ℑ·D.e.s.p.e.r.a.t.e·ℑ

[FmaForge]

WOW. This is the first time I've seen someone put a plot into an amv. Really original- well done!

[Eeveelutionsrock]

Did 1 just watch movie in 3 minutes and 1 sec? _ Tht was awesome!!!

[TheIgDemon]

Hot damn, awesome video!

[pixiehollowlol]

awesome story telling without the words! amazing vid ! :3

[xo1angelsecretxo]

I love ikari!

Nice vid >w<

[xKlomyselfx]

Woow,you really use intense songs 8D i really love it!!!

[Drayckar]

what season is paul from?

[Mewluver101]

Whoa!!! That was soo AMAZING!!! So intense and it told a story!! 10/5 stars!! ^^

[aly247]

Wow, you sure know how to tell a story. Amazing, probably one of the best AMV's I've seen in a long time! 5 stars!

[xCherriBomb]

This is actually amazing! O_O

[ThePickledTheif]

You really do enjoy having ten year olds kill each other, eh?

xD Joking, joking. Awesome AMV, as always.

[josephmahon1]

this is the first proper pokemon amv i've seen and it was awesome

[bctsl123]

Nice vid, but I see from this is that both Paul AND Ash are in love with May and try'in to get May and Dawns try'in to get SOMEONE! lol just say'in! XD

[LoveAndHeartbreak]

@bctsl123

Actually, it goes like this;

1) Ash is in love with May

2) Dawn is in love with Ash

3) Dawn uses Paul to get rid of May by persuading him her friendship.

4) Paul accepts, and kills May for Dawn

5) Ash finds out - they fight - Dawn accidentally kills them both.

[bctsl123]

@LoveAndHeartbreak O.o OMG! Ha_ha I was totally wrong!! XD lol. Thanks for 'tellin me that! Dawn kills the guys she loves and the guy she used!!! XD How'd you think of that!?

[LoveAndHeartbreak]

@bctsl123

I don't know, it just came to me as I was listening to this song, not to mention, the subject is "desperation", so I just used that concept and made it more extreme than it may have really been.

Ideas just come to me some times.

[1Midnightmoon]

@LoveAndHeartbreak Your Videos are amazing!



[siamshadegirl7]

@LoveAndHeartbreak That's pretty heavy. Good job choosing a screenname; LoveAndHeartbreak is in a lot of your videos, which, by the way, are way cool!

[eatdrinkanime]

@LoveAndHeartbreak Wait what? People die in this show lol woooow when did that happen lol

[LoveAndHeartbreak]

@eatdrinkanime

It never happened, its just a video.

[eatdrinkanime]

@LoveAndHeartbreak Oh lol kk, now I feel really dumb, lol <3 your vids BTW!!

[bctsl123]

@bctsl123 yeah..but still it's a really cool video, better than any of mine! ^_^

[TheInuyashalover17]

Who is the one person who dislike this?!??! O.O

[AshInAPikaDress]

Great! =D

Which episode is 2:02 to 2:05?

And which episode is 2:06 to 2:12?

Really great video, I love it!!

[lappamara]

This is awesome I luv it! ^^

[thejenna0924]

Awesome amv! It's so dark! I LUV IT!! x3

however, I was totally comfused at the ending. Could you explain it for me please?

[LoveAndHeartbreak]

@thejenna0924

Dawn accidentally killed both Ash and Paul.

[thejenna0924]

@LoveAndHeartbreak Oh, okay. Thanks :)

[SushSnakies]

you are god.

[pearlgeek987]

Can you make one when MAY is jealous of DAWN and ASHS friendship and thats where GARY comes in.

Please if you cant thats ok im a pearlshipper so thats why i loved the vid tho

[ryuuseiSoul]

Finally, in terms of story, the ending was a bit...blurry? It was kinda confusing, and I didn't know that Dawn accidenly killed the two until I saw your other comment. With the remaining amount of song that you had left, it might've been better to just bring Haruka back in, or leave it as an unresolved and open ending, with Dawn feeling very guilty.

[SoloJolii]

@ryuuseiSoul enough with the critisising geez @_@

[LoveAndHeartbreak]

@SoloJolii

Please don't troll in on ryuuseisoul's comments. I agreed to have her criticisms so that I can approve myself as an editor, so its really mine to read and consider.

[SoloJolii]

@LoveAndHeartbreak oh okay sorry

[ryuuseiSoul]

@LoveAndHeartbreak improve* xP lol thanks

[ryuuseiSoul]

Be careful with lipsynching too, as sometimes, it's not needed (I may have mentioned this before. I mention this again because it stood out, seeing as it's the only /noticeable/ lipsync). I especially like what you did with Hikari and Shinji at 1:14 to 1:50. It was like you created a new scene.

[ryuuseiSoul]

First off, I personally wouldn't do the intro with character introductions, but that's just me. I think you did a very good job with the story this time around, in the aspect that we can tell what the story without checking a description (in fact, I think you should submit it to an Anime Con AMV contest). With lipsynching around 1:04, you should probably zoom in to put emphasis on a stronger part of the words (mostly because

lipsynching sometimes becomes a bit plain if left alone).

[ryuuseiSoul]

Sweet, nice AMV! ...This is gonna come out weird sounding cuz I can't think of anyway of saying it. Thanks for having me in your Special Thanks xP I feel flattered that you liked my my interpretation of Jess's AMV to base yours on it xD;

Okay constructive criticism in another comment, so I can save character limit space.

[xXxDarkSpirit92xXx]

Amazing!!!!!

[earlymorninglight12]

@xMichikoKami Harsh. But I love it anyways. Thanks for explaining it to me!

[tsuky0angel]

So sad :'(. You did an amazing job, it looks so real. Shinji is insane, and so its Hikari. Poor Satoshi & Haruka :'(. Advance its not my favorite couple but this is amazing. Great Job ;)

[StarfullNights]

PERFECT AGAIN!!!!! :3 And There Not Crack Shipping :O Haha Its Awsome I Love It Way To Go Favs And Not Like BUT LOVE :D <3

[HarukaSouDHansel]

OMG AWESOME VIDEO O.O *-*

[SmiffDemonsShadow]

Holy......

give me a minute or two while i bask in the epic that is this video. Crap dude, you've outdone yourself this time. Poor May! Killing off one of my favorite characters like that... was brilliant! XD. Editing is perfect, song choice is perfect. Paul is just insane.

[KiraiAgainstSuki]

I luv this song >w<

ur vid is great :D

[katefairyscooter]

nice! I love the sad ending and the big triangle!

[Rissyxchan]

Aww so cruel :o) I swear I've never seen such an angsty p0ke amv o_o It looks so believable and I know hard it is to work with pokemon clips and make them "mature" and dramatic. You did a perfect job as always, I was really caught up at the end :'D *scared* *faves*

[LoveAndHeartbreak]

@Rissyxchan

Aww thank you :)

I know my videos seem a bit harsh, but that's basically my style. I do try to make them believable too because it mainly helps me (secret*) So if I can get into it, then maybe everyone else can ^_-

Thanks again!

[LoveAndHeartbreak]

@xMichikoKami

You got it! But Hikari accidentally kills them; she was actually aiming for Shinji, but she got them both instead...

Its a messed up ending but I thought it was great for a dramatic video like this.

[PokePearlshippin011]

The ending was epic omg I was into it alot XD but the whole video itself was ace I dont think anybody could of did it better this deserves more than a 5 I say 10/10 Fvs Playlist

[xDarkXAmethystX]

Very nice. :O I feel special that your inspiration partially came from me. :3 Lol. Great job on the amv; it looks awesome.

[LoveAndHeartbreak]

@xDarkXAmethystX

Thanks on both accounts! (compliment and inspiration)

[earlymorninglight12]

Could you explain what happened at the end??? It was a little unclear.

[tomoyolovemanga]

Oh my God, awesome!

The story was excellent. video effects make the story look perfectly: D is understood to perfection. The song is excellent, never had heard, but is very good. I love your videos and stories of the same, has an amazing habilityll!

[JinsukeOllie]

that whole video was fantastic editing, you really did amazing!

[PorcelainMillionaire]

:)

haah damn this is real good stuff,

[SilenceSilver]

Oh wow. Once again you strike with an amazing AMV. The plot was amazing (even though I don't like Paul being bad guy, I know it's inevitable) and your cuts are brilliant! Half the time I forget that that never happened in the anime!

Brilliant. You've done it again, and you've given me another addictive song, damn you.

[AshPikastar]

-wakes up at 6am to see this awesome video- Oh wow the story plot was amazing and the effects where awesome! I don't know what else to say but great job! Loved how the clips went with the story plot so well. -This song is on my ipod. -^.^ -favs- -then continues getting ready for school-

[SatoshiErika3]

Whoaaa that was awesome! *^* Really looked like it was really happening! Loved the editing and yay~

[AsakuraAka]

What happened to Satoshi and Shinji?

[LoveAndHeartbreak]

@AsakuraAka

Dawn accidentally killed them.

[AsakuraAka]

@LoveAndHeartbreak I see. Thanks!

[XxShockinNeroxX]

Awesome video! :D Poor Dawn just can't win XD