You are the most amazin writer to write this in the most non perverted way!! I think you're the only one who could do tht..this wasn't perverted at all jst plain romantic and showed thier love for each other :) amazing post more soon :)
I was a bit nervous to post this because I wasn't sure how people would react. I tried to show the strong chemistry between them while trying to keep it classy and romantic. This scene personifies their love.
BREATHE TAKING
hahah so good
lovejonas90 1 year ago
wow!
this is an amazing read! i love the chemistry that is shown between the two!
completely classy! and very addictive read!
looking forward to reading the future novel you will one day write!
21CBlondie 2 years ago
omg so amazing! i loved it!
swirlygirly411 2 years ago
very good scene!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
qnsprinkles615 2 years ago
Ay cono that was HOT!
SOO amazing, what is he counting?
bfflovers 2 years ago
he's counting her orgasms lol
Xox0NelenaLove0xoX 2 years ago
wowzers!! you're an awesome writer!!!
ElizabethRachelDare 2 years ago
WOW. =)
J25G11L94 2 years ago
ahmazing!! you definately hit every point wihtout freaking us too much xD
that was soo romantic!
suchaloser10 2 years ago 2
amazing!
xkimberlay17x 2 years ago
Ay DIOS mio ! xDD
woah, i loved it :D
cristy922 2 years ago
you write this seens to tastefully.
not trashy at all.
its amazing.
you're an incredible writer.
Xilovejb00X 2 years ago
ohh my dear lord..
i loved it.. it was tastefully done..
i love ur writting..
Magnificent408 2 years ago
awh! lol nick is so sweet on that last line lol XD
VanessaRose88 2 years ago
daaayyyuummm!!!
thats like PERFECT!!!!!
soo romantic!!
iluvjaj94 2 years ago
ahhhh so amazing
there is so much I want to know from this series it is amazing
minorityofone1984 2 years ago
what do you want to know?
Xox0NelenaLove0xoX 2 years ago
where taylor is
results of demis tests
just that kind of stuff
minorityofone1984 2 years ago
oooooo =D
Xox0NelenaLove0xoX 2 years ago
amazing!
lol, i <3 how u said ay dios mio!, it fits perfectly
xoselenaloverxo 2 years ago
You are the most amazin writer to write this in the most non perverted way!! I think you're the only one who could do tht..this wasn't perverted at all jst plain romantic and showed thier love for each other :) amazing post more soon :)
RQOCJD 2 years ago
thank you.
i'm working on the next one right now =]
Xox0NelenaLove0xoX 2 years ago
haha love it omjjjj write again soon
jojonasrox01 2 years ago
awsome
LOVE IT =D
Loverxlolxox 2 years ago
hahaha ay Dios mio ahahaa that reminded me of the spanish soap operas, the novelas.
xoxohappiness 2 years ago
lmfao! Novelas are addicting.
Xox0NelenaLove0xoX 2 years ago
hahaha :) yes they aree. i've watched a million.
xoxohappiness 2 years ago
Me too!!!!! lol
Xox0NelenaLove0xoX 2 years ago
they're all just so dramatic :O
xoxohappiness 2 years ago
Wow. You're such an amazing writer. You make everything perfectly. . . Even the sex scenes ;)
ladiicrazii234 2 years ago
Thank you <3
Xox0NelenaLove0xoX 2 years ago
I loved it!
your are sooo amazing at writing sex scenes, they arent just all perverted and stuff.
their romantic and just amazing! xD
your most deff my FAVORITE Writer on youtube! i get soo happy when i see that you have posted (:
Loved it!
jemiandnelenalovers 2 years ago
Thank you so much!
I was a bit nervous to post this because I wasn't sure how people would react. I tried to show the strong chemistry between them while trying to keep it classy and romantic. This scene personifies their love.
Xox0NelenaLove0xoX 2 years ago
Your welcome, you deserve it(:
Well, you nailed ALL that PERFECTLY! :D
It was classy and romantic. you don't have to worry about that. :D
and if people didn't like it, well they just don't know true love :P
jemiandnelenalovers 2 years ago
sweet, delicious sin. MY THREE NEW FAVORITE WORDS
JoeDemiJemi2gether 2 years ago
haha! glad to be of help. =D
Xox0NelenaLove0xoX 2 years ago
I can't wait for the next one
lipstick4kisses 2 years ago
omg....that was like whoa
are you sure your not a novelist lol i would so read your book lol
gr8 epp...amazing eppy<3<3
splexy901 2 years ago 2
no, not yet. hopefully one day I'll write a book =]
Xox0NelenaLove0xoX 2 years ago
lol well consider me a customer lol:P:)
splexy901 2 years ago
that was very rated r...they's gots a dirty little secret!
BritinieMartinie 2 years ago
Ay Dios Mio is right! Even if it was a bit graphic, it was mature & VERY well-written. You showed them in love & it was perfection at its best.
There's no doubt you're an amazing writer :)
stashhjonas 2 years ago
I LOVED IT(:
nickjonasforever9876 2 years ago
awsomness
sweetnelena 2 years ago
Whoa...
nelena man ;D
jmnelena 2 years ago
wow that was rated R that was a little to strong
but other then that yay nelena moment
cheerleader8yrs 2 years ago
lol. I love your tags. such amazing writting:) plz post more!!!
yakutiya 2 years ago
OMG SO INTENSE!!
love it!
jadoretuX0 2 years ago
um. wow. lol love the tags and the episode. nick dont leave selena!! :( cant wait for the next one!
dohitstracey 2 years ago
i loved it (:
iLoveTelena 2 years ago
woah! thats just . . . woah!
good job! xD
StarsCollide97 2 years ago
hehe, thanks =]
Xox0NelenaLove0xoX 2 years ago