The Secret Lover, part 1, ( A Henry and Charles love fan fic )

[LaissezFaireAll]

I just saw all of your 6 video-episodes of "The Secret Lover", one after the other. I just love them!!

I love it that you take your time, don't rush things, give characters space to develop. Love your editing, wonderful music, manips... And, of course, I adore your story! :)

Spelling mistakes are not essential but they diminish your work, and that's a pity.

But one mistake is serious: The name (Henry) "Caville" is wrong; the correct spelling is "Cavill".

Thank you so much for making and sharing!

[linandong]

I miss you so much, even though I do know it couldn't have a happy ending. It's just the sin of me, the secret love.

[fayirishgirl]

That was very sweet and well thought out, I throughly enjoyed it

[GrevinnaD]

i love your video, it's very well-done. But please correct "Majesty", it's not spelled "Magesty" and it's really irritating because it appears so often in the video (-;

[BVSC1993]

This is unhistorical and so inaccurate, it's almost naive...

[heartofsnow23]

@BVSC1993 Have you ever heard of fiction? Its a twisted story i made up for fun.....You dont actually think I'm sitting here thinking King henry 8th was gay?????

I dont know if I should laugh or be worried?

[Buffalobigboy69]

Wow, this was so beautiful and touching! You put into words and pictures what i always wanted to see. Thank-you!

[jhr459]

Ok I loved this story, but I have one small thing and I hate to mention it, but as an English professor, it has bothered me a bit. It is Majesty, not Magesty. Otherwise, a triumph.

[heartofsnow23]

@jhr459 Aww thanks so much for watching and yeah, Im aware of my bad spelling in some scenes. Most of these were made in the wee hours of the morning with no sleep and too much coffee. I dont always go back to check the spelling mistakes. . .oops!

Im really happy you enjoyed it though ! :-)

[chi2bou]

is this the real story ????

[MarinaMaxwellYuy]

@chi2bou No it is a fanmade story

[LadyxIsisx]

This was TERRIFIC! I loved your composition in the beginning, it was beautiful. What was the second song? I know it's from the soundtrack, but I can't remember the title. *Off to watch part 2*

[heartofsnow23]

@LadyxIsisx oh wow, thankyou so much sweetie, the second song is from "the virgin Queen" soundtrack, I think its called "legacy of comfort" ...I could be wrong on that but its deff that soundtrack. So glad your liking my little series, thankyou so much for taking the time to comment, xxxx

[heartofsnow23]

@LadyxIsisx oh wow, thankyou so much sweetie,  the second song is from "the virgin Queen" soundtrack, I think its called "legacy of comfort" ...I could be wrong on that but its deff that soundtrack. So glad your liking my little series, thankyou so much for taking the time to comment, xxxx

[kevinlantojack]

@heartofsnow23 were they a gay couple on the show,thanks for posting very entertaining

[beretta1342000]

I'm starting over..

[gillygaby23]

Really? Jk

[xHistoryGirl23x]

Wow this is really awesomely edited. A very consuming and realistic part 1, which makes one care about what happens next. Bravo!

[heartofsnow23]

I know....i never thought Id stray from H and A but I got hooked after seeing Angelina's gorgeous video on the couple. It just seems so interesting to me....but dont worry as soon as Im done with this, it will be back to my beloved Anne.....

[LaissezFaireAll]

@heartofsnow23 Could you please tell me which one is "Angelina's gorgeous video"? Just give me the YT title, to search for it. Thank you!

[FairyKingdom86]

Wow! Very amazing. Can't wait for some more drama and angst. When I saw that it was over 6 minutes, I was like, "oh man" but the 6 minutes flew by. Very interesting story and can't wait to see where it goes.

[heartofsnow23]

yeah i know...i always turn off if the video is too long, but thankyou so much hunny for sticking with it. Part two is uploading now, xxxx

[HappySlovenianGirl]

This is really nice storyline. I really enjoyed your previous story 'The Behold', and I must admit, I was looking forward for you to make another one :) I have a few questions for you:

- how you would portray Henry's wives?

- would you show that Charles's hate for Anne Boleyn was motivated by his love for Henry?

I'm really curious how this will develop!

Kisses and I'm waiting for the next part!

[heartofsnow23]

Aww thanks hunny, Im glad you liked "To Behold"

the story will include lots of twists and turns with the wives of Henry being used in all sorts of jealous ways. I hope you will watch part two....xxx its uploading now, xxxx

[AngelinaLaFleur]

AND THAT KISS! WOW DID YOU DO THAT?

I can not believe I almost forgot to mention your piano piece is absolutely beautiful :)

[heartofsnow23]

thankyou sweetheart....Im uploading part two now with the download link to the full version if you ever want it.

thanks so much for watching hunny, xxxx

[beretta1342000]

That is so intresting.. The story you've woven so far is very good.. But, what of his wives, especially Anne and Jane. Oh, if Arthur was king Henry must not have married katherine.. You should put it he only married Anne.. But, she betrayed him with somebody he knew.. Like Thomas Cromwell or something..

[heartofsnow23]

Im glad you like it so far. The story is going to be based on the tudor story we know, but with this running secret, that Henry really only had one true love, Charles Brandon.

in part two you will see what I mean. Its not about the wives so much as they were only there for the pure requirement of a male heir,

The story will follow Henry's battle for his love of Charles and the love of his kingdom and kingly duty.

i hope that makes sense, xxx

xx

[AngelinaLaFleur]

This is sooooooooo good hun, I can't wait to see the rest. You know, I am still convinced that Charles was either a) Henrys brother or b) his secret lover. Seriously!

[Ladyjaxs]

This Amazing!!!! You got me hooked, I cannot wait until the second part!

[heartofsnow23]

aww thanks hunny, im glad you like it, im making part two as we speak, xxx

[sunlightromance]

Wow!!! I love it!!!! =D Such beautiful piano music you've created!! =]

[xXForeverRoseXx]

UH. this is AMAZING! I love it more and more every second! i hope they'res a second part ;)

[heartofsnow23]

Thanyou so much hunny, Im making part two right now, xxx

[spikester93]

Thats really good! They do make a awesome couple, that was well put together, your work never goes downhill, but only up. your just amazing :) x

[spikester93]

P.S. i would love to use your composition on the piano in one of my videos! :)