im not sure if you internalized your own feelings to come up with this story- but if you did, thats pretty interesting because not to many people embrace their imagination like that. the fact that a tree is growing out of control of the girl, i relate to very well.. your story simplifies the weight that i think most of us creative people sometimes feel because of our imaginations being so big.
Cute, but is there a moral? I could see myself reading it to my neice but I can't quite understand a moral. Maybe that no one can see what you imagine? Idk, just some thought.
Maybe it's because it's 1:30 am, but this made me all sleepy. Which I guess is a compliment because children's stories are often read to help them get to sleep. G'night.
Listen to how you're reading in this one. That other video is NOT how you read. You did a good job here. :)
xxitsmyfault 8 months ago
Can I purchase this please?!?!?! I would love to read this!
MsJessicailene 1 year ago
Keep expressing yourself!!! Excellent thing to do!!! Your my hero!!! God Blass!
OneThousandFist123 1 year ago
congratulations for that story.
violetparme 1 year ago
wow! very nice.
therappah 2 years ago
:O that's BRILLIANT.
i actually thought this was outstanding especially the end.
you're also beautiful. [..x..]
xlaura120x 2 years ago
Outstanding!
TLynnBryant 2 years ago
may i imagine you???please?!
greenblazerXV 2 years ago
...deep...
HangMeUp2TearMeDown 2 years ago
that was really good :]
XoXoLisa14 2 years ago
amm Yeah...
bobcat1905 2 years ago
this is scary if u read this this far u will die in 10 days if u dont send to any 15 videos in 2 hours SORRY x
xx8hunni8xx 2 years ago
veryy good. :D amazing!
ToriS042 2 years ago
WAT IS THE DAM POINT OF THE VID!
bobcat1905 2 years ago
its her imagination.
and she's the only on that can see it.
drummachinexx 2 years ago
OK WHAT EVER......
bobcat1905 2 years ago
What is the dam point of your comment?
pastpanda 2 years ago
Awesome video hun :) your hair looks cute too :P
smmoncton 2 years ago
that was really good and i got it to
keanulpireslover 2 years ago
Wow that is an amazing story.
HrsRocker 2 years ago
Your make up is amazing. I love it. Your hair is cute too. I like how the lights make you look pale. Awesome video. (:
amkmkgkg 2 years ago
OMG so cute !!!! love it !
Tictacbooshay 2 years ago
okay so i love your eyes so u should do a vid. about HOW U PUT YOUR EYE MAKE UP ON its hella pretty!
iLoveLyrics25 2 years ago
Great imagination and creativity! I enjoyed it very much.
ladyorchidtao 2 years ago
That was fricken amazing!!!
Erintoo2011 2 years ago
THAT WAS SO GOOD
ktm3181 2 years ago
aww, that wos amazing, !! xxx
brownbearhunky 2 years ago
Hi ! Done well ! Imaginative !
OlympicSong 2 years ago
A+ excellent job
i liked it a lot
Kiana1002 2 years ago
im a preschool teacher, and i must say, that is AMAZING. if you do get it published, i will be one of the first ones to buy it!
LipGlossAholicz 2 years ago 2
AW!
GirlHeartsGuitar 2 years ago
ur very artsy
Kristenrexia 2 years ago
i love riding ponys
maleslut20 2 years ago
Love it!
bunnymynost 2 years ago
wow that wz awesome!!!!!!
:]lol
kidolight 2 years ago
cute :)
JustMarleeYo 3 years ago 2
that was cute
lovestruck16 3 years ago
plase do publish, i hope u do, its a wonderful short story that got me in the heart ^^
alexbaxthedarkside 3 years ago
wow that was so good, but the music was a little loud against you voice
TashEmLidzMOSH 3 years ago
this is great, kandyce. props.
TenaciousDfan4ever 3 years ago
wow! thats so good!! i thought that was a real book!
lildutchgrl13 3 years ago
OMGg!
I love this.
Publish?!
Sarah7661 3 years ago
wow you wrote this?!?
the story was amazing... you told it so well and the music was a nice touch
JMoMo17101 3 years ago
you are a master story teller--- the end was absolutely brilliant. bravo!
shibbolethed 3 years ago
freakin yes!
that was awesome.
xjustxwantxoutx 3 years ago
did you write that?? its really cool i love it!
AJdood2257 3 years ago
I really really LOVE this!
kandyb45 3 years ago
im not sure if you internalized your own feelings to come up with this story- but if you did, thats pretty interesting because not to many people embrace their imagination like that. the fact that a tree is growing out of control of the girl, i relate to very well.. your story simplifies the weight that i think most of us creative people sometimes feel because of our imaginations being so big.
jeffdickerson86 3 years ago
you should go out side once in a while
skatesquam 3 years ago
I loved the end, wise old man!
connorsayer05 3 years ago
i mean i love this story
PeteRoc925 3 years ago
i love is story
PeteRoc925 3 years ago
this is wonderful, :)
xxitsmyfault 3 years ago
good job! i loved it!
SurfAngel1623 3 years ago
Really nice! very cool! loved it!
Metroid02099 3 years ago
I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :o
Cyb3rGnome 3 years ago
you're gorgeous oh my goshhh! and i loved the story, it reminded me of the giving tree.
savedbyfalloutboy 3 years ago
Wow. That's really good.
SecksFaace 3 years ago
that has a great moral, i loved it
how long did it take you to write it
im sure it would have taken me hours
MightBeMarissa 3 years ago
amazing,i loved the backing music as well! what's it called???
anniethesponge 3 years ago
Cute, but is there a moral? I could see myself reading it to my neice but I can't quite understand a moral. Maybe that no one can see what you imagine? Idk, just some thought.
Stubbs517 3 years ago
Don't be so self-conscious, because other people wont notice your flaws, only you will.
...Just a guess. I might be wrong haha
DeadlyRemote 3 years ago
the moral of the story is to embrace yourself
and to understand that your flaws aren't nearly as prominent as you think they are
kisforkandyce 3 years ago
why would an imagination tree be a flaw :(
i want one!
xxitsmyfault 3 years ago
love it. :]
xxsandyclaws 3 years ago
awesome!
askhung916 3 years ago
i really liked it (x100)
BrookieBelle 3 years ago
awesome awesome
nosleeptomarrow 3 years ago
cute story!!!
LoveMyBebe08 3 years ago
shweet =]
HeelsOverHeadx3 3 years ago
another creepy one...good story
sounds good enough to be published
TriBulated 3 years ago
That was awesome Kandyce, though i had a similar poem dealing with a boy and his mother and the boy had an over active imagination
gamerjr92 3 years ago
you look like a webkin
eqqalizer 3 years ago
that was great!
good job, kandyce!
ihearttyouu 3 years ago
I really liked it! :P
HAHAtwingeME 3 years ago
that was pretty awesome =D
very poetic :)
and luv the hair and makeup!
its like a style from the 20s very cute ^^)
Jisforjen 3 years ago
Your awesome, i love this kind of thing, i like the old Hollywood glam look too
treehamallama 3 years ago
Seriously that was AMAZING!!! I loved it.
sarafranc 3 years ago
that was awesome!! but, was a little hard to hear over the music :( but maybe thats just me! great story!
missyblissy90 3 years ago
poetic beautiful.. everything you could ask for amazing
your great
glad your back
GodsGiftGraciousLuck 3 years ago
Maybe it's because it's 1:30 am, but this made me all sleepy. Which I guess is a compliment because children's stories are often read to help them get to sleep. G'night.
ItsFizikal 3 years ago
awesome. <3
MadiMaeLetsPlay 3 years ago
Excellent. I'll read this to my children. Ahem, in...10 years.
SoarOfTheConchords 3 years ago
Jonny Greenwood! good choice :)
physicsofblue 3 years ago
Wow that was actually really good, i dig the music too
UNTrumpet 3 years ago
Great Job
FunLovingCriminals77 3 years ago
Aw that was really great [:
anaesthes1a 3 years ago
omg I really like that story.I would buy it.
jessie4141 3 years ago
very cute!
I LOVE your hair in this!!!
RhondaKG 3 years ago
OH PWN!!! thats legit
milesklostocol 3 years ago
Great job!
TheMovieGuy1234 3 years ago
that was really good. I think the music overpowered it a little in the end - i had a hard time hearing/focusing on what you were saying.
Cute hair!
airrikajswan 3 years ago
wow! Awesome story :)
PhunkyPrincess 3 years ago
samzies!
great job! I like it so much.
LizzyDel 3 years ago
Cuuute. You're very creative, I'm jealous. Haha.
xiamrobot 3 years ago
I wish I could write something. You're very creative. :)
Monalisa2005 3 years ago