16 bars a day - Day 9

[Devoon22]

the editing was annoying

[Junmonsterr]

ghostwriter

ghostwriter

ghostwrite

time to become one

[WingsofRedemption]

There are users on here that hate for no damn reason. Where is your 16 bars a day?

[AubreyLover]

lyrics are ok work on your delivery

[chicagoballer16]

u got no flow ahahah...the lyrics are decent...

[DennisS1500]

Can't really tell what this is about besides maybe depression or maybe wishing shit was how it used to be, but it's alright.

[vpong]

fuk these hataz man, they really feel this shit to

but it eases the pain in themselves if they just diss you

Its sad how bored ppl get, dissin other ppl's expressions

they really saying their a loser, in an indirect confession

they talk smack over the internet and just diss people

cause talking smack in person, they know that shits lethal

I'm giving u this verse simply to tell ya that i feel ya bro

n i hope u over that shit now, cuz it was a long time ago

part2

[vpong]

At the start of this clip, thought it was gon be sum whack ass shit

but at about 40 seconds into it, i was thinking it might be sum phat shit

whether u a rapper or not, i'll leave it to others to debate

but just lettin u know im diggin the clip cause i can relate

1 day my girl told me she's done n that she's bouncin

I started drinking heavy n blazin whenever i get downsome

but this is just an ordinary chapter, a temporary phase

n from it, i grew in all ways, looked forward to betta days

part 1

[16barsaday]

appreciate it man.

[vivalaal89]

how call the beat

[Maddymw4]

This was amazing, "Cure dizziness with crouch" is one of the best lines I've ever heard, I know that feeling so well and can picture the thousand times i've done it in the past and what I was feeling during those times.

You really understand what it's like to be human, and translate it to music so amazingly.

[UCantBanDJKazz]

u make me wanna gouge my eyes out so i can use a toothpick to fuck up the insides of my ears so i dont have to hear ur wack ass

[jaycub123]

thats pretty fucked up man ya it wasnt the best but why even make a childish comment like that, i mean at least he tried you should really grow up man.

[UCantBanDJKazz]

dude shut the fuck up, u been commenting at me like i care who u are.

truth is, this nigga sucks. this wasnt even a one take & its still off beat. me pointin out the facts shouldnt offend u so much

hop off my nuts & stop talkin to me, smh

[jaycub123]

honestly bro i could care less if you like me or not i just think your way to damn cocky and talk way to much shit about stuff that doesnt even have to be said.

[footballqb456]

wow dude you fuckin suck

[corcorans11]

You suck give up

[Evanflo]

sorry for that last comment man, dont kill yourself.

[UCantBanDJKazz]

lmao

[Evanflo]

jacked the beat and weak ass rhymes... might as well go EMO cuz you act like a bitch. straight up

[thamagicsho2003]

dope

[313Thug4Life]

I heard your first one you got sllot better man

[kevinhuff22]

thankyou.

[504banga]

Damn I feel that shit son I subscribed

[smartdog1012]

What the hell u can't leave us like that keep making more

[xstunnax]

u got alot better

[AVDJ]

Yes! Good job.

[ashluh]

I hope you're doing okay.

[ashluh]

Love is hard as fuck.