Lightsaber fight *work in progress*

[leon2914]

sorry ryan wiber is better

[77Krugg77]

The choreography wasn't bad, and I love the force energy ball, but at the end I saw him running with a stick not saber. That confused me though, cause at the beginning, it seemed as though, due to the saber wavering slightly, you weren't using a stick or pole at all, but making sabers without an actual prop (which I don't recommend). Maybe you could try speeding up your moves.

[Khlae]

It would help if you actually fought each other; half the movie I wondered whether or not you would actually engage each other. Try rehearsing a set of attacks to make the moves seem more fluent. Also work a little on your running.

[77Krugg77]

@Khlae Honestly, my friend and I practice martial arts a lot, including weapon fighting, and we've been working on a movie of our own (one with real swords another with lightsabers), and we found that if we actually spar against eachother, rather than use choreography, it looks much better, not to mention real. We usually don't hit eachother cause we're so evenly matched, so it works out. When we do hit eachother, we cut it out and use that moment as an angle change. Actually works very well.

[punkrockefeller]

from 1:13 on, the light saber is turned off. very unprofessional. 2 guys gooring off at work. rated at a c- and ur both fired.

[77Krugg77]

@punkrockefeller They said it's their first try AND that it's UNFINISHED, meaning they were just showing a sneak peak. Chill out.

[punkrockefeller]

@77Krugg77

just offering my critical analysis of their work, dummy.

[77Krugg77]

@punkrockefeller I realie that, "dummy", but you did it in a jack ass way.

[punkrockefeller]

@77Krugg77

hmmmm....well maybe u could demonstrate giving a critical comment using a non jackass technique?

[77Krugg77]

@punkrockefeller Hmmmm..... Well maybe you take the time to move your eyes 5 messages below this one and read the critical comment I ALREADY wrote using a non jackass technique. I don't know if jackasses CAN be non-jackass though, so don't try TOO hard, wouldn't want you to explode trying to wrap your mind around that concept. Or do I...?

[punkrockefeller]

@77Krugg77

huh?

[jiujitsu909]

ok good

[jiujitsu909]

wrers part 2?

[hiddenstalker]

at this moment part 2 is being worked on, and in the Comming weeks we will shot it, then i'll have to make the effects and soundtrack.

[jiujitsu909]

all igot to say is fuck one of the best home made movies song is great and acting to you need to make part two!!!!

[jiujitsu909]

hey whats the name of the song

[hiddenstalker]

Hans Zimmer - injection

[sareault]

bruce .....té malade......hahahahahahaha

[MariePuce]

Écoeurant!!! Je capote!!

[Mocktales]

Not bad guys. Not bad at all. I look forward to more as you post.

What F/X programs are you using?

[hiddenstalker]

Adobe after effect 7.0, i tried a few other and found it was the best for lightsabers