Stumbled over the "this girl I know" bit at the beginning. If they're friendly enough to tell each other about that sort of thing, then he should refer to her by name.
The "hagan-daz addiction" bit was good, and I'm seeing believable characters in general, mostly in Emily who seems clever and David is very likable.
What is your addiction to jumping around in time? Other than exposition, there needs to be a pay-off for it, for later on in the series. I'll look forward to it.
I wish them the best. Improve the script. Make it more dynamic, snappy. Get to the point quicker. After all, this is a web show with 4min episodes, it should be concise. Maybe you guys have watched AfterWorld, if not I urge you too. Same time base 3 to 4min. Those guys get the timming right. Check it out and maybe get inspired by it.
On our other serial, I think the scripting is snappier, more episodic--but PX was conceived more as a traditional suspense film, at least in terms of plotting. In these early scenes, we all want to get on with the action--but the character intros and development prove crucial for the rest of the story, while the action comes later. If you stick with us, I think you'll really enjoy the story that's developing. I wish we had the resources to release them faster! Thanks for the feedback!
nice video. Looks like you guys have spent a lot of time and effort on this series. Yes it is a bit slow right now, but if you say it'll get crazier, guess I will have to stick around to see more. =) Thanks for sending me a message about your channel.
My friend, I can't even imagine the undertaking involved with this series...it's not even little quippy lines but an actual story with history and character building. I can't wait to see how it all unfolds.
she was listening to a "love song" when he came in? Or is that his music? Isn't that an older style of the MAC computer monitor on the desk? I seem to be filled with questions at the moment. :D
A nice slow start to the horror to come. Looking forward to see what comes about.
And yes, it is an older iMac—but you've gotta remember, all of this happened back in November of 2004, so we're just trying to accurately represent the real Power Plant #67.
And if anyone's worried by the slow start, stick with us another couple weeks. Things are going to get crazy!
what. A flashback in a flashback
gooseman19871987 2 years ago
damn. these bitches are fine as hell
ninjazoner 2 years ago
Stumbled over the "this girl I know" bit at the beginning. If they're friendly enough to tell each other about that sort of thing, then he should refer to her by name.
The "hagan-daz addiction" bit was good, and I'm seeing believable characters in general, mostly in Emily who seems clever and David is very likable.
What is your addiction to jumping around in time? Other than exposition, there needs to be a pay-off for it, for later on in the series. I'll look forward to it.
Arie26er 3 years ago
Very impressive indeed, more like this please
clotus 4 years ago
this might sound nerdy or might not but i think you guy's deserve a T.V show.
You could make it in movie business also.
qwertproductions 4 years ago
Nice. But I think they are a bit too short for one week. Still, good work, very professional indeed :)
54spiritedwill54 4 years ago
cool vids cant wait to seee the rest
askanemo 4 years ago
It so amazing to find all these shows on the internet. Makes you apreshiate the internet more
LtEggSalad 4 years ago 2
this is getting a litlle more interesting, thanks for some good WEBTV.
CA3SAr2006 4 years ago
yeah it is pretty good
rose1thepetal 4 years ago
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh COOL!!!!
Parcheezeman 4 years ago
great actors great video.I will be watching all your awesome videos.enjoying very much.Thank you :):):)
midnightlove1957 4 years ago
well, I like the short and sweet.. on to the next
bunnies rule! 8-)
luvdabun 4 years ago
cool!
Chicken993 4 years ago
fantastico
DoctorFist 4 years ago
really, i liked the idea but SLOW START is in order.
get it going dudes. i beleive in you! just make me insterested! cheers
carlosgustavo 4 years ago 2
carlosgustavo: Yes. You're right. And I hope they take your comment seriously: THEY NEED TO MOVE IT.
... Said by yet another who wishes them well, enjoys and appreciates their work.... and wants them to succeed.
GOOD work, Guys. VERY nice. Please regard your scripting! For the most part, you've got the rest down pat! Kudos!
barb99999 4 years ago
exactely barb99999 (so many 9s).
I wish them the best. Improve the script. Make it more dynamic, snappy. Get to the point quicker. After all, this is a web show with 4min episodes, it should be concise. Maybe you guys have watched AfterWorld, if not I urge you too. Same time base 3 to 4min. Those guys get the timming right. Check it out and maybe get inspired by it.
Keep me posted about new episodes and good job!
carlosgustavo 4 years ago
carlosgustavo: Thanks for your reply. Well said.
I note that a/o Episode 7, they're still not regarding ther scripting. WHY not?
barb99999 4 years ago
On our other serial, I think the scripting is snappier, more episodic--but PX was conceived more as a traditional suspense film, at least in terms of plotting. In these early scenes, we all want to get on with the action--but the character intros and development prove crucial for the rest of the story, while the action comes later. If you stick with us, I think you'll really enjoy the story that's developing. I wish we had the resources to release them faster! Thanks for the feedback!
Josh
webserials 4 years ago
hmm... This is really cool =) wish i could do something like this..
beetleo 4 years ago
Guys...slow start? Less than 8 minutes of actuall footage into it, and you're complaining about a slow start?
Anyway, I loved it. Dialogue was great, as is the acting and story. And, as always, it's incredibly high-quality for a web-series.
StarWarsFanSWF 4 years ago 2
everyone cant seem to shut up about the production values on this series, but that dont matter when the content is boring.
Hepnotic 4 years ago
Hepnotic: Well, yes and no. They DO need a better script. A stronger story. YES. But the production values here are NOT nothing: they matter a lot.
Try out a thought experiment: compare a series w/ good pr. values & poor content
w/
one the other way around.
Which survives long enough to develop into strengthening its weak points?
barb99999 4 years ago
Not bad. Huge crew for this. Where do you get the budget?
Little slow but I'll give it a chance.
GeneticBlend 4 years ago
GeneticBlend: Would love to have the answer to yr Q & any comment from the Producer/Auteur.
Please, Webserials: RSVP.
barb99999 4 years ago
This just gets better!
Rotarrius 4 years ago
still watching..lecturer is hot! hope to see more of him?
vonny100765 4 years ago
Nice. But I think they are a bit too short for one week. Still, good work, professional.
asafteirobert 4 years ago
nice video. Looks like you guys have spent a lot of time and effort on this series. Yes it is a bit slow right now, but if you say it'll get crazier, guess I will have to stick around to see more. =) Thanks for sending me a message about your channel.
a021 4 years ago
My friend, I can't even imagine the undertaking involved with this series...it's not even little quippy lines but an actual story with history and character building. I can't wait to see how it all unfolds.
myloflex 4 years ago
I'm watching!
DocRusty 4 years ago
Is he ever ontime? lol.Great way to build it up to see what happens next.Cant wait to see.
Good job guys!
Jen
jensing127 4 years ago
she was listening to a "love song" when he came in? Or is that his music? Isn't that an older style of the MAC computer monitor on the desk? I seem to be filled with questions at the moment. :D
A nice slow start to the horror to come. Looking forward to see what comes about.
JoeSomebody2 4 years ago
LOL. Claire loves her classical music!
And yes, it is an older iMac—but you've gotta remember, all of this happened back in November of 2004, so we're just trying to accurately represent the real Power Plant #67.
And if anyone's worried by the slow start, stick with us another couple weeks. Things are going to get crazy!
Josh
webserials 4 years ago