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  • your an amazing writer :)

  • Noir Nation, coming to an e-reader near you this September. On Youtube, Facebook, and Twitter.

  • OMG OMG

    your an amazing writer,

    and an amazing inspiration to me

    pls post more of this series, i totally love it

  • MY contest. :) Good jobbb. :)

  • love it! i want demi and joe back :( what is the second song? love it

  • great episode..

    i voted for you.

  • ahh! This was its amazing depressing usual. :) i loved it to pieces and cannot wait to see what you did with Joe in the end !

  • I really want joe and demi back together :/ Great job :D

  • yes last comment to write so we can see the next one! :D great job and congrats on the award.

  • I just hope they've got a good plan but it won't be easy with this parents. I'm just very excited to see how it's going to work. :)

  • i love the end!! I hope Demi doesn't marry David.

  • Just read the episode and the one before...I couldn't read episode 20 because of me living in Germany ( youtube's annoying as always :D) but the episodes were awesome..aaand depressing :P and yes I read your db and congratulation for your win :)Well when the part with Joe and the challenge was running I thought..omg how cliche that he dumply got into it -.- It would be so awesome when he'd heard about Demi got to marry someone than he breaks out,crushes the wedding and..well donno :D

    Loved it!!

  • awwXD i can't wait till joe and dem are back together....

  • you. you're awesome, i really hope you know of your awesomeness.. cause it is awesome. :p

  • You're so talented you don't even know it.

    You still inspire me. I don't care how often you're on or whatever. I still will read these.

    I think you should finish Write Me A Song too ;) But this one is on my top favorite list. It's been unique from the beginning.

    ANYWAY I hope Joe doesn't do anything stupid or god knows what happens after that.

  • Ok 1: Joseph, oh my god, what the hell he did? lol

    2: Damn it, demi´s parents are so ughhhhhh i have no words

    3- Joe needs to get out of jail and rescue Demi from her parents :/

    Loved it :)

  • omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg!!! literally the first and only thought that went through my head when i saw this in my subscription box!! LOVE this story. your doing a great job!

    I sincerely hope Joe doesn't do anything.....

    And I hope Vanessa can help Demi.

    You should have Camilla go and talk to Joe!

    Anyways... Great job!!

    Can't wait for the next one!!! =)

  • LOVE YOU VANESSA!!! :DD

    makes me even more excited for the next episode!!!

  • That was great love it, can't wait to see what happens next.

  • I hope vanessa really helps her. Awesome episode =)

  • aaww i hope dan's challenge is something like break out of here and go win demi's heart <3

  • this whole time when you would say david, i thought u meant david henrie =))

    lol

    man i hope joe doesnt do anythin stupid and now hopefully vanessa acan help demi escape *_*

    post more pls!!! :)

    p.s u so deserved tht award (Y) u were on the top of my list :)

  • Ugh! Get rid of David! Get Joe Out of Jail! UGH! JEMI!!! Go Vanessa!! 

  • Woohoooo! I was kind wanting Demi to bitch at all 4 adults.. but Vanessa coming to rescue I fine too :)

  • OMG don't let Joe do something stupid he needs to get to demi and go Vanessa

  • thank you Vanessa!! :D

    And Joe, pelase don't do something stupid...

  • Joe, you;re strong enough.

    girl srsly,joe shouldnt do anything.it would like,RUIN the story. :P

    well if hitting&doin chicks is what he meant with "challenge".

    cant wait for the other ;(

  • LOVE!

  • OMMG AMAZING! PPLEASE doNTTT LET JOE DO SOEMTHING STUPIIDDD D:

  • I can't get over at how amazing this story is

    I just really hope that this will be a happy ending :)

    YAY! Vanessa

  • I LOVE VANESSA!

    you deserved that award!

    you're an amazing writer! :)

  • congrats! you totally deserve it! you are an amazing writer.

    i love this ep, i cant wait to see what else you have in store :)

  • go vanessa

  • awww. joe don't forget demi, and i really hope vanessa helps demi.

  • Joe better not do anything stupid! & i hope vanessa helps demi :)

    ohh.. & congrats on your award :D you deserve it! :]

  • joe better not do anything bad. i'm so glad vanessa's going to help demi.

  • congratulation alyy <3 you deserved it :) whaat its going to be depress? so hes going to cheat :/ no :| poor demi

  • Joe is letting Dan play with him, He will regret it I just know it and for Demi she needs to get out of that place!

  • i hope joe dont do anything 2 stupid :P and i hope demi and joe get back together soon :) loveeeee this story post more sooon! :)

  • Joe, whatever it is, say no!!!!!! Even more if it's screwing Maya (that's her name, right?)

    And Vanessa, I like you know

  • GOOO VANESSA nd joe better dont scew things up again

  • I was so glad to see Vanessa at the end :)

    I really thought she's just leave Demi alone

    and Joe i'm shaking my head right now

  • You deserve to be recognized as the favorite writer :) When you said that this will get more depressing, I don't think it will be impossible since it already is depressing but I still love it not everything is colorful and happy.

  • I think Vanessa and Demi should run away together and as for Joe, I don't even know what to say to him, He's letting Dan get into his head -__-

  • What the hell JOE!? I'm so disappointed with him right now

  • YAY! I'm glad that you been updating lately =)

    I have a bad feeling about Dan, He's a bad influence towards Joe

    and Vanessa should help Demi out or better yet they both can run away together

  • I made up my mind I hate Demi's parents, David and DAN! I just want Jemi to be together once again :( I'm hoping Vanessa will help Demi run away again? I can't wait for the next one! and Congratulations for being the favorite writer

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