funny how everybody taking shit about my poem, yet majority of the people support it. I can't help but think that the people who hated it probably hated it because i stepped on their toes. Because niggas is commenting they hate it. Maybe Weezy & Jeezy fans, maybe Republican.
I'm gonna admit my flow was a lil' off that night, but the words rang true that March 2006 night, and still true today. Every poem i ever wrote has me talking shit about SOMEBODY or SOMETHING. but not just anybody, but the negative anything or anybody. Everything that pisses me off in this poem are shit that you'll be surprised somebody actually supported.
This poem is awesome. I wrote it because it's true. and anybody who hates it, then i waas talking about you. YOu probably found yourself in my poem and hate it because i outed you.
@ReliableLojic you spelt logic wrong so good job on that bud. Another thing, go fuck yourself ; dont think your funny he was talking about the idea of niggas, not black people in general. I dont think.
@factorx90 Its not spelled correctly because that was the point you idiot. It wasn't meant to grammatically correct. If you had any common sense you would have known that.
This shit was Wack, it didnt seem like he actually tried hard, seems like he sed shit just to rhyme...hes talking about ppl braggin about hustlin, nd how he hates ppl that shoots....So why would he say say hi to my baretta???....nd why would he say 6 letters it dont gets no better that part was just to rhyme, nd the barettta went against his whole shit.....Dudes wack
foggyngt has the best comment.....which is "cant say i liked it.. but eh".....haha cuz like some of the things he mentioned pisses me off too so i can relate but the way he delivered this poem was not good at all
that poem pissed me off, I hate nigga that cant think of anything original, so they jump on popular hate bandwagons, why u hate lil wayne,and slim thug, why u hate niggas? U actuly contradicted your whole poem in your opening verse, u hate niggas, cause they pullin triggas but u talkin bout u got a berretta?? WTF. then talkin bout i hate bitches, Nigga b more original or at least my versitile, cause 2 me you just sound like a picked on hater
No. I'm not a picked on hater. I agree with you about the beretta/pullin trigger thing. i just realize that, but everything else is real shit. And it's pretty original to me.
Everybody whoever heard this poem or saw me do it live had nothing but praise for it and DID call it original. They didnt know someone can flip Sound of Music songs and make it interesting.
And i hate niggas cuz niggas are stupid. Am i talking about black people. NO. im talking about niggas the same way i describe them.
nah, u ain't the only one. out of all these comments, it's about 3 who agree with you. your world, squirrel. But you need to understand that, the rest of themlove this. I perform everywhere all over the Eastcoast and I am WELL respected. I performed this poem 100s of times and got tremendous responses everywhere I go. So your words are just a tiny bit of dust from the ceiling fan so lemme go and dust it off right quick.
oh thank you thank you thank you!!!!! I thought this poem was awesome man. Took me a while to realize where the tempo was comin from, but when I recognized it it all made sense. princess is just mad cuz she likes all those guys that piss you off, plus she might be a bitch.
Tyrone Grizz here. Everybody who had good things to say, thank you. Everybody who can't be nice, i'll pray for y'all. Basically the way I write/perform is that i take a subject serious to me and do it in a fun way that makes you want to listen. It's so much seriousness in the world, people dont need ME to be serious too. I have fun on my page AND the stage. i do it in a way that will have you quoting it while you're washing dishes. you quoting my lines and realize you hate Weezy too.
I like his words, but I think the rythme he kept throughout the piece took away some of the seriousness, and it took away from the performance in general. But over all, well done
i thght it was funnii nd thats all that matters
ILuvKhrisJ 7 months ago
I understand exactly what he saying niggahs destroying I race with that b.s. That makes me mad to.
ThePoetJoseph 10 months ago
THIS IS SOMETHING THAT REALLY PISS ME OFF I
Hate Niggas
Naw Man I really hate niggas
lmao
Mara2140 11 months ago
You are amazing. :D
magnifly4111997 1 year ago
This is really different....and hilarious
cepeebl2 1 year ago
LMAOOOOOOOOOOO THIS IS FUNNY
bxfinestladiie 1 year ago
love it
slo1986 1 year ago
LMAO!!!! i love it!!
so true!
ToClean14 1 year ago
hahaha
TheTapia157 1 year ago
LMAO. he killed it
unstablemantha 1 year ago
this was aii'ght . had some good points .
ZAlUiMi 1 year ago
wow some of the things he said piss me off 2 lol
beautifulblasiangirl 1 year ago
fuckin awesome man
factorx90 1 year ago
funny how everybody taking shit about my poem, yet majority of the people support it. I can't help but think that the people who hated it probably hated it because i stepped on their toes. Because niggas is commenting they hate it. Maybe Weezy & Jeezy fans, maybe Republican.
TheTyroneGrizzShow 1 year ago
I'm gonna admit my flow was a lil' off that night, but the words rang true that March 2006 night, and still true today. Every poem i ever wrote has me talking shit about SOMEBODY or SOMETHING. but not just anybody, but the negative anything or anybody. Everything that pisses me off in this poem are shit that you'll be surprised somebody actually supported.
TheTyroneGrizzShow 1 year ago
This poem is awesome. I wrote it because it's true. and anybody who hates it, then i waas talking about you. YOu probably found yourself in my poem and hate it because i outed you.
TheTyroneGrizzShow 1 year ago 6
WOW that was great :) Loved it :)
JustACountryGirl623 1 year ago
so different.. I <3 LOVE <3 it!!!!
koffee04 2 years ago
LOL "I hate niggas" This dude was buggin out. this was an ill poem
ReliableLojic 2 years ago 2
@ReliableLojic you spelt logic wrong so good job on that bud. Another thing, go fuck yourself ; dont think your funny he was talking about the idea of niggas, not black people in general. I dont think.
factorx90 1 year ago
@factorx90 Its not spelled correctly because that was the point you idiot. It wasn't meant to grammatically correct. If you had any common sense you would have known that.
ReliableLojic 1 year ago
@factorx90 And if you read my comment correctly, I was quoting him. Not my words.
ReliableLojic 1 year ago
lol, love it.
LovelyLadyB24 2 years ago
I've heard better poems than this but just because he made me smile this is going on my favorites lol
naturallydommi010 2 years ago
lol
LadyA4718 2 years ago
BOOOOO!
UHeardMe1stTime 2 years ago 5
when i first heard this i was actually there...and yes i was one of the people clapping lmao i felt so slow after
Blacklilo17 2 years ago 2
This shit was Wack, it didnt seem like he actually tried hard, seems like he sed shit just to rhyme...hes talking about ppl braggin about hustlin, nd how he hates ppl that shoots....So why would he say say hi to my baretta???....nd why would he say 6 letters it dont gets no better that part was just to rhyme, nd the barettta went against his whole shit.....Dudes wack
Letsgetit617 2 years ago 2
good point i heard this sound so many times and never caught on to that lol.
Blacklilo17 2 years ago
what was with his flow? good point of view but the rest all i can do is laugh!
Mattluvzunot 2 years ago
it was ok
But he delivered it way to slow
Stopped to much
CerryMerry 2 years ago 2
hahahah "people who clap when they think that i fucked up" hahahah
hotgod03 2 years ago 2
MY NAME IS NICK0 &THIS IS S0METHING THAT REALLY PISS ME 0FF!!
THIS P0EM!!
-NiCk0 =]
VOLLEybALLn22 2 years ago 14
cant say i liked it.. but eh
foggyngt 2 years ago 3
foggyngt has the best comment.....which is "cant say i liked it.. but eh".....haha cuz like some of the things he mentioned pisses me off too so i can relate but the way he delivered this poem was not good at all
BRAZYBOii 2 years ago 2
well i guess we know where Waldo is now
ChungFat4eva 2 years ago 5
lmfao!!!!! hahahahahaha
latinagurl1293 2 years ago
lmfao
jammiethegreat08 2 years ago
haha dat was good.
ChrisPaulWifey3 2 years ago
LMAO HEs bad ass
ThatDamnWhiteGirl 2 years ago
LOL - this dude is brilliant. Loved it
MickQuick07 2 years ago
haha i loved this....
simplylovely17 2 years ago
damn...this niga look like waldo
Cjn604 2 years ago 2
Please sir.
Don't get too proud.
You can be well "respected" but it doesn't matter to me.
Just write and leave it be.
To each his own though.
I respect your thoughts.
Will respect you once there's a connection deeper than words that disregard comments but comment back in a too much pride a voice.
Come one. Poet.
poesense4truecents 2 years ago
that shit was cold
tzbchick 2 years ago
That was funny, loved it!
KayMay1224 2 years ago
that poem pissed me off, I hate nigga that cant think of anything original, so they jump on popular hate bandwagons, why u hate lil wayne,and slim thug, why u hate niggas? U actuly contradicted your whole poem in your opening verse, u hate niggas, cause they pullin triggas but u talkin bout u got a berretta?? WTF. then talkin bout i hate bitches, Nigga b more original or at least my versitile, cause 2 me you just sound like a picked on hater
45meen 2 years ago
i agree.!
lyricmaverick 2 years ago
No. I'm not a picked on hater. I agree with you about the beretta/pullin trigger thing. i just realize that, but everything else is real shit. And it's pretty original to me.
Everybody whoever heard this poem or saw me do it live had nothing but praise for it and DID call it original. They didnt know someone can flip Sound of Music songs and make it interesting.
And i hate niggas cuz niggas are stupid. Am i talking about black people. NO. im talking about niggas the same way i describe them.
TyroneGRZ 2 years ago 22
Good lyrics questionable delivery.
Especially since some may not know where the "Favorite Things" title comes from.
darcskies777 3 years ago
I think the title is word play on "this is something that really pissed me off"......
cocoprincess1986 2 years ago
Sound of Music, cocoprincess1986.
FodderMoosie 2 years ago
i like!! propa gud energy, n v.unique style.. wana hear more
krigkrag 3 years ago
i hated dis
i thought it was stupid....and i noe i aint the only one...
cityprincess 3 years ago
nah, u ain't the only one. out of all these comments, it's about 3 who agree with you. your world, squirrel. But you need to understand that, the rest of themlove this. I perform everywhere all over the Eastcoast and I am WELL respected. I performed this poem 100s of times and got tremendous responses everywhere I go. So your words are just a tiny bit of dust from the ceiling fan so lemme go and dust it off right quick.
TyroneGRZ 3 years ago 3
well dat was just my opinion
if my words dont mean nun y waste ur time commenting bak....
cityprincess 3 years ago
oh thank you thank you thank you!!!!! I thought this poem was awesome man. Took me a while to realize where the tempo was comin from, but when I recognized it it all made sense. princess is just mad cuz she likes all those guys that piss you off, plus she might be a bitch.
superboi 2 years ago
The end was HILARIOUS!!
hippie809 3 years ago
Dis was really funny!!
SHERAYAMILI 3 years ago
Ohhhh it was BNV 06. it got all 10's rite...that last line was funny lol
dirtynasteenorth 3 years ago
Wow i know this poem from sumwer but i dnt no wer.....mad dejavu. but yea. good poem still
dirtynasteenorth 3 years ago
yo i like this pome but
not to much on wayen niqqa
im from new orleans dats shit anit cool
PiNKYP012 3 years ago
thats what i've been saying... ohh fake ass rappers
GETSOMEGAME 3 years ago
lmao
dis is great
verry funni
poetryislife 3 years ago
That was cool...
staedtler072591 3 years ago
nice
RevealedAtLast 3 years ago
Tyrone Grizz here. Everybody who had good things to say, thank you. Everybody who can't be nice, i'll pray for y'all. Basically the way I write/perform is that i take a subject serious to me and do it in a fun way that makes you want to listen. It's so much seriousness in the world, people dont need ME to be serious too. I have fun on my page AND the stage. i do it in a way that will have you quoting it while you're washing dishes. you quoting my lines and realize you hate Weezy too.
-Grizzy
TyGrizz 3 years ago 6
I love your poem. I was sitting hear buggin' because a lot of that pisses me off too!
PoeticSongstress 3 years ago 2
Hey, your poem was great. I had a great time enjoying you watch you perform
ShawnRana 3 years ago
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TyGrizz 3 years ago 2
love this barrre gd
louisa969 3 years ago
Oh man. I had tears in my eyes from laughing at the snowman thing! I had a homeboi tell me that once. lfmao
JaySpark07 3 years ago
Saigon?
Noxshus 3 years ago
prolly did it over the instrumental for inspiration
bobnos 3 years ago
I love it all of it!! It's the truth!!
LuuvBeauti 3 years ago
This was a nice concept for it!
if yall dont know, its parodying "my favorite things" from that musical...lol.
Some of the rhyming coulda been better, and the audience didnt laugh at the "baretta" joke lol..but the concept kicks ASS!
Do ya thang tyrone!
(i remembered the E!!!!)
Daizy10231023 3 years ago
I like his words, but I think the rythme he kept throughout the piece took away some of the seriousness, and it took away from the performance in general. But over all, well done
QueenJaKqui 3 years ago
THAT WAS IGGHT
sexcci92 3 years ago
I looove this piece! get it!
psycokrusher 3 years ago
really hilariOusly true
rayviebabiie23 3 years ago
this is halarious
omgmeghan 3 years ago
Best. Parody. Ever. haha. I love it...not only is it really funny but it has meaning to it too.
pokethebobby 3 years ago
HE HAS A POiNT!THiS iS WHASSUP!
ToniWoods 3 years ago
hehe cute
younglovesJ0Y 3 years ago
This comment has received too many negative votes show
ive seen wayyyyyyyy better
playxbunnyxstud 4 years ago
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bryantphan 4 years ago
hehe. i like this specially since a few of those r a few things that pissed me off.
hatebelow 4 years ago
way to ad lib at the end
gurganator 4 years ago
Very KOol
Ayewhat 4 years ago
He's funny.
misfitsoul 4 years ago
fuckin awesome
shortmort11 4 years ago
finaly someone said it
dasbook 5 years ago
lol bush~ lol i hate hos and bitches but i love women
slimshay10 5 years ago 2
lol...that was too cute
**JAii**
jazzieboo637 5 years ago
OOO I like.
sMyAmIoCnAe 5 years ago
lol. creative
dphievero 5 years ago
Haha I love it.
breakinthemix 5 years ago