Runescape - Breath rsmv

[Itssocliptastic]

Good overall. Nice song ^^

But:

-Don't just use words through the intro, do something, even emotes. Just don't repeat it.

-/begin lines exactly where they should, end exactly where they should. Use the Slow Motion effect.

-You can repeat some parts of the chorus, but not all.

Good overall for a WMM vid.

[obbma4ler]

thanks =D

[wickedjohnnyown]

Nice choice for music, keep it going mate :)

[obbma4ler]

yeah, i wish i could with movie maker lol =P