That was pretty good! I enjoyed it alot. Excellent shots and camera work here. Not sure why the intro was blue at first - thats the only thing I didn't get. The actors did a great job as well!
I think it's great. ALL great! Nothing wrong with ad-libbing if that was going on! It makes for a more natural feel. Look at Scorcese movies! Anyway....KEEP IT ALIVE!
Wow. I love when endings turn what seemed generic into something completely different.
Interesting how the scene with blue lighting - which would normally signify something bad will happen - went by without a hitch and full color was when the tone switched,
I also liked how loud it was when he slammed his hands on top of the car.
If you ever need music, contact John Murphy on Facebook. He has composed the music to many many films, such as Lock, Stock and Two Smoking Barrels, 28 Days/Weeks Later and Sunshine. He owns the rights to 34 of his film scores and licenses them for free to indy filmmakers such as yourself and I.
superb pete,its one thing being a great director,the fact you write it as well makes it even better! im looking forward to your next project already :D
dats freaky!!!
lindsayproductions1 1 year ago
the guy is a little brat....
lindsayproductions1 1 year ago
That was pretty good! I enjoyed it alot. Excellent shots and camera work here. Not sure why the intro was blue at first - thats the only thing I didn't get. The actors did a great job as well!
pig103109 1 year ago
Awesome twist! :D I loved it!
created2create 2 years ago
omg, that was well good. i didnt see that coming. well done, that was brill. The woman is also a good actress =)
bunnyboilerboi24 2 years ago
nice job
aadmharris 2 years ago
lovely! :)
19Heights89 2 years ago
LOL! Certainly fucked that up didn't he...
eviscerational 2 years ago
great job.
looseground 2 years ago
I enjoyed it!
cavanherk 2 years ago
WOW amazing work yet again pete well done it just gets better and better!!!!! 5* xxx
lewis5885 2 years ago
great! i really liked it and it good to hear some familiar accents for once! btw i liked the change to widescreen at 3:03 very clever!
belrock1 2 years ago
great......
larrylurex69 2 years ago
Ha! nice 1! It's the kind of trick i'd play on me Mrs, Eh.....don't think i'll bother now.
kingkongsdouble 2 years ago
haha!
Nice one. I liked the way that you kind of set the guy up like a bit of an asshole as well.
mikelunz 2 years ago
that was awesome! great little twist at the end!
MetByMoonlight 2 years ago
Five stars! Nicely done. Very clean editing and scenes were composed nicely. Story was great.
drkreepy1 2 years ago
ahh yeah really good :) i liked it xxxxx
jenandthumper 2 years ago
Excellent as always, really great camera work and good storyline, really captivating 5* keep up the good work
IAmTheTragedy 2 years ago
good idea but as soon as she started beating him I figured it out.
Jamalin7 2 years ago
Superb!
pauldownton 2 years ago
it was good, better then most horror movies I see on youtube
Jtp101z 2 years ago
Great work .Good twist .5 stars.
couscoustv 2 years ago
I think it's great. ALL great! Nothing wrong with ad-libbing if that was going on! It makes for a more natural feel. Look at Scorcese movies! Anyway....KEEP IT ALIVE!
JethroWilbury 2 years ago
I liked the idea adn the story, although you could be a little tighter on the scripting - most of it felt really ad-libbed?...
chrisbitz 2 years ago
Cool!!!! very good! Loved it!
JazzEthics 2 years ago
great job! 5 stars and bring on more Pete!
angie4josh 2 years ago
haha my computer screen turns everything bllue to pink... this looks so funny now.
great job tho :)
ditzygal77 2 years ago
nice ...didnt see that coming 5*****
djmerc135 2 years ago
every video you present is amazing.
BelleMovement 2 years ago
Wow. I love when endings turn what seemed generic into something completely different.
Interesting how the scene with blue lighting - which would normally signify something bad will happen - went by without a hitch and full color was when the tone switched,
I also liked how loud it was when he slammed his hands on top of the car.
Oswlek 2 years ago
nice editing - :)
youtrojaxtube 2 years ago
Pete, your shots and editing were superb!
If you ever need music, contact John Murphy on Facebook. He has composed the music to many many films, such as Lock, Stock and Two Smoking Barrels, 28 Days/Weeks Later and Sunshine. He owns the rights to 34 of his film scores and licenses them for free to indy filmmakers such as yourself and I.
-Ryan
AnarchyIncProduction 2 years ago
wow! this is definately my favorite!! great job!!
singerchick1120 2 years ago
love it!! The soundtrack was great too, fitted brilliantly!
elmoo10 2 years ago
superb pete,its one thing being a great director,the fact you write it as well makes it even better! im looking forward to your next project already :D
spiralisedcat 2 years ago
That was really a neat short film .. the soundtrack was great too !!
zoltangz1 2 years ago
Wow that was great!
MajorFilmMusic 2 years ago
Wow! Gotta say... best one yet! Realistic movie graphics at 3:00. Loved the widescreen too!
DrumBandLine 2 years ago
What a sweet twisted little film! It's an honor to be the first to comment on one of your magnificent projects.
Donald
donjacob1959 2 years ago