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  • cool short film

  • i just had an eyegasem !!

  • hey. well Done!

  • this movie proves that simple idea can go amazing with good direction!

  • I will continue Watching afterschool :)

  • good till the end, the first 3 minutes of the film really delivered. The end was to bland

  • This is top notch!

  • great story. the camera view/positions could of been better. most of all the girl could act. over all grate job keep it up. come check out my short clips. not all tat im just a beginner

  • good composition but really the story built up to something and then ... nothing

  • how did this win a competition?

  • That was fucking terrible. Could this film have been any more cliche?

  • This is a fantastic film. Love the story

  • I thought the cinematography was amazing!

    Was type of camera did you use to film?

    Well done on such an amazing film

  • good stuff :)

    you could add your video to one of those video contests, like yobi film

  • hi Jason, very well produced. well done. If you need free original orchestral based music from me for future projects you're most welcome. check out my channel, paddycoolZ1. I have over 40 audios on the net right now on SoundLantern audio site. nO catch. just a mention in the credits. helps everyone you know. will send vid. response

    cheers, Padraic Lynch. Composer

  • At least you try.

    Great for a new film maker. Keep going.

  • i HATE the accents their using... no offense to anyone but seriously i just find it annoying

  • good story, but work on your camera angles and such. i spotted a few jump cuts in the movie. remember, camera angles make it a whole lot more effective, as they tell a story on their own

  • in the park after the fight,the music starts playing in the backround,i was sure she was going to break into song.

  • um. i didn't think it was very good at all... sorry

    its just the story was a little bland and didn't warrant the epic ending. also the cinematography, lighting, and sound was pretty bad...

  • Very good, just needs less shaking. Bonus points for the Finland shirt!

  • From a student filmmaker to another. Your story was great up to the end. The ending was quite poor and too dramatic. Your other problem is cinematography and understanding where to put the camera. It was so confusing that my sense of where the camera should be almost got puzzled watching this film. I think you have talent to write but you need to learn alot more if your going to pursue this career.

  • This is exactly what I was thinking too. The story was great, but composition and cinematography weren't.

  • i loved it!!

    that was really good =]

  • This was really good. =]

    Umm what is the name of the song at the end?

  • this is a gun film!

    very nicely done

    keep it up dude!

  • i truly did't like it, it is just another love story.

  • I think it was a pretty good film film, but there were jump cuts and some shots could've been much better :P but keep going :D

  • it was an amazing production- however the acting did need some improvments.

  • Good job, specially at the last shots, some though look a bit ¨quickly done¨. How long did the movie took you to make.

    Great work globally

  • Absolutely fantastic. All the best for what will undoubtedly be a very succesful future.

    *****

  • This film is nothing short of fantastic. Ur are an amazing and gifted writer and film maker. U should be very proud of your work, it speaks to many people (in my opinion).

    Much love Mikey xoxo

  • sexual panda this movie is so hot. and u r amazing, its beautiful and theres so much truth in it. love u

  • Truth in it?

    Are you serious?

    I think you need to re-review your view on sex.

    Good start though.

  • jase!!

    wow. the whole time i have known you, you have been working on this video. im so proud of you, it's amazing CONGRATULATIONS!!!

    keep it up james cameron and steven spielberg JUNIOR

  • jason i can see why your film was so highly regarded at the film festival. I really felt that I could relate to the main character and how she felt when she knew that he was no longer hers, its a feeling of complete emptyness. Her heartache was displayed perfectly at the end when she crushed the rose in her hand and watched as the breeze took the crushed petals away. This was beautiful Jason you have alot of talent!!

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