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  • I agree with Purpledragon.... i stopped breathing... good thing im a quick reader... Amazing again... still on my third day of reading and at chap 181.. thats good right? :)

  • Seriously there are no words 2 describe this, its just amazing

  • that was written ah-mazingley!!!!

    loved it the discription was to die for!!!

    your ah-mazzing this is friggen sweet almago!!

  • woaahh thats good good

    good job

  • Ahh.. I jumped in my seat reading this IDK why though...wait yes I do...because I FREAKING ADORE YOUR STORIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • I LOVED how you went into awesome detail on how she looked!!! When other writers do that I usually skip it because it get REALLY boring. But you made it VERY interesting. Awesome chapter! I ♥ed it!!

  • that was awesome do you realize that you made her dress the same as the brides maids dresses IT WAS SOOOOO COOL the way you like went into detail about the steps he took to get to summer

    ps the dress sounds beautiful

  • Omg I held my breath the entire time I was reading. I felt like I was there. It was so sweet. Brilliantly Written, as usual!!!!!

    Post More Soon!!!

  • I love your writing, especially since I know you've been struggling ;)

    psh, of course I love the chapter too, but thats like.. pff.. obvious;)

  • Wow, VERY amazingly written.

    The way you described everything.

    Nick getting out of the car, entering the building, his reaction to seeing her, the dress, Summer.

    I could imagine everything.

    You're amazing, this chapter was amazing.

    Hell! Everything was amazing! haha

    I could practically feel the love radiating off of them.

    Perfect.

    Love you Bobbina :D

  • WOW i have no words to describe THIS chapter ;) post more PLEASE!!!! and nick's words are SOOOOO friggin sweet!

  • love itt <333

  • this was the best chapter ever! i loved it! it was amazing!!!!!!

  • THAT was to awesome for words!!!! I love the way u wrote it, with the steps nick takes to get to summer. and i really love the fact that summers dress was the color of champane, just like the brides mades dresses in the dream,(summer probrably did that on purpose) which makes it sorta ironic that nick felt like they were getting married. lol.

    post more soon plz plz PLZZZZZ!!!!! :DDD

  • You were the only one to notice, but yeah... I did that on purpose :)

  • wow this was an awsome chapter! i loved it

  • Everything Is woow :) It's feels so delicate! Post moore sooooon!

  • AMAZING CHAPTER....

    I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS SERIES.....

    You are one heck of a writer.....

    That was just indescribable...

    Keep writing and I'll keep reading....

  • wow. that was one of the most magnificent pieces of writing i've ever read. loved it!!!!!!!

  • OMG othat was soo so magical, ahhh i need more pelase u need to post more :D

    i love ur story

  • wow....

  • AMAZING!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!

  • omgomgomg omg omg she sounds BEUTIIFLL!!1! im jelous lol

  • wow that was awesome!

    please post SOON!

  • i love it!!!!!!!!! i can picture everything!!! you're an awesome writer!!!!

  • PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!! :D

  • wow.....

    you are such a good writer!!!!! i can picture every single thing!!!

  • i cant wait for the next onnnne!!!

  • SO

    AMAZINGLY

    WRITTEN!

    one word.

    talent.

    MORE!

  • omgosh that just soounded really magical! :P I loved it :D

  • wow...yep! loved it!

  • damnnn

    this ruins everything!

    it puts every date and boyfriend to shame!

    other than that, i loved it! :)

  • I love it. It was so good like if I was there. I can so picture the dress. And her and nicky poo lol

  • Wow! That was amazing!!! Awesome

  • aw, i love how into the story you get! i can actually picture everything :D! so amazing!

    your an amazing writer!!

  • wow! that was amazingly detailed i LOVED it!

  • that was amazingggg.

  • awhhhh VERY cute!!!!!

  • aw! amazing! i loved it soo much! it's like Nick fell for her all over again!

  • oh my god

    that is the cutest thing i have ever read in my entire life.

    amazing.

    i wish that would happen to me

    damn it.

    so adorable

    one of my favorites (:

    post soon!

  • amazing

  • loved it!

  • cute chap

  • cute !! post more please!

    :)

  • Wow that was so detailed i loved it! post more soon!

  • loved it!

  • WOW love the description!!!!! post more soon:)

  • aweh!! so cute!!

    oh man you have no idea how much i love this story. like really.

  • aww soo cute!

    loved it! =) ♥

  • i say you post 2 in a day it would make me so happy (:

  • Awwee nick is sooooo sweet :)

  • gahh, this has got to be one of the cutest chapters EVER!!!!!!!!

  • AAH!

    i love your stories so much there

    amazing, your a great writter:)

    i encourage you too keep writing

    i loved this chapter

  • aww cute chapter :)

  • AMAZING (:

  • this is the best chapter you have written! It is so detailed!(:

  • Ohh my god. That was awesome! You're an amazing writer!

    Aaaaah I love it! <3<3

  • oh, my gosh! so beautiful! I luv it!

  • i think this is my favorite chapter so far

  • this is absolutely adorable! they're so in love!!! =)

    loved it x

  • More! :)

  • I can't even explain how amazing that was. The way you described everything was so perfect and incredible. I'm glad you posted!

    Detail was phenomenal! I absolutely loved it. Nick loves Summer so much and it is just adorable. :D

    I loved the chapter so much. It is incredibly awesome!

  • uhhh.. so sweet <3

  • u should put the dress in the video

  • It doesn't exist :)

  • aww really??

    u should make it exist

  • Amazing as freaking always :D

    Can this series get any better ?

    Hm,

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