Hey I am from the Usha Pravin Gandhi College Of Management, Mumbai, India..I really liked your film..We have an international short film making competition in our fest 'Aahan' coming up soon..Pls let me know if you are interested to participate..Waitin for your response!!
great story. the camera view/positions could of been better. most of all the girl could act. over all grate job keep it up. come check out my short clips. not all tat im just a beginner
hi Jason, very well produced. well done. If you need free original orchestral based music from me for future projects you're most welcome. check out my channel, paddycoolZ1. I have over 40 audios on the net right now on SoundLantern audio site. nO catch. just a mention in the credits. helps everyone you know. will send vid. response
good story, but work on your camera angles and such. i spotted a few jump cuts in the movie. remember, camera angles make it a whole lot more effective, as they tell a story on their own
From a student filmmaker to another. Your story was great up to the end. The ending was quite poor and too dramatic. Your other problem is cinematography and understanding where to put the camera. It was so confusing that my sense of where the camera should be almost got puzzled watching this film. I think you have talent to write but you need to learn alot more if your going to pursue this career.
This film is nothing short of fantastic. Ur are an amazing and gifted writer and film maker. U should be very proud of your work, it speaks to many people (in my opinion).
jason i can see why your film was so highly regarded at the film festival. I really felt that I could relate to the main character and how she felt when she knew that he was no longer hers, its a feeling of complete emptyness. Her heartache was displayed perfectly at the end when she crushed the rose in her hand and watched as the breeze took the crushed petals away. This was beautiful Jason you have alot of talent!!
cool short film
ingeewung 1 year ago
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Hey I am from the Usha Pravin Gandhi College Of Management, Mumbai, India..I really liked your film..We have an international short film making competition in our fest 'Aahan' coming up soon..Pls let me know if you are interested to participate..Waitin for your response!!
roshinishah 1 year ago
i just had an eyegasem !!
MUSwmwLEE 1 year ago
hey. well Done!
sudesh215 1 year ago
this movie proves that simple idea can go amazing with good direction!
chellya2004 2 years ago
I will continue Watching afterschool :)
BlissPerception 2 years ago
good till the end, the first 3 minutes of the film really delivered. The end was to bland
Clone56 2 years ago
This is top notch!
KnifeSoldier 2 years ago
great story. the camera view/positions could of been better. most of all the girl could act. over all grate job keep it up. come check out my short clips. not all tat im just a beginner
wh0imrea1 2 years ago
good composition but really the story built up to something and then ... nothing
nickaus711 2 years ago
how did this win a competition?
EagerEddie 2 years ago
That was fucking terrible. Could this film have been any more cliche?
torgosassistant 2 years ago
This is a fantastic film. Love the story
AbercrombieLaura 3 years ago
I thought the cinematography was amazing!
Was type of camera did you use to film?
Well done on such an amazing film
shilayli06 3 years ago
good stuff :)
you could add your video to one of those video contests, like yobi film
WhatYouGots 3 years ago
hi Jason, very well produced. well done. If you need free original orchestral based music from me for future projects you're most welcome. check out my channel, paddycoolZ1. I have over 40 audios on the net right now on SoundLantern audio site. nO catch. just a mention in the credits. helps everyone you know. will send vid. response
cheers, Padraic Lynch. Composer
paddycoolZ1 3 years ago
At least you try.
Great for a new film maker. Keep going.
arrshuu 3 years ago
i HATE the accents their using... no offense to anyone but seriously i just find it annoying
girlypowah 3 years ago
good story, but work on your camera angles and such. i spotted a few jump cuts in the movie. remember, camera angles make it a whole lot more effective, as they tell a story on their own
1337tut0rials 3 years ago
in the park after the fight,the music starts playing in the backround,i was sure she was going to break into song.
albequerqui 3 years ago
um. i didn't think it was very good at all... sorry
its just the story was a little bland and didn't warrant the epic ending. also the cinematography, lighting, and sound was pretty bad...
pfranks44 3 years ago
Very good, just needs less shaking. Bonus points for the Finland shirt!
kingcarcas1349 3 years ago
From a student filmmaker to another. Your story was great up to the end. The ending was quite poor and too dramatic. Your other problem is cinematography and understanding where to put the camera. It was so confusing that my sense of where the camera should be almost got puzzled watching this film. I think you have talent to write but you need to learn alot more if your going to pursue this career.
moahmmedmamdouh 3 years ago
This is exactly what I was thinking too. The story was great, but composition and cinematography weren't.
jp3553 3 years ago
i loved it!!
that was really good =]
florrrr20 3 years ago
This was really good. =]
Umm what is the name of the song at the end?
parrafilmsguy 3 years ago
this is a gun film!
very nicely done
keep it up dude!
SsmYLeebOi 3 years ago
i truly did't like it, it is just another love story.
danielitro1 3 years ago
I think it was a pretty good film film, but there were jump cuts and some shots could've been much better :P but keep going :D
pachumonia 3 years ago
it was an amazing production- however the acting did need some improvments.
belledaniel1 3 years ago
Good job, specially at the last shots, some though look a bit ¨quickly done¨. How long did the movie took you to make.
Great work globally
juliengobeilproulx 4 years ago
Absolutely fantastic. All the best for what will undoubtedly be a very succesful future.
*****
zaphod3099 4 years ago
This film is nothing short of fantastic. Ur are an amazing and gifted writer and film maker. U should be very proud of your work, it speaks to many people (in my opinion).
Much love Mikey xoxo
mikeyboi280 4 years ago
sexual panda this movie is so hot. and u r amazing, its beautiful and theres so much truth in it. love u
littlehostel 4 years ago
Truth in it?
Are you serious?
I think you need to re-review your view on sex.
Good start though.
andytheturnip 3 years ago
jase!!
wow. the whole time i have known you, you have been working on this video. im so proud of you, it's amazing CONGRATULATIONS!!!
keep it up james cameron and steven spielberg JUNIOR
trettson 4 years ago
jason i can see why your film was so highly regarded at the film festival. I really felt that I could relate to the main character and how she felt when she knew that he was no longer hers, its a feeling of complete emptyness. Her heartache was displayed perfectly at the end when she crushed the rose in her hand and watched as the breeze took the crushed petals away. This was beautiful Jason you have alot of talent!!
kyglies 4 years ago