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[lovejonas90]

BREATHE TAKING

hahah so good 

[21CBlondie]

wow!

this is an amazing read! i love the chemistry that is shown between the two!

completely classy! and very addictive read!

looking forward to reading the future novel you will one day write!

[swirlygirly411]

omg so amazing! i loved it!

[qnsprinkles615]

very good scene!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[bfflovers]

Ay cono that was HOT!

SOO amazing, what is he counting?

[Xox0NelenaLove0xoX]

he's counting her orgasms lol

[ElizabethRachelDare]

wowzers!! you're an awesome writer!!!

[J25G11L94]

WOW. =)

[suchaloser10]

ahmazing!! you definately hit every point wihtout freaking us too much xD

that was soo romantic!

[xkimberlay17x]

amazing!

[cristy922]

Ay DIOS mio ! xDD

woah, i loved it :D

[Xilovejb00X]

you write this seens to tastefully.

not trashy at all.

its amazing.

you're an incredible writer.

[Magnificent408]

ohh my dear lord..

i loved it.. it was tastefully done..

i love ur writting..

[VanessaRose88]

awh! lol nick is so sweet on that last line lol XD

[iluvjaj94]

daaayyyuummm!!!

thats like PERFECT!!!!!

soo romantic!!

[minorityofone1984]

ahhhh so amazing

there is so much I want to know from this series it is amazing

[Xox0NelenaLove0xoX]

what do you want to know?

[minorityofone1984]

where taylor is

results of demis tests

just that kind of stuff

[Xox0NelenaLove0xoX]

oooooo =D

[xoselenaloverxo]

amazing!

lol, i <3 how u said ay dios mio!, it fits perfectly

[RQOCJD]

You are the most amazin writer to write this in the most non perverted way!! I think you're the only one who could do tht..this wasn't perverted at all jst plain romantic and showed thier love for each other :) amazing post more soon :)

[Xox0NelenaLove0xoX]

thank you.

i'm working on the next one right now =]

[jojonasrox01]

haha love it omjjjj write again soon

[Loverxlolxox]

awsome

LOVE IT =D

[xoxohappiness]

hahaha ay Dios mio ahahaa that reminded me of the spanish soap operas, the novelas.

[Xox0NelenaLove0xoX]

lmfao! Novelas are addicting.

[xoxohappiness]

hahaha :) yes they aree. i've watched a million.

[Xox0NelenaLove0xoX]

Me too!!!!! lol

[xoxohappiness]

they're all just so dramatic :O

[ladiicrazii234]

Wow. You're such an amazing writer. You make everything perfectly. . . Even the sex scenes ;)

[Xox0NelenaLove0xoX]

Thank you <3

[jemiandnelenalovers]

I loved it!

your are sooo amazing at writing sex scenes, they arent just all perverted and stuff.

their romantic and just amazing! xD

your most deff my FAVORITE Writer on youtube! i get soo happy when i see that you have posted (:

Loved it!

[Xox0NelenaLove0xoX]

Thank you so much!

I was a bit nervous to post this because I wasn't sure how people would react. I tried to show the strong chemistry between them while trying to keep it classy and romantic. This scene personifies their love.

[jemiandnelenalovers]

Your welcome, you deserve it(:

Well, you nailed ALL that PERFECTLY! :D

It was classy and romantic. you don't have to worry about that. :D

and if people didn't like it, well they just don't know true love :P

[JoeDemiJemi2gether]

sweet, delicious sin. MY THREE NEW FAVORITE WORDS

[Xox0NelenaLove0xoX]

haha! glad to be of help. =D

[lipstick4kisses]

I can't wait for the next one

[splexy901]

omg....that was like whoa

are you sure your not a novelist lol i would so read your book lol

gr8 epp...amazing eppy<3<3

[Xox0NelenaLove0xoX]

no, not yet. hopefully one day I'll write a book =]

[splexy901]

lol well consider me a customer lol:P:)

[BritinieMartinie]

that was very rated r...they's gots a dirty little secret!

[stashhjonas]

Ay Dios Mio is right! Even if it was a bit graphic, it was mature & VERY well-written. You showed them in love & it was perfection at its best.

There's no doubt you're an amazing writer :)

[nickjonasforever9876]

I LOVED IT(:

[sweetnelena]

awsomness

[jmnelena]

Whoa...

nelena man ;D

[cheerleader8yrs]

wow that was rated R that was a little to strong

but other then that yay nelena moment

[yakutiya]

lol. I love your tags. such amazing writting:) plz post more!!!

[jadoretuX0]

OMG SO INTENSE!!

love it!

[dohitstracey]

um. wow. lol love the tags and the episode. nick dont leave selena!! :( cant wait for the next one!

[iLoveTelena]

i loved it (:

[StarsCollide97]

woah! thats just . . . woah!

good job! xD

[Xox0NelenaLove0xoX]

hehe, thanks =]