opinion,,,man ur concept of this beat needs total reworking...im not givin u da free card cuz its ur first, cuz my first garageband beat was pretty hot,,yep its been bout 2yrs wit my mac and im loving garageband,,,u jus need to kno how and wen to use certain sounds, but good luck to u in da future,,,check out my channel..1
I know it's your first, so no hate. 6/10, on beat and all, just extremely basic w/o catchiness. Keep at it, try some complex patters. If you're going to do simple beats, add something that sounds catchy, awesome, or a drum pattern that's perfect for spitting.
I've nothing for you to click, but be sure to check the mixtape The Flame Effect when I drop it.
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facug10 8 months ago
So you know, I'm writing a shitty rap to this to show how goddamn easy rap is. I'll let you know if it gets recorded.
ChrisRayChrisRay 8 months ago
koo i like it ....listen to what i make with garage band
MrStayConnected 10 months ago
how did you get it to sync into clapping? When I finish my youtube change rap i'll give you partial credit.
werewolfmaster99 1 year ago
@werewolfmaster99 Thanks. Please contact me when you upload it so I can hear it.
rappytaffy1 1 year ago
too repeditive.
DemFranchizeBoyz17 1 year ago
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pretty sick yo.. check out my channel give my beat a look
SweetxTea2013 1 year ago
Gotta change the beat line a little but other than that pretty good.
DemFranchizeBoyz17 1 year ago
LOL this fuckin sucks. Learn how to make a beat.
racergsxr1 1 year ago
sounds like a jerking but still sick!
khalilbyizz2 1 year ago
yo i need a quick response, can you a) send me the file or b) tell me what instrument you used for the base and the click
boom cha, boom bom cha etc.
the main base
it would be helpfull if you jest send me the file :P i have EVERYTHING i just cant find whats good for my song!! thanks i subbed to u too
happymarik 1 year ago
Are you black?
1one3three2two 1 year ago
ok so i listened to this whole thing...fuck my life
xobrendaox666 1 year ago
YOOOOOO how did you add the bass?
xavieryears 1 year ago
i dont understand how this has more views then NDO. search DJ NDO in the search bar and listen guapaholic or hands tied. youll shit your pants trust
graemelennie 1 year ago
well then i got bord and fell asleep but yall look me up on twitter AuRoRabRaNdT
aurorab13 1 year ago
I wanna rip this off ya k? thx for it. HAHAHHA
1995rambone 1 year ago
good beat now you got to throw on some steez lyrics son keep up the good work
ecuador92 1 year ago
fuck them the first hook is tight u only used garage band or anything else?
antinoob83 1 year ago
this is hella tight man im tryin this shit out for the first time today its not like this good but it's a start.
rgw91 1 year ago
this beat is tight as hell for ur first - i give yu props brohh this shit go hard i would freestyle to this - keep up the work, middle finga up yellin fuck yu haters -
AeCeezyBeats 1 year ago
this song sounds like eminem or 50 cent
Freddybob89its 1 year ago
this isnt too bad.. nice
dvnmowery 1 year ago
Better than I can do I STINK at stuff like This I'm not really creative
meganator3223 1 year ago 3
@meganator3223 me either
sonicmaster53 1 year ago
@meganator3223 creative? this ain't even creative lol
Beatinbeatz1 6 months ago
When I make beats, I also tend to let the audience hear a snippet of each mini loop by itself or with only 1 other instrument. It is good for one or two hard/deep/significant lines because It emphasizes the focus on the lyrics hella for only a short period of time.
Ryanaslaw 1 year ago
wow its an ok beat u need double kick or a double snare then hit up some brass instruments....its too flat
drifter103 2 years ago
learn how to make custom synths, use a multiband compressor and for crying out loud to never play those 5 notes again....
esmith911 2 years ago
i like it
Giamaliva 2 years ago
Not bad. Heck of a lot better than what I can do. :P
striker1224 2 years ago
yo man not bad, sounds pre tight, kudos. being a musician you gotta learn to say "fuck you haters, im a drag my nutsack cross ur face when ur asleep" and then forget about it. word.
shitheadmuthafucka 2 years ago
@shitheadmuthafucka
yeah I couldnt give a shit about any of these hater comments
rappytaffy1 2 years ago
Cool made;)
sawae1028 2 years ago
Why all the negative comments? Sheesh!
The guy is just having fun with what HE likes to make!
If you don't like it, no need to be so retarded with your comments!
Personally I don't like this tune much either, but kudos for the work put into it.
And there's nothing wrong with making tunes in Garageband - especially if you can blend sounds together well! Just have fun and enjoy!
Garagebander 2 years ago
Can u please send me Garage bands website so that i can put my band on their......
Studee1Hannah2 2 years ago
its a prgram not a band website
rappytaffy1 2 years ago 2
Hell yeah gettin crunk! Reminds me of the shit I used to make when I messed around on Fruity Loops lol
clovischris559 2 years ago
I'm sorry, but this shit suck so hard. And don't think I don't know how difficult it is, I have garageband and have made beats. Just repeating 4 notes you randomly found doesn't make it good.
Migs49 2 years ago
you suck make this your first and last please
bobadankfett 2 years ago
lousy harmonies
thekungofthetube 2 years ago
sick beat broo
Jomama1010 2 years ago
tight
bayboy94080 2 years ago
nice job man! :)
CastleRockDays 2 years ago
this beat iz tight
JDoval92 2 years ago
i would turn down the treble alittle bit on that bass
an maybe put a snare with that clap
66cashmaster66 2 years ago
sick beat! imagine drvin real slow on a hot summer night blastin this thru ur stereo. Boss.
lewced 2 years ago
Jam out to this shit.
FreakyGreenPapaya 2 years ago
hahaha yeah man, that would be awesome!
CastleRockDays 2 years ago
do you use the loops or do you make your own stuff?
and do ever rap with your beats?
zachmaguire 2 years ago
I made my own stuff with the onscreen keyboards
I have never rapped on a beat.
rappytaffy1 2 years ago
what is all the stuff that you used
jasonb13345 2 years ago
dope bass, what did you use for it?
groovybones 2 years ago
I used it for nothing.I dont even have the file anymore.I just made it to get some feedback and wow I got a lot more then I suspected.Thanks everyone
rappytaffy1 2 years ago
I meant which instrument on Garageband did you use for the base? I guess I should have made that a little clearer.
groovybones 2 years ago
Oh the bass.I really couldnt tell you its been so long but I think it was the hiphop kit then onscreen keyboard moving the keyboard to the right side(one of those keys)
rappytaffy1 2 years ago
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facug23g 2 years ago
sick beat...keep it up.....check out my beats and leave feedback please
Mphili23 2 years ago
not bad its okay i guess
cjd623 2 years ago
what instrument did u use
Kobe24rulez 2 years ago
can i change garage band tunes into .mp3 so i can play them on my phone or ipod ????
joeboy150 2 years ago
on iTunes , highlight the song u wish to convert then pick , advanced on the top and click convert as mp3
0dysee 2 years ago
the synth needs a more interesting hook to it......but its god a good idea. check out mine.
conwest 2 years ago
how do you get the beats and the all drum loops?
megatron360 2 years ago
...he made them...
austinyb 2 years ago
this is ill
zachDGK3 2 years ago
this its pretty good for your first attempt. Not bad
taurean06031990 2 years ago
awsome makes me want sing rap and im into rock
sebb101 2 years ago
where can i get garage band?
Comixfabrik 2 years ago
buy a mac
sk8h20 2 years ago
gOod Joke
i dont hav cash for so what!
Comixfabrik 2 years ago
yah lol macs to expensive but u gotta get one for that program.
S0ccer5294 2 years ago
dude take out the new synth and the beats pretty good... maybe add a synth thats better tha that one
yungdetrude 3 years ago
this is awesome. most people think its going 2 slow but u have to think, when the rapping is going like fast as it always does, it will sound normal. yah it could use some more beats and stuff but this is his first try at it
RandomGirl204 3 years ago
amazing how when u make the track u think its the dopest thing ever.....save this track.... practice every day for a year then compare lol
jarulz123 3 years ago
I like it, it's a bit slow though. What are the names of the tracks you used?
iRichiepoo 3 years ago
the synth at 1:33 is crap
KissenaBeats 3 years ago 3
my first beat wasnt really better too
check out my beats on my channel!
jmacgronau 3 years ago
yhyh u kl i have got reason 4 if u would like it give a shout back
badmangreg72 3 years ago
hey rappy taffy how did you make your beat what was your step by step approach..i am tring to do a beat but i dont know where to start
martxcmaniac 3 years ago
yeah
5pid3y 3 years ago
its ok but boring
pierocks0 3 years ago
crappytaffy1
whats worse ur beat or ur name?
KissenaBeats 3 years ago
your beats
rappytaffy1 3 years ago
bad
adnz1 3 years ago
tick tock it sucks clock
adnz1 3 years ago
sick beat! fck haters this clean! it made me take a second out my day to say things. hate to intervene, really hate the inbetween honestly the whole idea kinda got me in a lean altho the wavy instruments a bit obscene - i like the drop out, that pound sound mean, to me any way
constructively opposed to ass hole like the missZ below let me hear what u wrote urs aint hot nor cold luke warm fresh mold? grow up or if you of age grow old, again cool beat. miss z go home (jp peace love b4 war)
tim0 3 years ago
DAMN.You got some sick rhymes.Thanks for the great comment
rappytaffy1 3 years ago
sherwood is right but its still sick!
Tannerita 3 years ago
bells werent the best chioce
sherwoodjoeybiscoe 3 years ago
lol dude "BTW" stands for "by the way"
in my opinion id replace the bell with a base guitar or somethin.
long tie i don use GB
rudler24 3 years ago
wat the hell does BTW stand for
dilpreetdhindsa 3 years ago
Let me start off by saying no offense so you wont get tight. from the get....GB isnt really a program to post up like "YO i MADE A BEAT IN THiS SHiT AND iTS HOT" if it isn't really hot. Granted, this is your "first" GB Rap beat...but GB is really easy to use so this could have been way hotter. Sorry homie. Next time switch the beat up a little and it will make the song hotter. Even though this beat aint shit in my eyes, I would still work with you if you were interested on things. Hit me up. =]
MiSSzWHiT7181 3 years ago
doesnt matter what age you are. idk how good you are now but the bell is very annoying.
patrickphan2 3 years ago
bobadank is a fag who sucks cock
audiolaxrk78 3 years ago
woow sucks aaassssssssssss
bobadankfett 3 years ago 6
allsome but this isent ur first its just too good to be ur first
nathanvolk 3 years ago
yeah u should've used other type of bells
but it still tight
2pac0406 3 years ago
if the bells would be different and lower it would be good
Omega232323 3 years ago
this beat makes me wanna throw my computer..its that annoying
MethodCold57 3 years ago 9
this is so hot!
djghost63 3 years ago
where' did u get the drums from
ronaldinho91 3 years ago
Thanks for all the comments everyone.I need the critism.If its bad,dont just say its bad tell me why.All comments accepted
rappytaffy1 3 years ago
Holy shit you suck faggot. No offense.
stlredbird 3 years ago
Lol "Holy shit you suck faggot" how is that not supposed to offend him lol
ProStylah 3 years ago
huh what the fuck you say bitch you just suck cock and you take it out on others because you have a small penis. oh and no offense pussball
audiolaxrk78 3 years ago
horrible....no offense but the beat is EXTREMELY annoying and repetitive....i mean i respect u no how to do it....but it just sucks
pooldoggy21 3 years ago
its ok but could change up the beat or tempo at some time in the song
blaiserboy27 3 years ago
add a baseline and change the speed up after u slow it down i like wat u did around 1:34 when that other keyboard comes in the background. not bad man...just mess around with it some more
mcslikk 3 years ago
thats shits fly cuz
CamtheMan926 3 years ago
nice , download this to a CD and add your own lyrics, or anyones lyrics
DemolishonJ 3 years ago
sick beat, it really flows
erikman89 3 years ago
i posted a video response with an example for you of my work
varvorines 3 years ago
you have the volume turned all the way up. You need to make sure that the volume does not go to the red. That's called clipping. You loose sound quality.
varvorines 3 years ago 2
shit this one's tight..
2pac0406 3 years ago 3
u should change or alter that bell sound. its kinda annoyin.
TheYoungSav 3 years ago 3
thats mad.
jahfondi 3 years ago 2
This is good 4 a Garage Band Beat, good work.
BankheadBoyCool 4 years ago 2
here's a tip - u have to mess with the reverb, equalizer, echo, and just totally change the instrument, then click "save instrument'
-U NEED to do thus because the stock instruments on garageband suck, especially the drums.
andwatk 4 years ago
I even mad up words about the new world order...I thought it was tight
bonordonor 4 years ago
I have garageband but I don't recognize a lot of these sounds, arre these all the stock sounds that come with garageband or did you get some other soundbank?
19jeffrey90 4 years ago
They came with garage band.They are not loops but I forget how to find them I dont use garage band anymore,I use FL Studios
rappytaffy1 4 years ago
do you use FL on your mac?
and if you do, does the mic sync with FL?
LiveHardSkateHarder 4 years ago
Nice. Add a breakdown in the middle or towards the end
suckerfree23 4 years ago
instruments**
pradoplayer33 4 years ago
this is hot.. what instuments did u use..
pradoplayer33 4 years ago
I Synth called Cheerful Trance
A Church Bell
Orchestral Strings
Grand Piano
Some other sysnth for second chrous
And Hip Hop kit
rappytaffy1 4 years ago
Add some cymbals and hats. I like the strings!
SuperBeano69 4 years ago
you need a hi hat other that it's cool
martinpolanco 4 years ago
good for a first song. check out my beats!
Gobindman 4 years ago
Advice... find and download an acapella, and try to line that up with your beat (adjusting the tempo to go with the flow) My first one is worth a listen. Let me know what you think!
76jonathan 4 years ago
if you didnt use loops where did u get the beats from?
zellslayer 4 years ago
made them...obviously.
andwatk 4 years ago
I got FL Studios now! so stay tuned for a much more better non repetitive beat
rappytaffy1 4 years ago
sounded pretty good
macc300 4 years ago
how do you get this?
SuperAndrew1233 4 years ago
i make my beats on garage band a little more origonal then fl studios becouse fl studios needs loops to sound good........this beat is strait yo
dominicanvr4 4 years ago
ay u usin dat m-audio keyboard or shit from the comp btw ya beats hot
inmyairforce1z 4 years ago
good first beat.
way too many loops.
not original at all
1charliejf 4 years ago 2
YO! Thight beat.... Come check out mah beat....think ull like it..... HOLLA
dgdercio 4 years ago 2
cool. my friend has garage band. and i was makin some nice beats but im a musician, good work but it gets boring after a while. btw im 11
Vercron 4 years ago
heres some advice from an expert garageband beat maker.. use some melody somewhere like have it kick in on chorrus.. and maybe have the snare echos when its not the chorrus..
Ras902 4 years ago
nice keep up the gd work PS it would be gd if u cold add more stuff on it
mrlebwaze 4 years ago
pretty good for first beat...no advice comes to mind, but just explore different sounds-TAKE RISKS!! the best producers do it
IMakeItHappen 4 years ago
you should probably add a light hi hat every 2 steps or every step to add a little speed to it. check out my cousins video on my page.
dylanpd912 4 years ago
Its cool nice dude. I love rap and anyone who doesnt i cant really help them lol
Only2Rize 4 years ago
You guys got owned by rap and talentless music!
GenCollado 4 years ago
uhm...good job sorta...VERY repetative...but i guess that is what rap is...talentless ongoing repeats
midgetman9942 4 years ago
check out my music made with garage band too! click on my name. it's a hung up cover
fcbtudojunto 4 years ago
nice beat
KSB69 4 years ago
I can make a better song with Fruity Loops.
Dirtydog14 4 years ago
FL sucks ass
Bballer0905 4 years ago
dude... even though i hate rap music... this makes me want to like it! kudos and peace homie!
Alehondro33 4 years ago
yahh you really need more effects and I don't really like the bell thing but appart from that amazing for your first time
bye peace. xo
xx312dontfreakincare 4 years ago
awsome
andrewyaoauatauabaea 4 years ago
Dude...
I'm a musician.
I say this is pretty damn good for a first.
I don't even rap and I'd rap over this.
Good job.
If you love music...
Then don't listen to everyone else.
It's all about you.
Hell, don't even listen to me! =P
whatthehelldammit 4 years ago
pretty good
blu42setthut 4 years ago
stick with garageband, you'd be lost in Reason
Bballer0905 4 years ago
+1...
chasing1safety 4 years ago
+1? wtf
Bballer0905 4 years ago
yo fuck these haterz homie, you did your thing n to be honest with you id rap over this joint, its pretty tight for your first. keep doin ya thing n dont let these shit talkin bastards kill hip hop. peace
713flavuh 4 years ago
NVM. I just realized I'm not supposed to listen to the whole thing.
ofarevolution441 4 years ago
Wow. This honestly gets pretty annoying after a while.
ofarevolution441 4 years ago
It needs a little bit more effects to it
but i like it
9/10
lukeiamyourfatherwoo 4 years ago
Why didn't you just loop it if it just kept repeating? Would've saved alot of time.
sooperdoodey 4 years ago
well man i guess u wudnt have put dis beat up unless u thought it was good enough for ears...or if u wanted truthfull opinion,,,man ur concept of this beat needs total reworking...im not givin u da free card cuz its ur first, cuz my first garageband beat was pretty hot,,yep its been bout 2yrs wit my mac and im loving garageband,,,u jus need to kno how and wen to use certain sounds, but good luck to u in da future,,,check out my channel..1
gmfmusic 4 years ago
Just ask yourself , what makes this stand out from the rest of the beats out there?
To me , abosolutely nothing.
passionatese7en 4 years ago
I know it doesnt stand out.Its my first beat.I am just learning so I did something basic.
rappytaffy1 4 years ago
rap is 4 talantless posers
Warmoose76 4 years ago
i completly agree with you!!!!!!!
melmonkeyminder 4 years ago
agree about what?
rappytaffy1 4 years ago
nah dude
pedtorox 4 years ago
Easy to flow on and cool i liek it. 8/10
xxcornbreadxx 4 years ago
laffytaffy???
jahovaswitniss 4 years ago
Nice first try :) You might want to bring the volume down on the synths/bells when the beat drops.
KrisScofield 4 years ago
Make it less, like, repetitive
ZedBum 4 years ago
I know it's your first, so no hate. 6/10, on beat and all, just extremely basic w/o catchiness. Keep at it, try some complex patters. If you're going to do simple beats, add something that sounds catchy, awesome, or a drum pattern that's perfect for spitting.
I've nothing for you to click, but be sure to check the mixtape The Flame Effect when I drop it.
-B. Magic
bmagic408 4 years ago