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[Melanlol]

You are amazing! A True poet, that was raw emotion. Well done!

[guyhill2]

Total ownage! And it sounds like he deserved it, too. Guys like that make me ashamed that I am a man. I hope you also kicked him out of your house butt-naked and still dribbling.

[MannyFandango]

Rargh! Bash that phallocentrism!

1.13 laugh out loud haha

[markds3]

OK - so you' re a dike? who cares?



[MetaCraken]

You're a 21st century Catullus.

[FreeBornJohn1600s]

women using sex as a weapon. now there's a surprise.

[Aegialeus]

He may have fuck'd you, but you fucked back brilliantly.

You left that bad experience on paper and shoved it back at his ego....well done...next!

I love ballsy women who straight up no bullshit, who are take it or leave it.

I wish well, good health, and much happiness.

[Antichryst666]

An eye for an eye only works if the other person has an eye. If not, hack off something else. As a male, I can attest to the degree of justice you have attained, It's a shame some men are too blind to truly understand that. To be fair, there are a few women out there that could use some thicker lenses.

[MewHamHead]

Victim status oozing out here.

[qwexas]

I've heard a lot about how it's best to tell people how you feel, being blunt and honest is the virtue of courage, etc., but sometimes it's best to pretend. Tolerating other people while pretending to like them is easier than pointing out each thing that bothers us, and won't lead to unnecessary hurt feelings. Besides, the people I tolerate might tolerate me, and really think something that would offend me if they said it.

Do you wonder how the man's poem would sound?

[princessannikki]

LOL!!!! n_n

[80deadsilent]

sounds like a girl who cant live with a decision she made and i think this poems about a woman

[boobmcnutt]

That was good; and I don't even like things so straightforward usually.

It was almost shockingly emotional (and maybe moreso given that I'm a guy).

[325982668]

that was great, perfect voice and all in one cut too, what a perfect way to start my summer-o'-fucking

[InTylerWeTrust84]

Wow, I found my favorite poem ever. Its like you wrote it to me. Ha.

[nimitta1]

hahaha, this is fantastic.. bravo

[subach]

Wish I were a friend of he, for which I'd be gratuitously.

[DavidRandallCurtis]

Great stuff.. faved and five stars...

[WordsWithoutBounds]

Wow thanks, I feel genuinely honoured having reviewed your vids. Definitely subbed.

[XaveJamesGrey]

Excellent!

[TokenDrone]

True poetry.

[Nyhee7]

This poem reminds me of the power in Alanis Morrissette's song, You Oughta Know. Way Cool, Jess, way cool. Your words flowed like a song, which actually added a kind of whalop to the punches to this ass's ego. A well deserved thrashing, indeed. :)

[BayAreaMisterE]

I like the new site, nice name, good stuff -- Keep it coming -- It's poetry to my ears...

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[BayAreaMisterE]

Biting, Searing, Driving and Penetrating. As one who has not always been a feminist, when I was young they didn't even have the word, I felt the pain of guilt for a moment. Than I remembered the part about being free and fucking for free and and felt liberated by the passion of equality, soothed by the memory of being so much in "Like" that it felt like "Love" and the many exchanges that were mutual and anatomical correct!

[nezahualcoyotl85]

guese im normal when compared to others!!

[nezahualcoyotl85]

thank god im the one with the dick!!

lol good poem descriptive in a pornograghic way but honest.

that siad there is no such thing as a free lunch.

[BENY0HAMA]

Wow. Whoever that's about...ouch.

[hunkamonkiman]

Nice. I feel dirty now.

[Ayatron34]

There was a part I didnt like. When you described the act itself of penetration with a condom. You made it sound really heinous and abusive, but I mean all that happened in that part of the poem is that he wore a latex condom and penetrated.

Any guy would have had to of done the same thing at that point, so I did'nt get that part.

[WordsWithoutBounds]

I suppose the difference is that when I write poetry I speak in a poetic voice, one which has very distinct feelings and motivations. So you shouldn't see it so much as me giving some kind of manifesto as an author of my views on penetrative sex with men, so much as the poetic voice's feelings about a particular partly fictional exploit. I do FEEL some of these things, it just means that on this channel I don't claim to make rational logical arguments, just representations of irrationality.

[SMoldie]

AAHH to be 18 again. Props for your honesty re your experience. Remember they know no better especially pre 30, it does get better for you and the other person:D Hugs and continued honesty.

[XiaoGui17]

I think the point of that line was it wasn't as romantic or majestic as he thought it was. By describing it in blunt terms, it loses the sense of eroticism and just sounds mechanical.

[BayAreaLen]

I just had a moment, where I was thankful that we've never fucked before. Although... I wouldn't have been so far off the mark.

;-)

[joebot1]

ha ha ha!!, that was ace!!.

Angry poetry, that's new to me but fucking great stuff!.

[Ayatron34]

Did you just not fancy him ?

[Ayatron34]

That sex does sound really horrendous when you put it like that.

[StanMarsh1]

As someone with a hairy back, I now feel vaguely self-conscious.

Also, good poem.

[SUTHERNGIRRLL]

There's one I can totally identify with!!! 5 Stars here

[sammasati1]

Astonishing and sincere 5*****

excellent !