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  • owwwnnnnnn 

  • awwwwww !!!! :) i love when she said "Shut up and Kiss Me' !! It was sooo perfect !! :)

  • i must say again. i started crying! i love these! its so adorable and sweet!

  • Hahah I liked the sappy parts soo much more than the action ones <3

  • awww omg she got her first kiss and it happened EXACTLY the way she wanted it too oh how romantic i want my first kiss to be in the rain it's soooo cute

  • Omg that is so cute :) i was waiting for that to happen! lol the story is really good  xx

  • omg i cant believe i actually cried:)

    i rlly did !!!! I cried :):):):)

    my mum is staring at me now.....wat do i say? im reading luv stories about justin bieber??? maybe not :D

    anyways thx for making these they r so cute :p

  • i KNEW it was gonna rain.... i just KNEW it! :)

  • i think i love you. you're the greatest person ever. I'm not much of a Biebette. well, i hate her...but this story is really cute.

  • "u no wat i want u 2 do 4 me?"

    "wat?" he asks, curious yet cautious.

    "shut up and kiss me."

    hahaha, i love it !

    genious <33

    love the story btw =D

  • "u no wat i want u 2 do 4 me?"

    "wat?" he asks, curious yet cautious.

    "shut up and kiss me."

    hahahaha LOL

    totally genious <3

  • fanstatic!!!

  • ahhh!!! i luv the end so so so much and i luv wat he told her outside and stuff!!! its the cutest lol this is myy fav!! u r awesome

  • this is the most amazing thing.. i was like screaming when it started raining and when he said i love you... CUTEST THING OF LIFE. I THINK I MIGHT JUST DIE

  • omgg, i just noticedd that she didnt give him his jacket backk ahaha(: greatt storyy, it was so sweeeeettt. (:

  • wait but like all you said was right before they kissed the clouds came out....etc...but you never said they KISSED!!! but then you said he gasve her a peck again? Idk im confused but greatt story(:

  • ok i was wrong...i LOVE this one!!!

    This is my all time fav.

  • aaaaaaaaaaaaw this was sooo super sweet <33333

  • 0:37 he looks so hot lol

  • oh my goodness! your my hero for saying that. its a long story! but i just totaly agree

  • hahah aw yer

  • that was amazing,

    its weird but thats exactly the kind of guy i want...

    i want something like that to happen to me :(

    these are soo good!

  • i cant even like describe with like words to express how unbelievably adorable that was<333

    :)

  • Lol he beats up a drubk kid.. Classic

  • aw :)

  • I love this one...... He's so sweet! =)

    I would LOVE to be bre in these stories! but I'm ABBY so Thanks! =)

    <3justinbieber (His music and him)

  • i freakin loved this one

  • THis id my #1 fav really........so adowable

  • Please cant wait its really good ;D If you want you can read mine ;D If your'e not to lazy (Just kidding) your'e storyes are amazing <33

  • wow..

  • oooo more please that was soso good

  • yes yes yes yes!!loves it!:D

    <3<3<3

  • hmmmm. what is a witty comment for this one....? huh. ok well i hope my imaginary self hears about this soon. my real self has a reading report due tomorrow and i slacked. oops =x

  • i luv it!

  • OMG i love this one, i can't wait for part 12!!!

  • plz today i <3 this!

  • awesome x

  • pleaseeee put the next one up today? :)

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