what am i supposed to do now?can you tell me what to do now? i do not know what to do now/ i feel like im standing on air/no solid ground/i cant be found/lost in a society so gone in the sense of right/ thats its lost its will to fight/like a tamed lion/ lost all will to live/ i sit in the corner tryin to forgive/ but harder and harder it gets to live/ try to believe in humanity/ apparently civilized/ but all i see is endless fighting and poverty/gone not to be seen/swept away like a ship at sea
thatz very deep man !! that i have written on it in german Warst du auch schon mal an einem Punkt wo du nicht mehr wusstest wie es weiter geht, Wo sich Hass, Liebe und Hoffnung im kreis dreht. Und deine Freunde dich nicht verstehn, Und du dort mit deiner Qual ganz alleine stehst. Du liegst abends im Bett und fängst an zu wein, Wirst Hysterisch, zweifelst und fängst an zu schrein. Du denkst warum ist das Leben so gemein, Du nimmst ein Messer in die Hand denn du meinst. ``Es gibt keinen Ausweg``
As I continue to spit.. I keep Lyrics Lyrically Wet.. With Hard Work and Sweat.. Tellin Me I ain't ever be nothin.. One Day Ima be somethin.. You Can Be in the background Suckin.. On your own tears.. Keep My Life Free of fear.. Wish I Could Take You Back.. The shit you did was way past whack.. Almost made me grab the 9.. Almost made me lose my mind.. Thankfully I put priorities in line.. I walked away.. As they say.. Live to fight another day..
i like this track well should i say ive like it for a couple years considering i done a cover to it, its just very simmillar to a piano violin beat made by rednooddles but i noticed its a differnt pitch tempo everything and the hook(deep keys) is very workable nice work pal, just hope it aint been rippd and fiddled with cause ur only gonna let yourself down,
@AvocadoMatrix I rapped to this and put lyrics in the vid, Not trying to spam..I just can't post a vid response for some reason...so here check this out:
I sit here miserably, and watch the sun set from sky to sea, reminding me, of this world that’s cold, the one that’s got this young man feeling old, so who am I today, just a fool I heard somebody once say , but that's ok, see I dont plan on livin much longer anyway, life’s been to hard on me , im from the ghetto where know one gives a fuck about me,they say im dirt , but for what it's worth, grey sky’s are the perfect disquize to hide what really lies behind these lonly eye's
with bones,I stand alone holmes, all empty and blank with a stare it's like lawn knombles, looking on with these lonly eyes as today’s adolecence are messing with defenceless minds , there like turrpintine running up my spine,or fine wines falling off grape vines, shit it’s all the same to me, as
i was born wild, and destined to become a poor little white child, who might smile if only for a little while, cause now im grown and ashamed to be my mothers child left in the ghetto, left to become jello, well fuckit I should be a dead child, as dead as can be, like the rest of the world is to me, cause it's killing me to be living in this misery, so what's life worth if skys collapse, all I do is relapse, hold all this love only to be told to stand back, as haters laugh like gators withgats
my names jon... ima a rap artist... i really like ur beats and id like to use them in some of my songs... the songs i have now r my old ones that suck... but if i could use ur beats i can make way better songs!!!
no matter what you say i kno that someday u will regret everything that u said i kno someday all this pain will fly away i kno someday u will come back saying baby im sorry please give me another try but sadly thats wasant enough i was asking where were u wwen my life and heart was falling apart i thought we would be together till death do us part aperantly i was wrong so no matter what u say i kno that someday u will regret everything u saud i kno that someday all this pain will fly away
Yea Motha Fucka Get Some Cold Cut Throat Life Pounded Life Pounded Got You In My Sight So We Played It all right Heavy Gun Powder Lighten Up The Night Another Day Another war Soon To Be A Hit Team Comeing Through My Door Quarter Past 7 Coming Through Your Block Pulling 9-11 Cause We Own The Dome Central Smokeing Chrome All Out Record's Here To Take Your Home Hommien Take A Toke This Shit Is On.....
love this track, i just played a guitar solo over it and it sound mad, i just wish i could rap or mc cus i've got so much to say but the words ent comin out properly i just sound like a pleb
yea uh huh runnin and theres a cloud over my shoulder
never stoped following still here getting older and its trying to
make me lose my mind, waking up every day corrupt lookin for a dime
just needed a line, never fucked with that white, pharm partys the same
what you got for trade, we can try em all puff on this high grade, no seeds no needs cuz with one hit im flying over seas, homegrown thats a fact, still spittin bars no cadillac, never thought i was black but still spit the crack
i was destined to walk a path, one i didnt chose but im attached, running in the dark having a relapse, my lungs are about to collapse, on a new path no maps, walking and drawing my own lines, follow no roads, i know where i needa go, and its far from here, a place thats not so near, a place to escape, one with unfimiliar landscapes, noone knows me ive made no mistakes, im mc im not a fake, cut you up throw you in a bag shake and bake, thats it for now just a simple sample i got flow thats ample
i keep my eyes wide open all the time, cause every time i close my eyes i get lost in my mind, i keep lookin over my shoulder just ta find that death is creepin up behind me tryna find me tryna two time, but if its my time ta go lord lemme know, cause ima stand strong neva hang my head low..
Was Ist Die Schöne Welt/ Die In Blut Getränkt/ Die Kriege, Massen Morde, Wo Der Mensch Sich Gott Nennt/ Wo Mütter Ihre Kinder Blutent In Den Armen Tragen/ Und Zu Allah Beten, Dass Sie Noch Ein Wort Sagen/ Was Ist Die Schöne Welt/ Die Schöne Welt/ Wo Die V.I.P Sich Battlet, Wer Hat Am Meisten Geld/ Wo Eltern Keine Zeit Haben Ihre Kinder Zu Lieben/ Zur Arsche Müssen Um Etwas Essen Zu Kriegen...
dat things got out hanD even tho i always let you be in commanD u still cheateD yea when on and did it i aint tripping i got many hoes in fact so many dat 4rm of all of those hoes dat ima get an overdoes ja fuk u bicth dis is my 4ever goodbye gotta go smoke da seedless n gstay high~
wut will u do to blow up, ill doin anything to blow up,so what,if i never grow up,ill bet u i already growed nuts,flows nuts, swaggers on fire so warn yall people dont touch, hold up, i just want to know what, will happen if the world blows up, i dont want to go down hopefully i go up, wit me and my family,firefighters and all the soldiers, who put their lifes on the line fighting like the owe us, i just want show us, appreciate it and get this weight off my shoulders.
woorden verloren je woorden voelen als messteken de 1 na de ander steeds dieper verlies controle over me emoties me ziel die nu bloot is die jij blootziet kwetsbaar als ijs in de zon zie geen uitweg doe alles wat je zegt maar pleez haal me hierweg de kwetsbaarheid van een meisje met verdriet damn waaro mis het alleen een player die zulke dingen ziet
yo the whole world against the kid but it dont stop me now and forever im runnin this shit my shame i used to run from it now its my pryde ima set the negative aside and focus on my dream it may seem to you its a worthless thing to do that ill never make far but ima dream chaser you a dream hater but le me axe you have you ever had a dream did you follow em like me? it aint likely but ima make it to new tees new nikes
im comin out of hiding fame i will be residin inside of and ill have somethin for my dad to be proud of im hyped up ima get a deal ima keep it real im ready for it im goin in for the kill ima attract you in against your own will and these haters just stand still so throw your hands up if you feel the same way throw your hands up if you get what i say throw your hands up if your gonna make your dream come true each and every day
life is shit, every second im getting a hit. is it that that strange feeling, its like my life is peeling, the wish that i made at a fallingstar would not get so very far, knowing what im talking about, laugh at me but ill shout. youknowit, realunes, knowing im talking about this shit, no feelings for my songs doesnt matter a shit to me, ill just go on with my bongs, high everyday and night, should i stop. maybe if this is over i might..
im livin in a life where i see no option but to die where everyday i have to get high, i just wish my life will end soon dont ask me why god looks down at me and he starts to cry this a emotional rap, im spittin straight i live in a life which no one can relate im pissed off at the world just give me my space my life is heading down hill at a very fast pace i want to be like the everyday normal teenager i look in the mirror all i see is a stranger trust me im not afriad to put my life in danger
But i was smarter then most//Started off 4 pills//Next thing 4 bills//then ounce of blow//100 thousand in stack layin on the floo'//Cause we gotta lotta doe//It's like an never endin rope//But the hope//Is gone//Fuckin doin right i'mma live my life wrong//Makin song after SONG//
my fuckin favorite beet on you tube baybeh . love this track . and the westside story down below is hella sick wyth it . love your style man raise it . .
u will be nothing//My teachers said He will only be runnin//From the cops//And posted on the block//With a sock//Full of rocks//2 tell ya the truth it's hurts 2 talk//And it hurts 2 know//That when i go//Not even one of my bro's//Will be there//But i'm not scared//Raised as the lone wolf//I gotta find my own road//And use what i was givin//A compassion for spittin//Lyrically bed ritten//It's like i'm chokin on my tongue//I can't say shit i feel 2 Dumb//
dey say i wont mak it/ill end up naked/beggen/4 money/trying 2 make it in dis country/truth is i dont know wats coming/but all i know is i can call it faith/aint every man on a papa chase/look mom i aint a waste/im rhyming up on youtube/2 dis dude/he got da same problems were both scared wat da future holds/no wonder ppl talk so much about da roads/not paved wit gold/
its paved wit glitter/nothing more den candy wrapper litter/man i jus need an answer naw a spirit lifter
yo i wana no why do people try to rap wen a nigga throws a beat that could possibly slap i laugh cuz a dum nigga sound like a bitch when he rymin n shit cuz he sukin a dik but says he fukin a trik u see him duk n den dip cuz he herd a pop,thought someone sprayed out da clip but then who wulda thought hed run from a firework he herd down da blok
might be typing to you but that's cause you don't feel the lyrics and can't hear us, when you hear a beat sometimes you just have to right, and if you wanna share that with the world or with who ever wants to read than it's not your fucking problem is it so instead of hating why don't you do something creative with the time you just wasted
where dreams were born where deaths where formed where families were torn apart where so much stories were weaved like a tapestry the city is art that we're all a part of the over view is the true beauty we can admire and see feeling all of it at once so much to absorb it,s overwhelming yet calming at the same time, time which stand stills in the photograph that captures the glory of our wills skyscrapers stand still it's majestic what i call truly eclectic
the city, the city, the city, the city, it's got me captured in the dark so much life ready to ignite all it needs is a spark to get it's heart to start it's pulse is thumping i'm vibing to it's beat watching, waiting for the right moment to light it up connected through locations and miscellaneous districts the free spirits roam the streets creating heat for police or beats for creative types who's thoughts are deep apartments are leased filled with memories remain marked full of history
My city landscape lost in the darkness- I write text thru my phone and I AIM at the target- I stay close to my city but I feel Im the farthest- I move with ease and strike with the hardest -steal the heart of a goddess when I go thru the carcus - I spit lyrics that will damage the career of an Artist- Im a hungry MC and Im starving- eat forbidden fruit then I'll shit in your garden- like the USA dropping deuces missiles bombarding- and Bush watched from the top never giving a pardon.. VNMS1
you ain't the real deal, just a spoof, I'll go back in time and murder your family tree starting at the roots, I'll leave your ancestor's head torn, "It's a wonderful life" type shit I'll show you what it's like if you was never born,
wow that sucked man it didnt even rhyme why the hell you on youtube just wasting your time i thot id have competition but i guess i was wrong ur rap is prolly like yo D*(k only 4 inches long so u mite wanna try again but this time do it rite or i can go bang yo mom again oh damn man she was tight! i gotta go now, gonna eat some jalepenos watch out yo back the names HILLSOFCHINO
see you have no substance, and your flow is redundant, it's repulsive and repugnant, see me I have an abundance, see you start on a false premise, because you can't rap to begin with, just because you can't comprehend my lines, doesn't mean they don't rhyme, it just means it's too much for your simple mind, just face it, you'll never make it, your shit is too basic,
hey man i really love this beat i could use it man hit me back with a link i'ma young rapper i could do this, i'll tell my producer the beat is by you!
i stay on my grind/like this the last prom night of all time/fame glory one day itll be all mine/hoping ill be declared one of the greatest rappers of all times/i dont care if im the best or in second/please ill rip apart a beat in seconds/flow so hot the beat needs paramedics/and fire trucks standing by ready/lyrics so hot their deadly/flow so fresh its homegrown/im out this world lyric king phone home/to a planet unknown/flew home threw a blackhole/so come get some if u wanna battle
Can i use this please!! :) i give you cred ofc
hasse951 2 months ago
@hasse951 Im gonna have it for a demo cd im working on :)
hasse951 2 months ago
this 6 of people are stupid like my apple tree... greets from poland ;P
slimshd2323 8 months ago
sick beat i need get dis one asap
Ridiclous504 9 months ago
Yeah i got this tallent. Didnt get it from the eye.
Yes its all mine. I am my own guide
This is my own lycris. Say what i want to rhyme.
Because it mine. I wrote it down on this line.
narutofanacc 9 months ago
what am i supposed to do now?can you tell me what to do now? i do not know what to do now/ i feel like im standing on air/no solid ground/i cant be found/lost in a society so gone in the sense of right/ thats its lost its will to fight/like a tamed lion/ lost all will to live/ i sit in the corner tryin to forgive/ but harder and harder it gets to live/ try to believe in humanity/ apparently civilized/ but all i see is endless fighting and poverty/gone not to be seen/swept away like a ship at sea
dylan20294 10 months ago
LILBReCoRdS 10 months ago
Warst du auch schon mal an einem Punkt wo du nicht mehr wusstest wie es weiter geht,
Wo sich Hass, Liebe und Hoffnung im kreis dreht.
Und deine Freunde dich nicht verstehn,
Und du dort mit deiner Qual ganz alleine stehst.
Du liegst abends im Bett und fängst an zu wein,
Wirst Hysterisch, zweifelst und fängst an zu schrein.
Du denkst warum ist das Leben so gemein,
Du nimmst ein Messer in die Hand denn du meinst.
LILBReCoRdS 10 months ago
very good work Bro!
Can I use it?
WidmoRec 10 months ago
they told me to stop, told me to calm down,
but il never stop, i dont even know how,
im an an inspiration, interuptin your convosation,
just to teach you about our relation to the government,
you know that ther full ov em selves, but il never fall but allready some men have fell,
for what ? 30k n imunisation from a prison cell we live in hell,
i can name 15 people who think this aswell,
se i come from a country that will never fail, they wont even let em selves,
grimjnr 11 months ago
Pour Another Drink
As I continue to spit.. I keep Lyrics Lyrically Wet.. With Hard Work and Sweat.. Tellin Me I ain't ever be nothin.. One Day Ima be somethin.. You Can Be in the background Suckin.. On your own tears.. Keep My Life Free of fear.. Wish I Could Take You Back.. The shit you did was way past whack.. Almost made me grab the 9.. Almost made me lose my mind.. Thankfully I put priorities in line.. I walked away.. As they say.. Live to fight another day..
BJL474 1 year ago
In luv wid dis beat..
nip1991 1 year ago
i like this track well should i say ive like it for a couple years considering i done a cover to it, its just very simmillar to a piano violin beat made by rednooddles but i noticed its a differnt pitch tempo everything and the hook(deep keys) is very workable nice work pal, just hope it aint been rippd and fiddled with cause ur only gonna let yourself down,
Syked101 1 year ago
nice!
musicinyourspeakerzz 1 year ago
this is fuckin good shit
icanshoot06 1 year ago
Thanks for the views and comments!
Check out my new channel : dnhzmusic
Thanks!
peace
DNHZ 1 year ago 4
@DNHZ can i use it?
please :D
jama138 8 months ago
@DNHZ Is it okay if I use this? I can send you a video response? This is the first beat I wrote a full rap to.
AvocadoMatrix 8 months ago
@AvocadoMatrix I rapped to this and put lyrics in the vid, Not trying to spam..I just can't post a vid response for some reason...so here check this out:
AvocadoMatrix 8 months ago
@AvocadoMatrix watch?v=lGgT9_HFHjI
AvocadoMatrix 8 months ago
i love this beat its kinda awesome
b3ed3annek 1 year ago
I sit here miserably, and watch the sun set from sky to sea, reminding me, of this world that’s cold, the one that’s got this young man feeling old, so who am I today, just a fool I heard somebody once say , but that's ok, see I dont plan on livin much longer anyway, life’s been to hard on me , im from the ghetto where know one gives a fuck about me,they say im dirt , but for what it's worth, grey sky’s are the perfect disquize to hide what really lies behind these lonly eye's
smithers89able 1 year ago
with bones,I stand alone holmes, all empty and blank with a stare it's like lawn knombles, looking on with these lonly eyes as today’s adolecence are messing with defenceless minds , there like turrpintine running up my spine,or fine wines falling off grape vines, shit it’s all the same to me, as
smithers89able 1 year ago
i was born wild, and destined to become a poor little white child, who might smile if only for a little while, cause now im grown and ashamed to be my mothers child left in the ghetto, left to become jello, well fuckit I should be a dead child, as dead as can be, like the rest of the world is to me, cause it's killing me to be living in this misery, so what's life worth if skys collapse, all I do is relapse, hold all this love only to be told to stand back, as haters laugh like gators withgats
smithers89able 1 year ago
my names jon... ima a rap artist... i really like ur beats and id like to use them in some of my songs... the songs i have now r my old ones that suck... but if i could use ur beats i can make way better songs!!!
420wilson1 1 year ago
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(2)nd i kno that someday ohhh somedayyy......
by eric aka derek
DEREKMUSIC713 1 year ago
(2) i kno that some dayyy ohh somedayyy.....
by eric aka derek
DEREKMUSIC713 1 year ago
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DEREKMUSIC713 1 year ago
no matter what you say i kno that someday u will regret everything that u said i kno someday all this pain will fly away i kno someday u will come back saying baby im sorry please give me another try but sadly thats wasant enough i was asking where were u wwen my life and heart was falling apart i thought we would be together till death do us part aperantly i was wrong so no matter what u say i kno that someday u will regret everything u saud i kno that someday all this pain will fly away
DEREKMUSIC713 1 year ago
WOW loveee thiss trackkk <3 amazinn beat good job!
yazminisbored 1 year ago
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Wesmokebuds420 1 year ago
Yea Motha Fucka Get Some Cold Cut Throat Life Pounded Life Pounded Got You In My Sight So We Played It all right Heavy Gun Powder Lighten Up The Night Another Day Another war Soon To Be A Hit Team Comeing Through My Door Quarter Past 7 Coming Through Your Block Pulling 9-11 Cause We Own The Dome Central Smokeing Chrome All Out Record's Here To Take Your Home Hommien Take A Toke This Shit Is On.....
Wesmokebuds420 1 year ago
@Wesmokebuds420 good!
sorayaofficiel 1 year ago
bap, can i use dis beat, du a track n send it u back, then tell me wot u think fam
richboyspit 1 year ago
never done this before, momma was a stupid whore
pack my shit up so she wouldnt hurt me anymore
that was ten years ago, my mom still a silly ho
but I dont know what to do, everything moves so slow
now im a grow man, with a great masterplan
got two sons, and my daughter understands
that her dad still hurts, inside his chest
but I do eveything I can to let them know best
best clothes, best cars, not a good start
best thing in life comes from deep inside your heart
blkpitbull 1 year ago 41
@blkpitbull OMG this is beautifull :) *nicely done*
bajnoczki 1 year ago
@bajnoczki thankx man, the music brought that out of me!!
blkpitbull 1 year ago
@blkpitbull imma gonna write my GirlFriend somthing on this song :) it got me so deep...
bajnoczki 1 year ago
@bajnoczki yeah this is a deep beat, very nice!! piano is spot on!!
blkpitbull 1 year ago
@blkpitbull made me cry O.o
kenny123499 5 months ago
Where can I download this???? PLEASE TELL MEEE!
AvocadoMatrix 1 year ago
love this track, i just played a guitar solo over it and it sound mad, i just wish i could rap or mc cus i've got so much to say but the words ent comin out properly i just sound like a pleb
TAKETHEREDP1LL 1 year ago
yea uh huh runnin and theres a cloud over my shoulder
never stoped following still here getting older and its trying to
make me lose my mind, waking up every day corrupt lookin for a dime
just needed a line, never fucked with that white, pharm partys the same
what you got for trade, we can try em all puff on this high grade, no seeds no needs cuz with one hit im flying over seas, homegrown thats a fact, still spittin bars no cadillac, never thought i was black but still spit the crack
robotussinflow 1 year ago
wow excellent work! 5/5
if u got a min come threw my channel and check out some new instrumentals.
1 love keep grinding!!
-exaduz-
exaduz 1 year ago
how could you possably understand
what my head is thinkin' and
whos holdin my hand.
mama if you just listen ill tell you the truth
im still broken and hurt
because of dad and you
but ill never again fall and stay down.
flycutie100 1 year ago
@ DNHZ
hey i listened too your beat is there anyway you can send the original too me
i wanna use it for a dutch track
its a verry nice beat we love it , but if we rip it or what ever the bass is gone
grtz justice
justmewout 1 year ago
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if you can share the beat
expresarte_milenaria@ hotmail.com
elkachedecelaya13 1 year ago
at 33seconds to 54 seconds some chorus at 54 the vocal
dificil pues yo no escogi que mi destino fuera asi
un destino insierto me toco ser un pandillero y con instinto de guerrero mi familia va primero soy un persona diferente
tal vez un delincuente pero no importa lo que diga la gente
asi voy a ser siempre aunque tenga que pelear mi calle se va a respetar
barrio unido va a jalar pinches habladores que solo son criticones
no los miras en las calles
elkachedecelaya13 1 year ago
What guitar is that in the background or w.e?
Sounds like the guitar loop from an Eminem
Y3KBeats 1 year ago
do you send me the beat pls?
DeineZukunft 1 year ago
i was destined to walk a path, one i didnt chose but im attached, running in the dark having a relapse, my lungs are about to collapse, on a new path no maps, walking and drawing my own lines, follow no roads, i know where i needa go, and its far from here, a place thats not so near, a place to escape, one with unfimiliar landscapes, noone knows me ive made no mistakes, im mc im not a fake, cut you up throw you in a bag shake and bake, thats it for now just a simple sample i got flow thats ample
canweplayyet 1 year ago
i keep my eyes wide open all the time, cause every time i close my eyes i get lost in my mind, i keep lookin over my shoulder just ta find that death is creepin up behind me tryna find me tryna two time, but if its my time ta go lord lemme know, cause ima stand strong neva hang my head low..
GdaddyKUSH420 1 year ago
DOWNLOADD.
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robertcordero1234 1 year ago
as i raise up my hands and i pray to the lord
i start to realize that theres something to live for
i didnt see it before my whole life was a mess
heart cold as ice and always depressed
dug myself in a hole with no ladder climb
so i gritted my teeth and i tried and i tried
i go up 2 feet and i fall down 3
see the light at the top, but just couldnt reach
tombeals69 1 year ago
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Km8s 1 year ago
i strive 4 success/
i got nothin left/
but drive in my heart, and a cold dyin breath/
U lookin at the best, no u lookin at hope/
faith in the fact that dreams come true/
yet stuck in sticky situations like whinne da pooh/
Hands up, middle fingers 2, screamin 2 the sky "what the fuck do i do?"/
Im lost like blue.... gimme a clue/
kev12ron 1 year ago
and now im living peacefully, happily like tom and jerry
not even glancing back, because now im in my sanctuary
itsRyann 1 year ago
her eyes were quivering, her whole body shaking
mustered up the strength and said "im controlled by satan"
she looked serious and i said "what are you thinking
doing something dumb like that usually aint forgiven"
she replied "i know, but i still strive for redemption
look at me, cant you see, that something is wrong with me
i've come down with cancer" and then she just fell.
thats why i am here today trapped in this earthly hell
itsRyann 1 year ago
yeah ima at the cemetary, dead people making me weary
the memories of lost dead ones make me sad and teary
i dont understand why God is so damn cruel
innocent children and incompetent fools
all surviving, and dieing, the apocalypse is nearing
talk about gay things, like the right ear with a piercing
one day, i was walking with a friend
she came up to me and said, baby we are near the end
itsRyann 1 year ago
this is a nice beat sir when you want me to mix tape it?
Tendaggers 1 year ago
I used this, and will give you proper credit. Fucking amazing, I will get you attention. :)
Ejayrazzle 1 year ago
This beat is hella sick
Choweboy 1 year ago
dis is sik
come n check my version to it called IS IT WORTH LIVING ty would mean allot
jakebird1 2 years ago
I think I will use it too , cause this beat is exactly that one which I need ;)
poldi445 2 years ago
sick rymes.... chicken flipin 24 slipin
brianreyes66 2 years ago
thats a bad beat but a good song:P
corfri007 2 years ago
this is bigg
2kviper 2 years ago
check my version of this song :):)
RevurbRecords 2 years ago
@RevurbRecords liking ya song to this
skeptzie 2 years ago
cheers :D subscribe :D:D
RevurbRecords 2 years ago
ima spit to this
RevurbRecords 2 years ago
stupenda(Y)
ZiNGARELLAss 2 years ago
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DaClown21 2 years ago
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DaClown21 2 years ago
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go check out my beats they go hard
kevinbmx7 2 years ago
thats not his beat
He ripped
BlutMusic 2 years ago 4
@BlutMusic
r u sure i ripped it?
don't think so mate;)
DNHZ 2 years ago 3
i just wrote i think my best to this. call it "the soldier's motto"
gatechfreak 2 years ago
still reppin this tune nigga. sik wit it . fa sho .
samsnee
sneederface johnson . . .
sneezln 2 years ago
veeeerrryyyyy niccccceeeee
SiNekBoss 2 years ago
HammA Respect Greetz CarmaBeatz
Juiceization 2 years ago
Love it!
ToFuckThisPlace 2 years ago
I may use this, OK? ;)
ChaironProductions 2 years ago
I face the impossible, to most its inoperable,
But I have, to climb the wall, Im clinging on, I will not fall,
To me there is no choice at all, against the odds Ill still stand tall,
Im Cracked but Ill soldier on, until the breath within mes gone,
Can you see me crumbling, supports, they are tumbling,
My hands are, now fumbling for anything that they can cling,
Its time now, to sink or swim, I see the light but its cast dim,
But smething inside of me, says that I was born to win
ThePrototypeMC 2 years ago 11
But its dismissed, a foolish wish, hurled into the dark abyss,
I reminisce, when I was young, I thought Id be at number one,
Now I glimpse reality, how hard it is to be ,seen,
I cannot bridge the gap between, AKA and MTV,
Im struggling to make 10p, no one knows that I MC,
I fight to get my name heard, but all I get is mumbled words,
Fake numbers, no returns, to any calls, I make in turn,
Questions race through my mind, whats the point in writing lines,
ThePrototypeMC 2 years ago 11
bro can i use this beat?
MrSmokeyT 2 years ago
bitch... why da fuk couldnt u apprehenD
dat things got out hanD even tho i always let you be in commanD u still cheateD yea when on and did it i aint tripping i got many hoes in fact so many dat 4rm of all of those hoes dat ima get an overdoes ja fuk u bicth dis is my 4ever goodbye gotta go smoke da seedless n gstay high~
evo222113 2 years ago
verse 3
live your life to the fullest,and try to stay focus,
ignore all the bogus,people who try to bullshit,
cuz there still foney, fell lonely chill homie smoke this,
and pray to the sky i cuz its god who wont leave us hopeless,
hope gives us the strength to fight for everything your strive for,
my family understand me is the only ones ill die for,
cry for ride for, swallow all my pride for,
release this stress of my chest is the only reason i rhyme for
southdub248 2 years ago
verse 2
its hard to adapt with these everyday struggles,if i could go back,
i wouldve stayed out trouble,i wouldve never sold crack,never try to
make a hustle,i never wouldve scrap,or ever try to start a tussel,
wouldve put down the strap,and never worried bout the muscle,
but i felt like i was trap,like the boy in bubble,
thats why i decide to rap,its like the light to my tunnel,
lookin at these facts,man its why i stay humble.
southdub248 2 years ago
not bad at all they flow nicely
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southdub248 2 years ago
nice homey;)
wijhe13 2 years ago
wut will u do to blow up, ill doin anything to blow up,so what,if i never grow up,ill bet u i already growed nuts,flows nuts, swaggers on fire so warn yall people dont touch, hold up, i just want to know what, will happen if the world blows up, i dont want to go down hopefully i go up, wit me and my family,firefighters and all the soldiers, who put their lifes on the line fighting like the owe us, i just want show us, appreciate it and get this weight off my shoulders.
southdub248 2 years ago
woorden verloren je woorden voelen als messteken de 1 na de ander steeds dieper verlies controle over me emoties me ziel die nu bloot is die jij blootziet kwetsbaar als ijs in de zon zie geen uitweg doe alles wat je zegt maar pleez haal me hierweg de kwetsbaarheid van een meisje met verdriet damn waaro mis het alleen een player die zulke dingen ziet
rob2252 2 years ago
i though i be seeing dis in slow motion
i know i aint got no option
damn it, it happen
all ma moves were dampen
the cold steel bullet was
not far he has,
almost hit me when
i closed my eyes then
i strong feeling of pain
it was insane
NotoriousDudeable 2 years ago
ey im gna use it for ma song thx bro! dope beat!
pakirap 2 years ago
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15KLR 2 years ago
why am i sitten up at night
wondering if what i did was right
man i just wanna end my life
and enter da light
and say goodbye to be polite
we broke up a lil while ago
i allwayse wanted to be with her for life though everytime i move its so slow i was so close to making her my wife
thats right
15KLR 2 years ago
can i use this beat for a song???
mgangsta7 2 years ago
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mgangsta7 2 years ago
again this beet is the shit . pleny more tymes too say it as well .
south in your trousers
-samsnee
sneezln 2 years ago
hoping you wont laugh at me, coz its real.
life is shit, every second im getting a hit. is it that that strange feeling, its like my life is peeling, the wish that i made at a fallingstar would not get so very far, knowing what im talking about, laugh at me but ill shout. youknowit, realunes, knowing im talking about this shit, no feelings for my songs doesnt matter a shit to me, ill just go on with my bongs, high everyday and night, should i stop. maybe if this is over i might..
Peaceout.
NpcPure 2 years ago
very nice beat boooy...
i like it...
mcskibbadee 2 years ago
dam nice beat bro wow;)
EBleXxOo 2 years ago
nice liryc
Kingdomofcrunkm 2 years ago
nice beat
iatemiself 2 years ago
MrMentionFlexFiah 2 years ago 2
amazing :)
QameOver187 2 years ago
Livin in a life//Thats full lie's//
Idk whats wrong or whats right//
Just the humble hustle everynight..
Cause the struggle juggled every other guy//
But i was smarter then most//Started off 4 pills//Next thing 4 bills//then ounce of blow//100 thousand in stack layin on the floo'//Cause we gotta lotta doe//It's like an never endin rope//But the hope//Is gone//Fuckin doin right i'mma live my life wrong//Makin song after SONG//
cory22starr 2 years ago
This beat is sooooo sick!!
5/5!
CHECK OUT MomentBeats!
MomentBeats 2 years ago
still can't get over this beet dogg . lyke wow . love the pianna up in the beet the most . . its wreckless pimpin .
-samsnee
sneezln 2 years ago
just one night
its elementary, he was the king of tha court
went from hero to zero in a couple of basketball shots
he went from loved down to scrubbed with the gangsta ass kids
went from cool kid down to the anger popping his lids
sonxbish 2 years ago
and wanted to hug him, it was his dad
they both cried, cried for hours as they sat there and prayed
got caught up in the misery of being dead
the kid decided to turn his life around and went straight to bed
woke up and was a straight A student plenty of friends
went to stanford got a PHD in anger management
went to the nba and won a championship ring
which he gave to his daughter so that she could sing
he put his old life out the window who knew
you could make a 180 degree turn in yo life in
sonxbish 2 years ago
keepin his pace, couldnt show his face
wanted to let out all his little concentrates
being stuck in school didnt even help at all
he gotta get out and kill himself at the mall
set up his plan, drew out of a corner, saw the train coming but he just couldnt run to it
his feet were glued was fighting mentally and physically
he finally broke the bind and sprinted full steam ahead
he reached the end said his prayers and just dived ahead
but he was caught by a stranger that saw him
sonxbish 2 years ago
its elementary, he was the king of tha court
went from hero to zero in a couple of basketball shots
he went from loved down to scrubbed with the gangsta ass kids
went from cool kid down to the anger popping his lids
couldnt control it, had to get a gun in his hands
feel the hot leather burnin as the pain went through his glands
felt himself burning alive was majorly sleep deprived
and this whole time he was runnin from the cops in Iran
sonxbish 2 years ago
it's elementary, they are physical rhymes
mentally bind keepin in the state of the mind
keeping your time, wind blowin you can hear the bells chime
then you hear a click click, bang bang, and somebody screamang
you run outside but the boy already aint the same thang
same boy same child but somebody went wild
uncontrollable anger seeping up through his chest
veins popping the rest blood pressure higher contest
you can see him dieing inside, being hurt and threw to tha side
sonxbish 2 years ago 2
my fuckin favorite beet on you tube baybeh . love this track . and the westside story down below is hella sick wyth it . love your style man raise it . .
-samsnee
sneezln 2 years ago
As a child i was told//When u grow old//
u will be nothing//My teachers said He will only be runnin//From the cops//And posted on the block//With a sock//Full of rocks//2 tell ya the truth it's hurts 2 talk//And it hurts 2 know//That when i go//Not even one of my bro's//Will be there//But i'm not scared//Raised as the lone wolf//I gotta find my own road//And use what i was givin//A compassion for spittin//Lyrically bed ritten//It's like i'm chokin on my tongue//I can't say shit i feel 2 Dumb//
cory22starr 2 years ago
dey say i wont mak it/ill end up naked/beggen/4 money/trying 2 make it in dis country/truth is i dont know wats coming/but all i know is i can call it faith/aint every man on a papa chase/look mom i aint a waste/im rhyming up on youtube/2 dis dude/he got da same problems were both scared wat da future holds/no wonder ppl talk so much about da roads/not paved wit gold/
its paved wit glitter/nothing more den candy wrapper litter/man i jus need an answer naw a spirit lifter
thatonetagga 2 years ago
very good awensome
admingeti 2 years ago
Simply awsome!
SecretMisery 2 years ago
yo can u send my this beat man its fuckin dope ...if u can dude jus send it 2 my emial...get at me dude
biglumlum 2 years ago
i never thought my life would take this turn headed for the worst
seems like i'm livin a curse, navigatin straight to hearse
and its hurts, to know where i'm headed when i'm gone
i put ma pain n ma sorrow in the song, tryin so hard cuz i gotta hold on
they say be strong, but they don't understand
life is a just a muthafuckin traffic jam
when ur born theres a master plan an mine wasn't to make it past 21
everyday hangin out wit the big boys causin ruckus for fun
packin a gun, bustin shots
WestsideWarlord 2 years ago
you are a songwriter?
your lyrics (I don't know its right, I'm Italian) are really beautiful!
RockWithMascara1995 2 years ago
when the phens came round served em crack rocks
got the game on locks, at an early age
learned how to be in it, n how its played
started movin up pushin big weight, makin big cake
had the benzo, windows up when i'm dippin
movin to quick you know i got caught slippin
phased of the licks n buddah straight trippin
a van pulled up no hubcaps, doors rolled back n out came the caps
flyin while i tried to dodge, n weave
i felt one rip right thru my sleeve, another threw the chest
WestsideWarlord 2 years ago
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sittin here bleedin to death, life flashin before my eyes
thinkin bout ma momma as more shots fly
i think i'ma die in the streets, lived as a thug
so bury me a g, get the enemy, who popped at me
avenge my death, atleast let me go wit a respect
body goin cold, i'm gon dead on the steets at 21 years old
WestsideWarlord 2 years ago
yo i wana no why do people try to rap wen a nigga throws a beat that could possibly slap i laugh cuz a dum nigga sound like a bitch when he rymin n shit cuz he sukin a dik but says he fukin a trik u see him duk n den dip cuz he herd a pop,thought someone sprayed out da clip but then who wulda thought hed run from a firework he herd down da blok
hanb69 2 years ago
THIS IS TIGHT
hanb69 2 years ago
write**
Nekwaa 2 years ago
might be typing to you but that's cause you don't feel the lyrics and can't hear us, when you hear a beat sometimes you just have to right, and if you wanna share that with the world or with who ever wants to read than it's not your fucking problem is it so instead of hating why don't you do something creative with the time you just wasted
Nekwaa 2 years ago
hey im adam davis im 16 and live in england me and my friend checked this beat on you tube and thought it was banging so we were wonderin
did you produce this beat ?
and if it is possible i would like to use it please mann
write back kool
write back kool mann
SoldierAdontwatchdat 2 years ago
dis beat is fire alie?
kee it up sfe 1 bless
datmanjonesy 2 years ago
the end should've been skyscrapers stand tall it's majestic the city what i call truly eclectic
Nekwaa 2 years ago
where dreams were born where deaths where formed where families were torn apart where so much stories were weaved like a tapestry the city is art that we're all a part of the over view is the true beauty we can admire and see feeling all of it at once so much to absorb it,s overwhelming yet calming at the same time, time which stand stills in the photograph that captures the glory of our wills skyscrapers stand still it's majestic what i call truly eclectic
Nekwaa 2 years ago
the city, the city, the city, the city, it's got me captured in the dark so much life ready to ignite all it needs is a spark to get it's heart to start it's pulse is thumping i'm vibing to it's beat watching, waiting for the right moment to light it up connected through locations and miscellaneous districts the free spirits roam the streets creating heat for police or beats for creative types who's thoughts are deep apartments are leased filled with memories remain marked full of history
Nekwaa 2 years ago
After all i wanted to be
she just up and took it all away from me
im filled up with rage amd depresion
your agression
my love i had for you
you said you loved me but gurl we all know dat shit wasnt true
made a fool of my selfe
tryna express myselfe muh feelings have me feelin down like an elf
MetisElite09946 2 years ago
hey this is a dope beat im gunna use it in one of my songs iight peace
MetisElite09946 2 years ago
My city landscape lost in the darkness- I write text thru my phone and I AIM at the target- I stay close to my city but I feel Im the farthest- I move with ease and strike with the hardest -steal the heart of a goddess when I go thru the carcus - I spit lyrics that will damage the career of an Artist- Im a hungry MC and Im starving- eat forbidden fruit then I'll shit in your garden- like the USA dropping deuces missiles bombarding- and Bush watched from the top never giving a pardon.. VNMS1
AmatureVets 2 years ago
Your rhymes are good, but they aint the best
I be spitting rhymes like Kanye West
Its ok bro, your still getting their
not all of us can rap, it just it aint fair
But urs wasnt bad, just not that good
It wasnt like anything ud hear from the hood
So keep searching for it,
like they did for Nemo,
ya it's me again the names HILLSOFCHINO.
haha, im playing bro. nice spitting
HillsofChino 2 years ago
that too.. =)
sakiage 2 years ago
you ain't the real deal, just a spoof, I'll go back in time and murder your family tree starting at the roots, I'll leave your ancestor's head torn, "It's a wonderful life" type shit I'll show you what it's like if you was never born,
FullOfFail 2 years ago
HillsofChino 2 years ago
FullOfFail 2 years ago
ha dope shit
thatonetagga 2 years ago
lmao, youtube rappers suck. not even rap its just typing.
JOExCRACK 2 years ago
you all think you can rap, you think you so cool
im just here to tell ya that your all just fools
you cannot rap, you cant even rhyme
ive heard better raps coming from a mime
so please just stop, you aint no good,
youre not some gangster coming from the hood'
now your my bitch, go get me a cappucino
Watch out or ull be next, the names THEHILLSOFCHINO
HillsofChino 2 years ago
i like that ;)
sakiage 2 years ago
amazing. just amazing.
HillsofChino 2 years ago
i really could use this man hit me back thanks!
jake51515 3 years ago
hey man i really love this beat i could use it man hit me back with a link i'ma young rapper i could do this, i'll tell my producer the beat is by you!
jake51515 3 years ago
awesome beat!
nicfafard 3 years ago
really nice beat
rate a fat 10+
if i may i wanna use this beat if its ok for ya
let me know
grtz
Killer-B
TillyNorthSider013 3 years ago
Nice beat man,
Check mine too, Im just getting started in beat making ;) .. Later
BrownBeats 3 years ago
dammm sick ass beat!!!!
can u send me this?
litovi3tb0i510 3 years ago
i stay on my grind/like this the last prom night of all time/fame glory one day itll be all mine/hoping ill be declared one of the greatest rappers of all times/i dont care if im the best or in second/please ill rip apart a beat in seconds/flow so hot the beat needs paramedics/and fire trucks standing by ready/lyrics so hot their deadly/flow so fresh its homegrown/im out this world lyric king phone home/to a planet unknown/flew home threw a blackhole/so come get some if u wanna battle
looken4fame 3 years ago
I love the piano in this. Definitely five stars!
starwarsbro 3 years ago
Very nice bro! God, this good.
starwarsbro 3 years ago
love this one!
5 starz
7moneyoverbitches7 3 years ago
i love that pic
Eminem852 3 years ago
I want to make a rap with your beat is ok?
abeko1234 3 years ago 2
man can i use this i writing a sad song please man
this is the new shit
illownu173 3 years ago 2
three six mafia should get on this lol
dapcrazi3 3 years ago 5
would be ok to use it from one of my songs
it's hot
please reply
zoequeen1 3 years ago
that beat is hot
my respect man
KeloWao 3 years ago 4
respect dhnz.
douwe1993 3 years ago 7
aai aai lauw
Omidjwt 3 years ago