Hello! This is anotherblackguy, vice president of euphoria flims!
I'd like to say that your story is pretty intresting and it isn't half bad! You should bring the voice volume up and the music volume down, And the music on most parts was pretty good. I hope your approved on the team!
This is really good. don't get mad, this is to help you for the next movies to come. Sound; the music and the voice not a big thing but work on that. the raping sence... if you wanted to put that in you sould of went from up to down and don't make it that long. thats it. ummm 4/5 and congrats on making Captain.
But there were some minor things that could've been fixed. The music was a little loud, you sounded like a robot, the raping part...looked to ridiculous to be taken seriously, and when the people talked it seemed like they were standing next to each other because they were facing the same way.
Other then all that i like the storyline and camera angles, nice!
and for the women for are not killed were raped lol (tea baged) haha
THE360BOYZ 3 years ago
That had a very good story and i can't wait for the next episode!
frostwurm22 3 years ago
Hello! This is anotherblackguy, vice president of euphoria flims!
I'd like to say that your story is pretty intresting and it isn't half bad! You should bring the voice volume up and the music volume down, And the music on most parts was pretty good. I hope your approved on the team!
-Aaron Evans
blackairhead 3 years ago
Thank You very much man!
NukemNeri 3 years ago
This is really good. don't get mad, this is to help you for the next movies to come. Sound; the music and the voice not a big thing but work on that. the raping sence... if you wanted to put that in you sould of went from up to down and don't make it that long. thats it. ummm 4/5 and congrats on making Captain.
Royspencer
royspencer 3 years ago
i am able to accept constructive criticism, haha thanks man!
XxTriadProductionsxX 3 years ago
Love the scenes where the hands almost touch. Hated scene where everyone walks around in the base and the camera gets stuck by the wall.
Nice ass forging.
The rape scene was out of place and weak.
Drift0r 3 years ago
Idk why i left the raping scene in... i thought it would be a little funny
NukemNeri 3 years ago
Pretty good man i liked the camera angles.
But there were some minor things that could've been fixed. The music was a little loud, you sounded like a robot, the raping part...looked to ridiculous to be taken seriously, and when the people talked it seemed like they were standing next to each other because they were facing the same way.
Other then all that i like the storyline and camera angles, nice!
-Nightfire33
Timme33 3 years ago