it is rather a difficult thing to write a song from scratch. It's altogether different when you have to perform it. I think you did an excellant job. Keep it up.
good song but you need to work on the guitar. Your voice is really good but it goes high and low on some things. Some words are really quiet and others are louder.
You sound great! Please check out my original song "All The Roads That Could've Been" on my page. There's a link to my myspace page there too, where you can hear professionally recorded stuff.
but you really should practice switching chords better and and not just two down strums on each chord.. It doesn't sound bad or anything, it just doesn't flow so well.
Great lyrics and a potential voice very nice tone and vibrato, but you stick in your chest voice and your guitar skills need alot of work. Try play just the guitar chords record that then listen to it make the guitar match the sweetness in your voice that tone quality. Well done other wise :)
Your so cute! :) love the song. You remind me of myself before finding out about the NWO and mind control and shit. Still ignorant, yet innocent. Lucky girl.
This song reminds me of another VERY pretty girl also named Kylie. Makes me think of her A LOT. Well this is got to be one of the most beautiful things ive EVER heard. So very nice work Kylie. Your also WAY pretty. : )
You are such an asshole. She played well, and I doubt you could do any better. Try writing a song. I dare you. It isn't easy. Also, her voice was beautiful. "Get an original voice"? That is the dumbest thing I've ever heard.
intevai, why do people like you get a youtube account?! just to tear people down?? the only thing wrong with this video is the guitar's out of tune, but other than that this song is pretty flawless.
You've got a great voice! I think your guitar might be out of tune a little but it could just be the youtube quality in the video lol. Sounds great though:)
dude really your an asshole. shes really pretty AND shes really talented. and she might never post anything else because of you and your penis. Way to go dude. (the song is awesome btw.)
LMAO!!! shirt off! bro! YOU NEED TO LISTEN WITH YOUR EARS AND NOT LOOK WITH YOUR PENIS!!! haha you made me laugh when i saw that comment i just have to post on you cuz these 2 guyz did to so yeah haha!!! remember to not get a boner when listenign to acoustic songs haha but i can understand if you cant hold it in some people have no self controll
read some of the comments...Everybody is a critic these days. I think they forget that its not that easy to write a song of your own and to sing and perform. it takes confidence to post it.
Its a nice song. A bit sappy but, you already knew that :-) You should include the lyrics in the description. Nice voice presence and way to work the camera.
Not bad.. Though, if you use your voice on a different sort of a song, you can do wonders. Your voice, is powerful, in the sense, it has that emotional touch in it. Beautiful. Do use your voice in making a great song. Else, it'll be a waste..such a voice..
try playing the G chord with your last three fingers instead of your first three, this is a trick many use, it makes it much easier to switch chords....start with a C chord and just move up your second and third fingers one string and use your little finger for the bottom string, once you do this you will see it is much easier.....
hey you have a good voice but I think you need to project it more and stay in range. I heard you trying to hit some highs there that just were not there for you.
this is the 2nd video of yours ive seen, great voice. but your a better singer than guitarist, so work on the guitar. ;] and i agree with 661sixsixone661, you are cute. haha, 5/5
I also write, sing and play guitar to my own songs. It's not easy. But somehow, your singing seems to make me forget the guitar is playing. How many songs have you written?
OMG! thats a really great song! i can relate sooo much! my 2 of my 5 best friends r mad at me, cuz me and my other 2 friends were hanging out with this gut...and 1 of my other friends did that, and she didnt get mad at all, so i really dont get what her problem is...she made me cry the other day cuz she kept telling me and my other friend to stay away, and that she hated us, and 2 never talk 2 her again, so i dont know what 2 do...but great song, great voice,and great lyrics too! bye bye
if you all would take the time she says she has only been playin for a couple of months and she is self tought! great voice and good start on the guitar keep playin!!!
good voice, but i agree you need to work on your strumming. practice a few strumming paterns and also practice blending those chords together a little better. i do like the song though!
god... your hot, got an amazing voice, and play gutiar!! geeze only if you where a little younger ;) lol anyway very beautiful song. keep the good work up and itll pay off one day.
Oh I just noticed that you're from UK, I couldn't detect your accent, it sounded american in the song, but anyway I perceive sort of talent in you, but most young people get choked with too much complements so be careful!
Very pretty voice, great songs...um i noticed that the three songs do kind of have the same chord progression, but hey, you still have an amazing voice, and obviously talent, just ry to change up the chords alittle bit.
You have a wonderful tone to your voice :)
CallTheQueen 1 year ago
You have a wonderful tone to your voice :)
CallTheQueen 1 year ago
it is rather a difficult thing to write a song from scratch. It's altogether different when you have to perform it. I think you did an excellant job. Keep it up.
MrPanetela 1 year ago
music doesnt flow with you. lol.
but its cool as a hobby
haanahasherself 1 year ago
i like the name kylie and i have a black acoustic too. marry me kylie!!!!!!!!!!
mshk1989 1 year ago
marry me kylie!!!!!!!!!!
mshk1989 1 year ago
who cares what she was playing its was her beauty i was focusing on. those eyes made my day.
mshk1989 1 year ago
way toon awesome
forrestnkell 1 year ago
would e better picked than strummed
mec0162 1 year ago
hey you are great and beautiful check out our songs by looking up rob feaster. we have alot of original songs that are amazing
davibm02 1 year ago
Aw it's beautiful =]
ibcutie101 2 years ago
oh, i didn't know angels played guitar..
RobRaw2010 2 years ago
good song but you need to work on the guitar. Your voice is really good but it goes high and low on some things. Some words are really quiet and others are louder.
great job though!
nexusBOS 2 years ago 2
sounds good, need to work on tuning that guitar a little more though
chainlinkdreams 2 years ago 2
where did you get those pretty eyes?
ronickwillis 2 years ago
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You sound great! Please check out my original song "All The Roads That Could've Been" on my page. There's a link to my myspace page there too, where you can hear professionally recorded stuff.
juligan01 2 years ago
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juligan01 2 years ago
Good song writing!
MusiciansBook 2 years ago
nice one
MUR20CS 2 years ago
Really great song:X
Adelush93 2 years ago
You sound okay..
but you really should practice switching chords better and and not just two down strums on each chord.. It doesn't sound bad or anything, it just doesn't flow so well.
Good job with the singing though.
motoshorty323 2 years ago 2
i agree with eldiablo but yeah it was pretty good :)
mist4ked 2 years ago
this is really good. i would use a kapo for your guitar though to match your voice. but thats just a suggestion! goood job!
eldiablo1453 2 years ago
Really great voice and lyrics :D But the music could be a bit better. But a really nice song :D 5 stars
860705 2 years ago
thats very nice, u really do have a serious voice. check out mine, its not great but i gotta start somewere!
sligosonlychris 2 years ago
wow that is a great song and you've got an awesome voice! when's your album coming out?
sg897850 2 years ago
Great lyrics and a potential voice very nice tone and vibrato, but you stick in your chest voice and your guitar skills need alot of work. Try play just the guitar chords record that then listen to it make the guitar match the sweetness in your voice that tone quality. Well done other wise :)
rocknro11 2 years ago
i love your voice , and love you....very beatiful......iam peruviam ....good luck
emtevo 3 years ago
Your so cute! :) love the song. You remind me of myself before finding out about the NWO and mind control and shit. Still ignorant, yet innocent. Lucky girl.
Anthonytwinhearts 3 years ago
I love your song!!!
\o/
5 stars from Brazil!!!
Kisses!!!
BobInzaghi09 3 years ago
your really good, and really pretty. keep it going
bobtheman7777777 3 years ago
I really liked it!!
You have a great voice and the lyrics, I and a lot of other people, i'm sure, can relate to.
ThatFlorencePerson 3 years ago
Keep up the good work regardless
wicknesta 3 years ago
exactly what "ibanezART120" said
apmproductions18018 3 years ago
I Like It. Good Job!
BDIERLAM 3 years ago
wow everyone's a critic.... good job
soonerguy4680 3 years ago
you have a really pretty voice, but the lyrics dont really mesh well
Pejude 3 years ago
i love your voice! awesome job girl :) it took a lot of courage. thanks for sharing ur soul. just keep working on it :)
candycemarieslador 3 years ago 2
Darling you need to spend some more time playing guitar.. and you have to tune you're guitar as well! <3
IbanezART120 3 years ago
If you tuned your guitar it would sound a lot better. Your voice is beautiful.
climingruvne 3 years ago
I prefer to watch this video with the speakers off. Just a personal preference.
joshluxy 3 years ago
HAHAHAHAHAHA
delete this
whitewidowthc 3 years ago
This song reminds me of another VERY pretty girl also named Kylie. Makes me think of her A LOT. Well this is got to be one of the most beautiful things ive EVER heard. So very nice work Kylie. Your also WAY pretty. : )
PotatoKitti 3 years ago
potato's got it made ;)
shambayati195 3 years ago
Why do I have it made?
PotatoKitti 3 years ago
beautiful : )
Myrtill1015 3 years ago
Nice voice...very well done!!
BackyardAcoustic 3 years ago
K.. ur very attractive, but please tune ur guitar and try again.
InZnude 3 years ago
This comment has received too many negative votes show
omg not another one -_-
Step 1 LEARN SOME REAL CHORDS
step 2 GET AN ORIGINAL VOICE
step 3 ACTUALLY PRACTICE
step 4 DONT POST ANOTHER SHIT SONG UNTILL YOU DO!
God damn I hate chick guitarists you all suck.
Julia Nunes is the only girl on youtube that has actually made a few good videos
intevai 3 years ago
at least she plays guitar
sirdeangelitolokita 3 years ago
lets see you do better
sexylababy 3 years ago
You are such an asshole. She played well, and I doubt you could do any better. Try writing a song. I dare you. It isn't easy. Also, her voice was beautiful. "Get an original voice"? That is the dumbest thing I've ever heard.
PotatoDonki 3 years ago
intevai, why do people like you get a youtube account?! just to tear people down?? the only thing wrong with this video is the guitar's out of tune, but other than that this song is pretty flawless.
honestly. grow a backbone and get over yourself.
rememberThe80s 3 years ago
your voice is amazing. keep writting songs it gives me chills:)
JeffKinsac 3 years ago
you ve got the looks and the voice. keep working on the guitar, the only way is up!
good luck
cortezraes 3 years ago
awesome!!
someone please give me some advice on my songs!!
newzealandjago 3 years ago
you and your beautiful voice.....you can look forward to brownies in heaven :)
daylatefriend88 3 years ago
I love your voice! and to that comment about the cliche lyrics....sometimes the cliches are the ones that really move people.
Go to my channel and check out my original song and my cover of soulja boy!
vhstkd7 3 years ago
nice voice but the lyrics seem really cliche u.u
and make that guitar your bitch! your just strumming it one beat at a time most of the time
i know im a bastard but it's called "constructive criticism" ;)
Lensk15 3 years ago
hey--the song sounds really good. I was glad I stumbled over to your channel. You've really got a sweet voice. Sounds angelic. Have a great day!
winstack 3 years ago
keep playing
pretty song
Rockonchick2 3 years ago
hi kylie u sang a song very well and play guitar also very well
and ur voice quality is good
and u looking so simple and beautiful
i know that which name is starting with "k"
he/she very intelligent because my name is "kukki"
i am from india,madhaya pradesh,guna
very good bye-bye
kukki19 3 years ago
Great job Kylie!
GhostriderRSA 3 years ago
you have a great voice & love you lots :o) xxxxx
kyliefan2446 3 years ago
You've got a great voice! I think your guitar might be out of tune a little but it could just be the youtube quality in the video lol. Sounds great though:)
brainconstipation14 3 years ago
it would sound better if you took your shirt off.
odoylerules47 3 years ago
You're a bastard. Alright, I agree she's very pretty but that's pretty disrespectful dude.
brainconstipation14 3 years ago
dude really your an asshole. shes really pretty AND shes really talented. and she might never post anything else because of you and your penis. Way to go dude. (the song is awesome btw.)
rckr68 3 years ago
LMAO!!! shirt off! bro! YOU NEED TO LISTEN WITH YOUR EARS AND NOT LOOK WITH YOUR PENIS!!! haha you made me laugh when i saw that comment i just have to post on you cuz these 2 guyz did to so yeah haha!!! remember to not get a boner when listenign to acoustic songs haha but i can understand if you cant hold it in some people have no self controll
KillaxNagato 3 years ago
"self control" is just a confident way of saying you have ED. lol
SirNiklas86 3 years ago
you have the same guitar as me, that makes u awesome
lesscroft 3 years ago
hey man, nice to see you're writing some music.
i write music too, you should check out my stuff.
petermillspetermills 3 years ago
i wish i could sing like this.. lol even though im a guy.. haha nice!!! love it
ClimbingLaddersMusic 3 years ago
Hey I really like this, good expression of feeling. Keep up the good work girl, don't listen to the doubters.
RhymeswithReason 3 years ago
you should go on american idiol
helloyoyoy 3 years ago
You should go on American idiol.
Derris
helloyoyoy 3 years ago
message me lyrics girl !
=)
shortiegerilyn7448 3 years ago
Hey, I like your voice.
Maybe the chord progression could be changed to make it a bit more interesting though.
iParamore13 3 years ago
i lov it
milcah38 3 years ago
read some of the comments...Everybody is a critic these days. I think they forget that its not that easy to write a song of your own and to sing and perform. it takes confidence to post it.
and for the record...I liked it. :)
catie052 3 years ago
:( not so nice but for a amatuer
Juva3p 3 years ago
not that it matters cause u are gorgeous...but plz tune guitar 8)
awesome song!
Gatorcountry0131 3 years ago
Its a nice song. A bit sappy but, you already knew that :-) You should include the lyrics in the description. Nice voice presence and way to work the camera.
2cpus4me 3 years ago
good singing pretty girl
kennyscotten 3 years ago
very nice.. i like it. but the guitar was not completely tuned.
liavav 3 years ago
Not bad.. Though, if you use your voice on a different sort of a song, you can do wonders. Your voice, is powerful, in the sense, it has that emotional touch in it. Beautiful. Do use your voice in making a great song. Else, it'll be a waste..such a voice..
ag3ntz3e 3 years ago
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very cool! i love original music, and this is original and awesome! keep it comming!
seapockets 3 years ago
ie-ee-ie like it :) keep it up.
SnowTubeMusic 3 years ago
wow you nice very nice and beautiful voice..u looks so good ^_^
avhy2810 3 years ago
o my god im in HEAVENNNNNNn tanx good song
you got talent
superstarbeebotch 3 years ago
Nice voice... =) BUt you gotta tune that guitar up babe... Sounds like the B string to me... But nice job. =)
RichieV123 3 years ago 2
I love your voice!
bonnielovinwallace 3 years ago
try playing the G chord with your last three fingers instead of your first three, this is a trick many use, it makes it much easier to switch chords....start with a C chord and just move up your second and third fingers one string and use your little finger for the bottom string, once you do this you will see it is much easier.....
dbhoward56 3 years ago
but ur voice is so cute
braveeheeart 3 years ago
This has some nice moments,
DDR
DAVIDDAMIENR 3 years ago
your 2nd strings out...
lithjimmy 3 years ago
Please tune your guitar.
branpar87 3 years ago
wow!!!^^
verry nice voice and you looks like a wonderful girl!!nice^^
XxXmorboXxX 3 years ago
You're voice is beautiful and you're beautiful as well. =D
TheLastHero03 3 years ago
!!!A Postcard from Germany and wrote in german!!!
Wow absolute Klasse ein "riesen" talent.
Nice voice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Schwarzsteve 3 years ago
hey you have a good voice but I think you need to project it more and stay in range. I heard you trying to hit some highs there that just were not there for you.
Its not a bad song.
fuggedupmess 3 years ago
eres bonita cantas bn pero te falta en guitarra xD
Alexandr21 3 years ago
Absolutely GREAT
Greets
Andy
asSpawn1974 3 years ago
I LOVE IT!
jaythesinger 3 years ago
ABSOLUTELY WOW X
mrskwoodward 3 years ago
thats really good! :] i've written a couple of songs myself. and im going to take voice and guitar so maybe i can put up a song soon!!!
jifNjelly 3 years ago
ur hot
Ajs00 3 years ago
You're a dumbass :|
Love your voice Kyliek. :]
GodsentHellraiser 3 years ago
this is the 2nd video of yours ive seen, great voice. but your a better singer than guitarist, so work on the guitar. ;] and i agree with 661sixsixone661, you are cute. haha, 5/5
MuchoMetal 3 years ago
awesome job dude, i love original tunes
seapockets 4 years ago
Ur cute !!!! big time !!!!
661sixsixone661 4 years ago
great song!! remind me a bit of alanis morissette!!! awesome. keep it up i'll check out your others now!
morrc002 4 years ago
you have everything to make it . love your song , sweet voice and has feeling to it . keep writing .hope to publish this song .
reckonman 4 years ago
youre cute but this is terrible
fish014 4 years ago
i think you did a good job :)
bmoreault 4 years ago
This is pretty good...I like the fact that are alot of other people that write like I do, I just need a camcorder, soon...very soon.
NaturalFunkAndTheFly 4 years ago
I also write, sing and play guitar to my own songs. It's not easy. But somehow, your singing seems to make me forget the guitar is playing. How many songs have you written?
P.S.-Let me know what you think of my songs.
jus'ray (Danny)
JusRay718 4 years ago
nice voice .bravo.well done
tankunol 4 years ago
singing and lyrics good, guitar...not so much
SweetSerenityXx 4 years ago
nice job on the lyrics
identitytraveler 4 years ago
OMG! thats a really great song! i can relate sooo much! my 2 of my 5 best friends r mad at me, cuz me and my other 2 friends were hanging out with this gut...and 1 of my other friends did that, and she didnt get mad at all, so i really dont get what her problem is...she made me cry the other day cuz she kept telling me and my other friend to stay away, and that she hated us, and 2 never talk 2 her again, so i dont know what 2 do...but great song, great voice,and great lyrics too! bye bye
tiffany2015jazzy 4 years ago
if you all would take the time she says she has only been playin for a couple of months and she is self tought! great voice and good start on the guitar keep playin!!!
aaronsnidle 4 years ago
I really dig your style!, check out some of mine?
dodgeram77 4 years ago
i completely agree v
sdcailpa 4 years ago
awsome
kerfuffel 4 years ago
my friend hates me now i really miss her so much her name is hayley
kerfuffel 4 years ago
really good :>
kerfuffel 4 years ago
great song . wanna get it on a cd and promoted ? if so ill do my best if youll be one of my artists. let me know . vanhorse music publishing -ascap
reckonman 4 years ago
tune your guitar before you record
rottingflesh 4 years ago
STEP AWAY FROM THE GUITAR!!
i like the voice and the lyrics are good. You need to post them....
1:23-1:25 is a bit rough
you have a winning voice for sure. Take guitar lessons and have someone else step in for now.
Good job on the singing/song writing.
thiswaythat 4 years ago
good voice, but i agree you need to work on your strumming. practice a few strumming paterns and also practice blending those chords together a little better. i do like the song though!
monstahnmg01 4 years ago
aww, that's lovely! I can relate! Beautiful voice, just work on the strumming and you'll be on to something great there!
x
motm90 4 years ago
god... your hot, got an amazing voice, and play gutiar!! geeze only if you where a little younger ;) lol anyway very beautiful song. keep the good work up and itll pay off one day.
DudeNamedTroy 4 years ago
nice voice :)
oliballer 4 years ago
yeah man, tune that!!!!
nicolemathers 4 years ago
Nice Nice video, from one to ten it is 20:D
You shoud go to american idol or just play a song in to a record shop.. I love your song and ypur voice..
From a Norwaygirl Camilla <33
jonesamuelsen 4 years ago
Beautiful... I actually felt the lyrics... very well done.
chromeandgreen 4 years ago
i loved the lyrics and very nice songg
jooojo0 4 years ago
u should tune up. Ur vocals are really good though, your lyrics are good too. Good song all around.
jlrazz 4 years ago
cool song
GodSoulSpirtHope 4 years ago
good!! ur voice is really cute!
mynameishollybj 4 years ago
pretty voice, but you should tune your guitar up a bit...would be much better :)
srdjanNS87 4 years ago
I have the same guitar, and yeah pls tune ur guitar, I think it's ur B string
ManusFrigus 4 years ago
lawl
Dudits15 4 years ago
Good, but TUNE YOUR GUITAR!!!!!
benthic81 4 years ago
nice voice i watched your video good job.
Porcelaintv 4 years ago
you get practicing! Good going. Amazing song!
dannylbr 4 years ago
Great voice.. guitar work needs a little more practice but what the hell...most songwriters arent guitar virtuoso's anyway..I liked it..
Keep writing songs and keep living...and share the love buy checking out some other originals out there....
Later,
Fingercheese....
fingercheese 4 years ago
i want this song^^ youre amazing
keeesekuchen 4 years ago
beautiful song
RenegadeMaster07 4 years ago
wow nice song...
djtwistmuskoka 4 years ago
brilliant
dzamiradzafri 4 years ago
It says 16 in the info... o.O she looks more mature than that.
Simple guitar playing, but so a few other hit bands' songs. Good job; I understand how hard it is to right songs. It's a pain, lol.
:D
Dolcynx 4 years ago
Oh I just noticed that you're from UK, I couldn't detect your accent, it sounded american in the song, but anyway I perceive sort of talent in you, but most young people get choked with too much complements so be careful!
nobletime 4 years ago
WOW You should GO on America IDOL you're voice organic, I'm serious. You could be the next star!
nobletime 4 years ago
Pretty good! Really liked it =) 5*s x
OneGirlAndHerGuitar 4 years ago
seriously where do you live cause ill play guitar for you =) sounds good btw
sonofwill 4 years ago
wow you are hot and your voice is hot and you have a good song too! haha
starMANxnax 4 years ago
whats up with the strumming pattern...?
but you have a great voice and if youre single contact me lol
zachbb 4 years ago
Great job. Rated and sub'd as well. Keep 'em coming!
Arakaii 4 years ago
baby you are grat merci 4 that song nice voice
alanmallorca 4 years ago
you have such a cool voice!! <3 youre' cool!!!!
millamusenxD 4 years ago
i really love your songs!!! u rock =]]
luvtruefriend28 4 years ago
Wow,very good job on the song.
hoturtu87 4 years ago
you have an amazing voice, i love it
Vico85 4 years ago
do you have this recorded anywhere else then on video?
oneemofuuck 4 years ago
great voice!
keep up the good work!
nicotommy 4 years ago
Very pretty voice, great songs...um i noticed that the three songs do kind of have the same chord progression, but hey, you still have an amazing voice, and obviously talent, just ry to change up the chords alittle bit.
Best wishes hunn.
hockeyhunn 4 years ago
Great song!
dm294 4 years ago
You are so AWESOME!!! Send me the lyrics!!!
JrhighPrincess 4 years ago
Ya sound real nice but to get real good you need
Practice,Practice,Practice
Your right on target,so keep it up
Thanks for sharing your music
MikePproductions 4 years ago
It's out of tune though =P
Let me guess, Ibanez Talman? Anyway, cool song, keep it up.
ZachLee 4 years ago
Hey not bad at all!
codyallday 4 years ago
wow this is beautiful! :D you have to have a strong confidence to post yourself singing. and you nailed it! great job. awsome song.
XmcrTnoticeTmeX 4 years ago
this song is amazing, and you're absolutely gorgeous...dangerous combo, haha, I'll be checking out your other songs too, =)
Lecu0013 4 years ago
very good the guitaring could use a lil work but it is still very well done amazing voice as well.
im 17 and do the same thing as u play guitar and right my own music i am hopefully going to get some posted up soon.
Keep up the good work and dont let the bad comments put u down u are very good at wat u do
justintiffany 4 years ago