The storyline is pretty good. I liked the twist at the end too. The overall plot is interesting... The editing is a little cheesy for my liking at points.
As been said,the acting and the script let it down a little. It all seems really forced and very unnatural. It actually put me off the plot a bit.
The wound at the end could have done with some fake blood too, although i thought the actual wound was done well, considering.
Good storyline and editing, not very good acting/script. Could tell the actor was just reading from a script at times (especially the interview) Overall, not bad!
Hey, this is pretty good, its dramatic and sinister enough and it has an interesting back story, the parts were clear as well, the only thing I can think to offer constructive critisism about would be the midsection with the clown doll, I didnt fully understand that. Other than that this was pretty good, well done.
The storyline is pretty good. I liked the twist at the end too. The overall plot is interesting... The editing is a little cheesy for my liking at points.
As been said,the acting and the script let it down a little. It all seems really forced and very unnatural. It actually put me off the plot a bit.
The wound at the end could have done with some fake blood too, although i thought the actual wound was done well, considering.
On the whole, pretty decent, well done!
1960skitten 1 year ago
Good storyline and editing, not very good acting/script. Could tell the actor was just reading from a script at times (especially the interview) Overall, not bad!
EveryonesGottaDie 2 years ago
Hey, this is pretty good, its dramatic and sinister enough and it has an interesting back story, the parts were clear as well, the only thing I can think to offer constructive critisism about would be the midsection with the clown doll, I didnt fully understand that. Other than that this was pretty good, well done.
emzigale07 2 years ago