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[againstas]

aww soo sweet. *hugs*

[jim477]

wow, great filming! very inspiring for an aspiring film maker as my self.

[lana1223]

lol interesting... "lets make biscuts, yea?" "YEA!!!!!!"

[jaykyburz]

needs more ukulele

[Nom1nus]

i realize that i have the same cleaning maschine... dont know what is the english word for because iam from german. But the thing i talk about is the red-black maschine with eyes on it. I have the same ^^

[KrunchyGoodness]

ill be 100% critical

the acting could have been more believable.

the production quality seemed to low compared to what it could have been (especially the room noise: that series of jump cuts was certainly a great idea but was interrupted by the sound)

the camera work was too close giving the movie a claustrophobic feel which i would guess may or may not have been the intention but i personally didnt think it fit

otherwise a great short film, something you should be proud of!

[Kewen]

Really appreciate your comment :D

I think the genuine reason I had to film so close was because of the mic on the camera, I doubt it would have picked up much sound otherwise. And it was filmed in a small house. But you're right, and if I was going to re-make it I would do lots of things differently, and reducing the cramped-looking shots is one of them.

[theOpheliac]

I like it!

To me though, you'll always be known as my sister who made Fishmaster. XD

[Sewingmachinefactory]

I liked it. ^^

[Inferno566]

i liked it! good work. :)