Two Different Worlds Collide [ch 1]

[mrscoolkid001]

i love it.

[gustafuhlmann]

this movie has a really interesting story line its amazing, i just watching it @ i watch movies 43 . c o m

[BurningUp4Nick916]

its really good =]

[thejustme4nowgirl]

i love this u r awesome. you should print it no joke.!!!!! ; ) it might b a gud book, thts how gud i think it is.

[sheeshkabobas]

That's a coincidence.

My name is Cassey, and i have a big brother.

His name is Mikel. (pronounced Michael)

Odd. But nice story! Sounds great.

[LittleAnnStar]

wow this sounds really coool

[GoHomeGANGSTA]

just luvin it aint gone outta me ed!! l ooooooool

[JonasBrotherGirl9]

luv it!!!

[cutierose1234]

ah! I'm hooked already!

Your an amazing writer, no joke!

[JonasQueenie]

cool cool :) way to rock the first chap!!!!

[dollarglamorous]

nice...............

[poly820]

haha "ive heard stories about california teens" you make us sound like unicorns or bigfoot or something!

[wishinonastar07]

i'm a california teen myself!

i just write it like that cuz i think its funny how people think we are like another creature hahaha

[bwachickawawa]

ITS SOOOOO GOOD! well ofcourse you already made some of the other chapters. is the guy with the big brown eyes one of the jo bros?

[punkflight]

ooooooo..this is the one that the questions were for, right? i cant wait!

[iLoveJoeJonas28]

LOVED IT! You can write just about anything and make it amazing.

[peacelovejonas505]

omj love it already!! more soon! =]

[happyhille]

Great job, loved it!

[jdlover63]

sounds like its gonna be great!!!

[elmolovesyou298]

I like it! Keep posting on youtube please!?!?!

[wishinonastar07]

this is a new series im starting...

its just a preview

[anggie6]

its nick i think

[iloveallthingsjonas]

drawing? your making people with no artistic ability in anything (singing, dancing, drawing or aka me!!) feel left out!!!

haha love it anyway!!

[musicoverdoseislove]

LOVE IT :D

it reminds me of the book Twilight

and twilight is awesome and your writing is incredable so that means the story is going to be FANTASTIC (im trying out some adjectives :P )

great job and i cant wait to read more :D

[nickjjbfan1]

it's awesome and dose it have a title i want to tell my friend alex about it and if i keep saying this story or some story she will kill me lol

[wishinonastar07]

um right now it doesnt lol

[storyteller600]

hey this sounds reallly interesting!! plz check out my first one and comment on if i shud continue it or not!!

[karabobara617]

very good job homie :)

i love it <3

[CpFreaks]

My names Cassie :PP lol Anyways....POST lol or ill eat u and is Joe famous in this? i didnt bother reading everybodys anwsers :PP hehe again POSTTTTTTT comment yo ass's ppl!!!

Pce,Luv,Jonas ~C~

[wishinonastar07]

no he's not gonna b famous in this

[luvbug12321]

egh its ok!! I mean I think its good definitly!! Just please keep posting WHo Knew!

[claudianyarko123]

I love iit!!

i really think that since she likes art it could start alot drama *evil smile*

and alot of good things :)

[jessibabybee94]

oh baby , shes an artist, and thats awesome, cuz i am too =D

love it so far

[LittleMissGggls500]

ooo!! i love it!!!!

[storyteller600]

plzzz post another!!!!!!

[jessluvshsm202]

oooooh i love it! i love all your stories!

[PeppermintDom]

This is AWESOME!

Such a cool story, you have to continue it!

And fast, please :)

[IdinaMenzel137]

ooo! she's an artist! cant wait for more! it sounds really good so far! I♥Joe Jonas!

[ohhsnap22]

it sounds amazing! cant wait to read the rest!

[Vanillabean727]

I can't wait

[jemilylover]

love it

[acoustichearts94]

ahhhh i lovw it!

i cant wait for next!!

ahhhh aweesome.

[miss2007dk]

IT'S REALLY GOOD! I LOOOOVE IT!

[PUSHlovesjobros]

WOW! it was really really good!!!

loved it all!

[MissAbbieF]

WOW !

POST SOON !

[50675]

i love it!!!!

cant wait till the next one!!!

[KrazyKindaKrushOnJB]

I

LOVE

IT!!!!!!!

you have to post soon!!!

[oxTheJonasBrothersxo]

omg cant wait for theh chapter!

[motoxchck4christ]

I'm so excited!!

I especially liked the... "Then I saw him." part!!

awesome can't wait!

[JonasDemiLove]

wow first rate view and comment yeya